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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: YeHoKyaRahaHai
First of all, thank you so much for your kind words! Much appreciated:)

Loved the opening chapter, and The Broken Wall is such an apt title! I am guessing this is exactly how Shivaay will be once she leaves from the mansion.

Is this just a oneshot or is there more to come?😊

Oh my god, you commented! I am such a fan of your posts and the fact that you just read my work and commented on it just feels...Wow !

Let me take a deep breath !

Okay , so now you guys deserve to be appreciated 👏so it's my pleasure actually 😃

Thank you so much and the title just seemed to fit with the Shivaay when Annika leaves then his defenses will come down crashing and we already notice cracks in The Great Wall Of Shivaay Singh Oberoi so hen Annika will actually leave I can just guess what will happen...

Well this was supposed to be a one shot but I am planning to write some more 😆 all thanks to you guys 👏

This comment actually means a lot ! So thank you so much !

Love

Lis 😊

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CaffeineMuggle

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Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: samara_raichand
nice os

Thanks a lot 😊

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CaffeineMuggle

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Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: -happilyunknown
That was so beautifully written <3 I could feel the emptiness that he is going through.please do write more on them :)

Aww thank you ❤️ Glad I am able to bring out his feelings and they could reach to you ! This is actually what I wanted to do 😛 And yes I will surely write more on them maybe even continue this 😊

Again thanks a lot for commenting 😊

Love

Lis😊

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CaffeineMuggle

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Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: ArhiIPKKND
Oh wow this is so good...very real...hope u continue...❤️

Oh Thank you 😊 ! Really glad you liked it 😃 And yes I will continue it very soon.

All thanks to you guys 😳

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CaffeineMuggle

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Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
Interesting start
Please continue
Looking forward to read more.

Thank you for your precious comment 😊

Yes I will continue soon !

Glad you liked it😃

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Pritha Roy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

First of all .. THANK YOU DARLING for Liking my posts and such kind words And mentioning my name among the brilliant writers is kind of heavy appreciation for me.. This means A LOT really.. Thank you 🥱 ..

And and and... Girl this doesn't look like your First try to writing.. 👏 not at all.. Wonderful piece .. I think You should go ahead with the MAYBE and turn it into an FF.. I'll be waiting.. 😉 btw... you are writing about the Shivaay we have been waiting to see... Perfect plot chosen and the title is perfect match to it... 👍🏼

Keep up the good work !

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Pritha Roy

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Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

If possible do pm me when you update 😊😊

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CaffeineMuggle

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Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: A.C.
Hi there,
First of all thank you very much for adding me into the list of such amazing writers - even though I am sure I don't deserve it, but thank you nonetheless!
And secondly, this was awesome! You should definitely write more! I was able to feel both, Shivaay's hidden feelings and the apparent denial in the first part. As well as his aching desperation and pain in the second one! Very well written, poignantly so. No melodrama at all but simply a pathos of very real pain!
Bravo my friends and do write more!
I want to know where Anika went and why she left four days ago. SO do think about continuing! Love this!

Love,
A.C.

Res 😳 😃 😊

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jarir2010

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Its absolutely beautiful 👏 .its superb dear.but one request dont end like tht.
Give us some more plz.yeh dil mange more 😃 .
Plz continue soon.
U r a good writer.so take guldasta,not chameli or lady gaga from me. ⭐️
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