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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: arohiarsh16

woow...ending is totaly awesome...superb...amazing...
This part is so beautiful,emotional n heart touching...n i just loved it...
Every part of this story written
soo beautifully...n i'm going to miss this story...
N its true that...LOVE IS BEAUTIFUL...



Thank you so much Arohi🤗 Your name reminds me of KMH
Glad you liked the last part of this tale.
Aww...Thanks dear...

Loads of love
-Harshada
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Imashkara

Hey bestie...read both updates back to back...
Or ye kya kahani khatam...😲
I want more yaar... But this was really beautiful superb story, superb characters, superb dialogues and above all what a presentation...so emotional yet so amazing...I always says you are a fabulous writer 👏...my angel anika wo anikas lap shivaay ka sar ditto IB k shivika yaad aa gaye...so lovely anika's breakfast ya shivaay ki caring kya dekhu...Both are so cute...and then boom accident...you scared me...I thought phail gaya raita now what happened but thanks too you anika saved, and finally shivaay confess his feelings, happy ending...Sach main LOVE IS BEAUTIFUL, But beastie ek shikayat hai ishkaara nahi dikhe yaar...ButI love my shivika 🤗

How sweet and kind of you, you mention my name in thank you note...kya baat hai, aww yes I m Khushi sab k dill ki khushi agar me kisi k face pe smile na lau to kya fayda mere hone ka...it's enough for me yaar meri uch zyada hi tarif kar di and and this hug is for your sweet sister...

And this one only for her...hey dear this is for you...

Samet kar le jao apne...,joothe waado ke adhure kisse,
Agali Mohobbat main...,fir tumhe iss ki zarurat padegi...

AND this is for you beastie...

Tum kya jaano ki meri nazar main kya ho TUM !!
Khuda se darta hu verna keh deta khuda ho TUM !!!



My dear Khushi🤗🤗 You simply made my whole month with this wonderful feedback.

Yup...Story ka The End But I am planning to continue😳 But little later.

Thank you so very much Khushi. I am super glad that you enjoyed reading this story.
This story was meant to be emotional dear. Such a pleasure to hear you liked everything in this. Means a lot.

You are making me☺️ now.
Kaash...IB ke shivika bhi vapas aa jaye...

Nahi Nahi...how can I let Raita to spread on their beautiful life😳
She has to live, for him, for them.

He did realize his feelings earlier also but he was scared to accept but when he saw her close to death, it just simply vanished his every earlier fear and he ended up confessing his love for her.

Haina? Love is indeed beautiful.

This story never focussed on Ishkara dear but if I continue this, I'll try to include them too.

Of course, How could I miss you in that? No not at all. You deserve everything, every praise.

I will surely pass on your hug to her🤗

She loved both of Sharies😳

But I loved the second one more Haaye...I have becoming crazy crazy fan of your shayries...

Loads of love
-Harshada


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Fantastic parts Harshada😃

lovely ending👏



Thank you so much Nonie🤗🤗
Glad you liked the ending the dear...

Loads of love
-Harshada
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: MorningStar01

I have no words to describe what I feel right now 😳 you have once again managed to take me on an emotional role coaster ride 😵 I thought it would be a good idea to read this before I go to bed but now sleep is far way 😭

Dear Shan'e🤗🤗
Oops😭 Did this snatch your good sleep? I apologize if it did.
But thank you so much dear... I am so glad you could relate to this story so much, emotionally.




Part 8... I love that Anika is giving Shivaay time to confess his love for her 😳 it shows that she really does love him and wants him to confess out of love for her and not because he feels like he has to because she did...I feel Shivaay's pain of not being able to accept that is actually really someone who loves him truly 😒 I don't blame him for having such thought&doubts because afterall his parents didn't want him and his gf only used him, so it's normal for him to be apprehensive...They fed each other&& he slept on her lap ❤️ the level of comfort with each other is so amazing. The last convo between them just warmed my heart 😭 those words are 100% true.



She understands him and the incidents happened with him in his life. So she well knows that its difficult for him to trust and love anyone so soon.
For someone, who has seen nothing but betrayals in life, will ofcourse think ten times before doing anything.

Glad you liked their moments together dear.
They no doubt share some differently amazing comfort level which is lovely to see.

Aww...thanks dear. I am so happy that you liked that last part.





Part 9...OMW, just OMW 😭 you went from giving us a cute scene to an even cuter breakfast making scene, then to a fun one and them *boom* all cards are on the table 😲 I had such conflicting feelings while reading this (I feel bipolar 🤣) ... Shivaay covering his chest with his hands, hahaha as if that's gonna help 🤣 I totally pictured him with a "cat got caught drinking the milk" look &&& Awww Anika felt shy 😳 ... his concern for her when she got cut and her thought about her knowing he loves her was on point ...



Should I take it as a complement??🤗❤️☺️
I always say that I am a seeker of simple things and sweet and cute gestures so they just jump in my every story.

You are embarrassing me now☺️ I generally don't go on writing romance so I was quite unsure while writing that.

Sorry I can't say much about this😆🤣 * going to hide somewhere *



That part where she yelled at him to stop and he braked reminded me of the epi' where Shivaay was going to drop Anika at home and she told him he missed the turn 🤣 ... he knows her so well already that he knew she wouldn't let him rest without having that ice cream ... Annnddd then you went and gave me. Mini heart attack (I literally gasped so loud that my mamma came into my room and asked if I'm ok 🤣) but damn everything that followed after, I felt like I was right there with Shivaay and for a moment I honestly did believe that she didn't make it but then I also relaxed like Shivaay 😵 Finally!!!! He confessed his feelings for her that whole paragraph of him having his self talk outside her room gave me such feels 😭😳 ...Even when she's in so much pain, he was, is and will always be put first, that right there is love ❤️ Love Is Beautiful.


