Ch16(pt1): Naa aadi na ant hai uska:ishkara FF (pg34, 05/04) - Page 6

Originally posted by: shwetaphadke

It's jst awesome...loved it...plz update soon.

.. waiting...

Originally posted by: krits67

It was really gr8

Nd pihu ka character bhi kafi acha h

I knw difficult hoga aise austic character ko likhna

But hats off nyc work

Continue soon

Originally posted by: INSHRA4U

amazing...beautifully written read all parts in one go...loved it continue soon...

Update was really very nice...😃😃

Om is busy in his thoughts & he is pretty surprised that Mr.Sareen & Ishana don't find him guilty...bichara Om...kitna pareshaan hai...😭😔

So Riddhima is here...she finally broke up with Om...& there was pain in her eyes...😔

Thnkxxx so much Appy for giving this Obros moment...I am so happy that you kept my request...😃😃

Rudra got to know the truth about Om & drugs...he was hurt terribly...yet he behaved maturely...he has to be strong even he feels like breaking apart...😔😭

"For the first time he realised that had Rudra been on a serious side, their lives would miss so much humour- how important were his stupid acts which had lightened the mood always."--- This line was soo deep & sooo true...Rudra really adds the fun & cheer element to the Oberois' life amidst all troubles...perfectly written...👏👍🏼

The Obros moment was blissful...in the midst of tension & mental torture, Rudra just managed so well to make Om smile even if it was a sad one...😊

An autistic character...Pihu...#nayi soch to introduce her...& I guess Pihu must have some significant role to play in your story...you did really good by studying autism...that will help you to give the shades in Pihu's character...Good going...👍🏼

ShivRu are such support systems of Om that he just can't even imagine to fall...👏😃

Poor Om...having nightmares of that incident...😭

ACP was right in his own place...can't blame him, who has lost his sister...😔

Shikha ji is ACP's lawyer...hope she put up a tough fight against Mr.Sareen so that the story enter it's next interesting level...👏

The last line before the 'Note' was superb...👍🏼

Originally posted by: Roselind

Update was really very nice...😃😃

Om is busy in his thoughts & he is pretty surprised that Mr.Sareen & Ishana don't find him guilty...bichara Om...kitna pareshaan hai...😭😔

So Riddhima is here...she finally broke up with Om...& there was pain in her eyes...😔

Thnkxxx so much Appy for giving this Obros moment...I am so happy that you kept my request...😃😃

Rudra got to know the truth about Om & drugs...he was hurt terribly...yet he behaved maturely...he has to be strong even he feels like breaking apart...😔😭

"For the first time he realised that had Rudra been on a serious side, their lives would miss so much humour- how important were his stupid acts which had lightened the mood always."--- This line was soo deep & sooo true...Rudra really adds the fun & cheer element to the Oberois' life amidst all troubles...perfectly written...👏👍🏼

The Obros moment was blissful...in the midst of tension & mental torture, Rudra just managed so well to make Om smile even if it was a sad one...😊

An autistic character...Pihu...#nayi soch to introduce her...& I guess Pihu must have some significant role to play in your story...you did really good by studying autism...that will help you to give the shades in Pihu's character...Good going...👍🏼

ShivRu are such support systems of Om that he just can't even imagine to fall...👏😃

Poor Om...having nightmares of that incident...😭

ACP was right in his own place...can't blame him, who has lost his sister...😔

Shikha ji is ACP's lawyer...hope she put up a tough fight against Mr.Sareen so that the story enter it's next interesting level...👏

The last line before the 'Note' was superb...👍🏼

Originally posted by: krits67

It was really gr8

Nd pihu ka character bhi kafi acha h

I knw difficult hoga aise austic character ko likhna

But hats off nyc work

Continue soon

Originally posted by: StarletBeauty

loved the update... sorry for late comment... my exams were going on...😊