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Posted: 8 years ago
woow...ending is totaly awesome...superb...amazing...
This part is so beautiful,emotional n heart touching...n i just loved it...
Every part of this story written
soo beautifully...n i'm going to miss this story...
N its true that...LOVE IS BEAUTIFUL...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey beastie...read both updates back to back...
Or ye kya kahani khatam...😲
I want more yaar... But this was really beautiful superb story, superb characters, superb dialogues and above all what a presentation...so emotional yet so amazing...I always says you are a fabulous writer 👏...my angel anika wo anikas lap shivaay ka sar ditto IB k shivika yaad aa gaye...so lovely anika's breakfast ya shivaay ki caring kya dekhu...Both are so cute...and then boom accident...you scared me...I thought phail gaya raita now what happened but thanks too you anika saved, and finally shivaay confess his feelings, happy ending...Sach main LOVE IS BEAUTIFUL, But beastie ek shikayat hai ishkaara nahi dikhe yaar...ButI love my shivika 🤗

How sweet and kind of you, you mention my name in thank you note...kya baat hai, aww yes I m Khushi sab k dill ki khushi agar me kisi k face pe smile na lau to kya fayda mere hone ka...it's enough for me yaar meri uch zyada hi tarif kar di and and this hug is for your sweet sister...

And this one only for her...hey dear this is for you...

Samet kar le jao apne...,joothe waado ke adhure kisse,
Agali Mohobbat main...,fir tumhe iss ki zarurat padegi...

AND this is for you beastie...

Tum kya jaano ki meri nazar main kya ho TUM !!
Khuda se darta hu verna keh deta khuda ho TUM !!!

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Posted: 8 years ago
Fantastic parts Harshada😃
lovely ending👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
I have no words to describe what I feel right now 😳 you have once again managed to take me on an emotional role coaster ride 😵 I thought it would be a good idea to read this before I go to bed but now sleep is far way 😭

Part 8... I love that Anika is giving Shivaay time to confess his love for her 😳 it shows that she really does love him and wants him to confess out of love for her and not because he feels like he has to because she did...I feel Shivaay's pain of not being able to accept that is actually really someone who loves him truly 😒 I don't blame him for having such thought&doubts because afterall his parents didn't want him and his gf only used him, so it's normal for him to be apprehensive...They fed each other&& he slept on her lap ❤️ the level of comfort with each other is so amazing. The last convo between them just warmed my heart 😭 those words are 100% true.



Part 9...OMW, just OMW 😭 you went from giving us a cute scene to an even cuter breakfast making scene, then to a fun one and them *boom* all cards are on the table 😲 I had such conflicting feelings while reading this (I feel bipolar 🤣) ... Shivaay covering his chest with his hands, hahaha as if that's gonna help 🤣 I totally pictured him with a "cat got caught drinking the milk" look &&& Awww Anika felt shy 😳 ... his concern for her when she got cut and her thought about her knowing he loves her was on point ... That part where she yelled at him to stop and he braked reminded me of the epi' where Shivaay was going to drop Anika at home and she told him he missed the turn 🤣 ... he knows her so well already that he knew she wouldn't let him rest without having that ice cream ... Annnddd then you went and gave me. Mini heart attack (I literally gasped so loud that my mamma came into my room and asked if I'm ok 🤣) but damn everything that followed after, I felt like I was right there with Shivaay and for a moment I honestly did believe that she didn't make it but then I also relaxed like Shivaay 😵 Finally!!!! He confessed his feelings for her that whole paragraph of him having his self talk outside her room gave me such feels 😭😳 ...Even when she's in so much pain, he was, is and will always be put first, that right there is love ❤️ Love Is Beautiful.



Thank uUu for a khidkitod story Harshada 👏 You gave us a beautiful ending. Roller coaster of emotions, definitely but still beautiful just like their love. 😳 Please please please give us an epilogue, maybe one that shows us how they're living after a couple of years && also how Ish'Kara turned out



Awww Sweetheart, thank you for the mention 😳 I'm truly honoured &&& yes I am new here but it never felt like that because you were always so amazing&welcoming 🤗 I'm sad that this story is over Buhhht I have the links to your other stories so ima go read those and you can expect a whole lot more of commenting 😆 (ok ima stop with this essay of a comment now before it ends up longer than your story *face palms* 🤣



Loads of hugs&love
Shan'e
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Posted: 8 years ago
superb chapter
finally shivay got someone who love care for him 😃
who can do anything for him even put her life at risk
anika almost died while saving shivay 😭
shivay was almost broke seeing anika almost dead 💔
if anika died at that moment shivay wouldn't have survive 🥺
but thank god this time god didn't take happiness from shivay's life 😃
finally shivay confess his love to anika ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
Loved d last part... it waz mixture of emotional and beautiful... brilliantly written !!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
love is indeed beautiful.
loved it
please do write more
bye sumi
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nohsin10

Wow it's wonderful 👏👏And thanks for pm😳



Thank you 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey,
Firstly I wanted to apologise, I have been extremely rude in that i have been reading your SS without commenting 😭 I do hope you can overlook this fatal flaw of mine!😃BUT coming to your story, MINDBLOWING 👏🤪 it was intense and absolutely adorable, you are an amazing writer and I cannot seem to find words grand enough to praise you with!! I loved how you wrote Shivaay as a vulnerable character with Anika consoling him instead of vice versa 😳it was beautifully penned, the emotions honestly pervaded through my mobile screen😆THANK YOU for giving such amazing chapters and being so consistent in updating the story! I LOVED IT ALL!! 🤗

Love
-Sam
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lucky_princess

Harshuu u nailed it once again!

What a warmth filled update.
Pure, sacred, selfless, concern, and care filled love. The love Of Anika will heal Shivaay's heart! The heart that is wounded badly and repeatedly.. will be cured by Anika's selfless love.
I was soo moved with this update.
U r really awesome in this genre. Sometimes life's lessons r hard.. but turn out beautiful in future. This was simply heartwarming and filled with innocence.
Life is fulfiled when one gets a partner to whom r tears hurt the most and our smile values the most.
Nd Anika is the medicine..the love needed in Shivaay's life, To make it the best and the most beautiful.
Anika's concern touched my heart deeply.
U once again bought tears in my eyes.
U showed that love is not just physical.. it is A sacred bond that completes each other in every aspect.. a relation for lifetime which is shared by both to share the happiness nd pain.
I am in love wid this update.
U have once again left me speechless.
Harshu... There are many unspoken words that u have delivered through this update. And those wrds have created a special place for u in my heart.
Continue sooon...

Love Sharmi.



Dear Sharmi🤗🤗
Thank you so very much for this amazing comment dear.😳
I am so glad this was a light, cuddly update for you.

I know I am little late in replying for which I really want to apologize. I am quite busy now with something else. I hope you won't mind😳

I am so thrilled to know you liked it so much...
Really? Thanks dear. I thought writing sweet and cute stuff is my comfort zone but recently realized writing emotional ones also make me happy.

I simply don't know what to say❤️ You are so really kind Sharmi.
Despite of knowing the fact that this is something which I have penned down long ago so it isn't a well written piece but your comment made me feel awesome.

And I am in love with you...

And you left me at loss of words...

Thanks a ton Sharmi Sweetheart... You are always special for me if to consider that🤗

Loads of love
-Harshada


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