Is is so? I have not watched IB from start so I quite don't know about the one you are talking.
Of course...Ice cream is love, isnt it?


Oh my god... I apologize😭
Thats hilarious🤣

Thats a big complement I must say if you could visualize the entire happenings.
I feel it was worth writing this story.
She has to make it, for him, for them. Glad you liked his monologue there and confession.
I quite wrote it real fast. Glad it came out well.



Thank uUu for a khidkitod story Harshada 👏 You gave us a beautiful ending. Roller coaster of emotions, definitely but still beautiful just like their love. 😳 Please please please give us an epilogue, maybe one that shows us how they're living after a couple of years && also how Ish'Kara turned out


Thank you so much for being a part of this journey and making it beautiful.
Glad you liked the ending here.
This is indeed a heavily emotional stuff.
I am not an epilogue person but I sure have plans to continue this. Everyone wana see Ishkara😆 But their part ended right there😳 I'll soon post it.



Awww Sweetheart, thank you for the mention 😳 I'm truly honoured &&& yes I am new here but it never felt like that because you were always so amazing&welcoming 🤗 I'm sad that this story is over Buhhht I have the links to your other stories so ima go read those and you can expect a whole lot more of commenting 😆 (ok ima stop with this essay of a comment now before it ends up longer than your story *face palms* 🤣


Loads of hugs&love
Shan'e



Of course, How could I miss you... You are one sweetheart who made my days with your amazing and lovely comments😳🤗
You are too sweet dear.
Don't be sad, this will have couple of more chapters.
I always await for your comment dear so will be waiting on other stories.

Aww...you are so cute. Thanks a ton for this amazing comment dear.



Loads of love

Harshada




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Posted: 8 years ago

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Thank uUu for the beautiful reply to my ramblings 😳 ... I simply love the way you write and detail each scene, it's the detail and emotion you put in it that allows me to watch it all happen in my head ... I have to admit was alil heartbroken when you ended this one because I had gotten really used to having this story as my go to story when I got irritated with the current epi's of IB 😭 buht all good things must come to an end I will be eagerly waiting for the next episodes you have as always 😆.


P.S. Even without the romance romance, the story was still so romantic with the subtle cute scenes you wrote 😳

Thank uUu for making my nights after watching the episodes much more bearable with this lovely stories of yours 🤗🤗 I'm gonna be seen a lot on your other stories now that this one is ending 🤣


I did see you started a new story & I'm hell glad 👏 congratulations on that Harshada 🤗



Love&Hugs
-Shan'e

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Posted: 8 years ago
beautiful story...i have no words to describe the feeling...every chapter was delicately woven with emotions and feelings...while reading one could feel the pain or love in the story...this was a classic story...everyday i used to wait for your update...you should surely write more stories...you know how to portray human feelings and that can be clearly understood by reading this story..you should write more...
loved this story ...i can keep on praising this forever yaar...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: MorningStar01




Thank uUu for the beautiful reply to my ramblings 😳 ... I simply love the way you write and detail each scene, it's the detail and emotion you put in it that allows me to watch it all happen in my head ... I have to admit was alil heartbroken when you ended this one because I had gotten really used to having this story as my go to story when I got irritated with the current epi's of IB 😭 buht all good things must come to an end I will be eagerly waiting for the next episodes you have as always 😆.


P.S. Even without the romance romance, the story was still so romantic with the subtle cute scenes you wrote 😳

Thank uUu for making my nights after watching the episodes much more bearable with this lovely stories of yours 🤗🤗 I'm gonna be seen a lot on your other stories now that this one is ending 🤣


I did see you started a new story & I'm hell glad 👏 congratulations on that Harshada 🤗



Love&Hugs
-Shan'e



You may call it rambling, but that's a beautiful...absolutely beautiful feedback for me.
You guys have no idea that you make my days with this.
I am here to seek some happiness and peace which my life has somewhere snatched from me and its so wonderful that I genuinely smile reading the lovely feedbacks of you all.
I simply feel blessed to have such sweet readers like you.
Heartbroken? My god😲 Please don't be. I am here to fix your heart again. I won't let your heart break ever❤️ I'll add some more chapters to this story, I promise.

Honestly, I am not much comfortable in reading or writing Romantic stuff. I can write cheesy, sweet, cute, emotional but when it comes to passionate or romantic, I simply cant

Thank you for making my days with your beautiful comments. Surely, I will be waiting to hear from you on my other works, as and when time permits of course😳

Yup new story...and thats quite light and humorous. I hope you'll like it. Thank you so much

Loads of love
-Harshada




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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteariya

superb chapter
finally shivay got someone who love care for him 😃
who can do anything for him even put her life at risk
anika almost died while saving shivay 😭
shivay was almost broke seeing anika almost dead 💔
if anika died at that moment shivay wouldn't have survive 🥺
but thank god this time god didn't take happiness from shivay's life 😃
finally shivay confess his love to anika ❤️




Thank you so much dear.

Glad you liked it
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Kusum_s

Loved d last part... it waz mixture of emotional and beautiful... brilliantly written !!!!!!!!!



Thanks a lot dear.

Glad you liked the ending

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