~OS~The Beginning Of Forever~ - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: surbhijain

Amazingly written 👏


Thanks Surbhi..!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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superb OS
loll anika's dare made shivika couple 😉
their first meeting was interesting
both couldn't help for falling in love & now got married 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: cuteariya

superb OS
loll anika's dare made shivika couple 😉
their first meeting was interesting
both couldn't help for falling in love & now got married 😃


Thanks Ariya..!😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
AWESOME
NICE TWIST TO STORY IN THE END
DO WRITE MORE STORIES IN THE FUTURE.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36
Awesome one.. .
Read it twice yaar
Geez.. I just loved it.. How u potrayed the oast scene actually theor first meet and then u showed the dare thing and after that u showed their present scene and that oatent word of anika "tadibaaz"..hehehe.. .and the jallinesa of anika.. .i mean the way she talked.. .i was imagining all that... .wow.. that was an awesome start dear.. ..too good to be first one.. .loved it totally.. Do write more.. .and yeah dont forget to pmmee.. ..
Will be waiting!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37

Thanks 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..Armor_ishra..

Awesome one.. .
Read it twice yaar
Geez.. I just loved it.. How u potrayed the oast scene actually theor first meet and then u showed the dare thing and after that u showed their present scene and that oatent word of anika "tadibaaz"..hehehe.. .and the jallinesa of anika.. .i mean the way she talked.. .i was imagining all that... .wow.. that was an awesome start dear.. ..too good to be first one.. .loved it totally.. Do write more.. .and yeah dont forget to pmmee.. ..
Will be waiting!


Woah...
Thanks for the beautiful review.!
Thanks. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
awww...this is so cute n romantic...just loved it...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I just now read your first ever os and its totally amazing.
Wow!! How could you write so good. This one is lovely

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