Crash and Burn ( A PriVeer OS) - Page 5

Originally posted by: -happilyunknown

This got me hooked🤪 i mean i was already hooked but this made me more into the couple than ever. Lovely as always my dear twerps🤗

Originally posted by: BookWormV

Twerp! I completely and absolutely adore you for writing this! My Randhawa fangirl-ing heart is all over the moon.! I loved this OS! It had humor, romance and the requisite amount of cliche! ❤️

PriVeer are taking us with a storm! Crash and Burn, indeed!

Xoxo
V

Originally posted by: -Sarcy-

Twerps, you're such a darling, treating us to all this PriVeer love! 🤗 The way you write these two is beautiful. Without getting into romantic detail, you make us fall for your characters, helping us get hooked to them that much more. This was such wonderful shot, with the right intensity of emotions and feels. Absolutely loved it!

Do write more! <3

Originally posted by: Tunasnah

It's intense ...and not catch n fall and eye lock one yet priveer chemistry is great in it .⭐️...I like prinku panic attack and ACP concern for her ...also like library scene ...I want cvs to show it on screen.

Originally posted by: attubaby

oho Twer darling🤗 🤗 🤗

cant really believe that I jz read that ACP was sakshaat standing in Prinku's college crashing and burning in the chance encounter😃. U did it and how beautifully👏 👏.

absolutely loved it. thnks for writing it😳

loved how u described the happy goody good mood of Prinku while she was goin to college meant to be spoilt later for obvious reasons- guilty conscience. so she bumped into him two times. this Prinku definitely carries some wit- with stalker like u around, who needs personal attendant😆...Good that she gave it it back to ACP. she remembers the cologne scent too. hmm..seems like she does not run into things and people that frequently unlike the opinion of ACP😆 coz if she does, it wud hv been hard for her to remember the fragrance of that cologne.

ACP jz crushed that burning cigarette for Prinku ...hw gud it wud b na if smthing lyk u hv written z shown on d show too...it perfectly matches with their pair- Indifferent yet connected by destiny

Loved the quote in the last though i believe that coincidences form destiny rather than destiny forming particular events/co-incidents😳.

great work again👏

Originally posted by: ChrisinS

This is so not done Twerps. You're turning me into a romantic and I can't stop!

Good lord, is the ACP hot or what? That smirk on his face that irks Prinku to no end, and his soft comment on the people she bumps into. I loved the quotation from Ophelia and the way Prinku feels ACP around her hands. ARG! *Fans herself* So CUTE!

The best part about this OS was the battle between their innerselves. Prinku battling with Omkara's words on the ACP being her enemy while the ACP berating himself on what his sister will think of his actions.

It's a classical tale of enemies falling in love. I liked that the ending wasn't of them falling in love but rather questioning one another's motives.

It was a wonderful OS. I'm in love with you for writing a PriVeer OS when we didn't get any scenes of them.

Originally posted by: -GrilledCheese-

wonderfully written!

Originally posted by: emerald39

I love this OS!

Just the right amount of intensity from ACP, and I love that Priyanka is annoyed with his mannerisms. And of course, the way you have written the undeniable pull they have towards each other. I especially adore the way he was worried for her.

You always encapsulate, perfectly, the way they are drawn to each other but still have a battle within themselves. I hope you keep writing more PriVeer stories! <3