~OS~The Beginning Of Forever~ - Page 4

Originally posted by: surbhijain

Amazingly written 👏

Originally posted by: Radhika Shah

Great os..

superb OS
loll anika's dare made shivika couple 😉
their first meeting was interesting
both couldn't help for falling in love & now got married 😃

Originally posted by: cuteariya

superb OS
loll anika's dare made shivika couple 😉
their first meeting was interesting
both couldn't help for falling in love & now got married 😃

AWESOME

Awesome one.. .
Read it twice yaar
Geez.. I just loved it.. How u potrayed the oast scene actually theor first meet and then u showed the dare thing and after that u showed their present scene and that oatent word of anika "tadibaaz"..hehehe.. .and the jallinesa of anika.. .i mean the way she talked.. .i was imagining all that... .wow.. that was an awesome start dear.. ..too good to be first one.. .loved it totally.. Do write more.. .and yeah dont forget to pmmee.. ..
Will be waiting!

Originally posted by: sakksshii

awesome👏

Originally posted by: ..Armor_ishra..

Awesome one.. .
Read it twice yaar
Geez.. I just loved it.. How u potrayed the oast scene actually theor first meet and then u showed the dare thing and after that u showed their present scene and that oatent word of anika "tadibaaz"..hehehe.. .and the jallinesa of anika.. .i mean the way she talked.. .i was imagining all that... .wow.. that was an awesome start dear.. ..too good to be first one.. .loved it totally.. Do write more.. .and yeah dont forget to pmmee.. ..
Will be waiting!

awww...this is so cute n romantic...just loved it...

I just now read your first ever os and its totally amazing.