AnShi/ShivIka Story:Koi Toh Samjhao Inhe! Updated ch.7 on Page 13

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Koi Toh Samjhao Inhe!

This story takes place after blame from Tej and Shakti has been removed and Shivaay doesn't need to marry Tia anymore so he breaks up with her. Shivaay and Anika are still being oblivious of their feelings for each other and neither wants to confess, atleast not first. Cue entry of a cousin of the Oberoi brothers who quickly becomes a close friend of Anika, much to the chagrin of Shivaay.😉 But first, Anika needs a job. How do you think Shivaay will make sure Anika stays close to him?🤔

This is written in a third person POV but as we are used to seeing the expressions of these wonderful actors and can understand their feelings I decided to put in inputs of the characters' inner thoughts wherever I felt necessary.


Index:-

Part1: Given below.

Part2:Page 3

Part3:Page 4

Part4:Page 7

Part5:Page 9


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"Arre aa rahi hu baba!" Anika screamed at the person incessantly ringing the door bell, while quickly towelling off her wet hair.

Pata nhi kaun hai. Subah subah aa jaate hai besabre log.-A


She briskly walked over to the door, opening it to reveal none other than The Shivaay Singh Oberoi.

"Aap? Yahan?" Anika asked, the only indication of her happiness being the slight upward curving of her lips. She had lost almost all hope of seeing this man ever again and had decided to be content with that fact. Now, he was right infront of her and she didn't know what to say or do.

"Mujhe andar nhi bulaogi?" Shivaay said with a humerous look at Anika's surprise.

Anika unshered him inside quickly and offered Shivaay water which he refused to almost at once. His fear still amused Anika to no end.

They both sat down on opposite ends of the room, Shivaay with a little apprehension, remembering his previous experience with the super glue chair.

Awkward silence ensued with neither maintaining eye contact or speaking up first when all of a sudden they spoke up at once.

"Tum..."

"Aap..."

"Aap boliye," Anika offered quickly.

"Voh, main... I mean... Dadi was quite happy with your work, so she wanted you to join back as our employee." Shivaay spoke that with slight hesitation.

"Kyun? Iss baar kaun shaadi kar raha hai?" Anika spoke with her cute expression of confusion etched on her face.

Cute?! What am I thinking? -S


"Nhi! Shaadi ke liye nhi. Voh actually tumne Rakhi par bhi bahut achi decorations ki thi and you organised everything perfectly so we wanted to hire you full time and make you our family event organiser." Shivaay said without taking a break.

"Oh." Anika was shocked but also pleasantly surprised. She had been looking for a job for the past three days unsuccessfully and it was starting to worry her now. She should've known however that Billu ji would stoop in to save the day, as per usual.

Billuji aur mujhe bachaenge?Mujhe kyun bachaenge?! Main yeh kya soch rahi hu?Anika, yeh sabh tere raat ko deer se sone ki vajah se

ho raha hain, bass. Aaj se jaldi sona shuru. -A


"Anika?" Shivvay clicked his fingers infront of Anika's face to bring her out of her daze.

"Huh? Haan! Manzoor!" Anika exclaimed, not wanting to let this opportunity go.

"Toh tum mere saath reh logi?" Shivaay blurted. He had expected the fiesty lady sitting before him to put up a fight. But alas, she had once again surprised him.

"Kya?!" Anika shrieked.

"Mera matlab, humare ghar mein. Tum raat takh toh vaise bhi kaam karti hi ho.Sahil ke saath bhi reh paogi iss tarah, kyunki voh obviously tumhare saath hi aaega. Ghar mein sabhko tum pasand ho toh kissi ko koi problem bhi nhi hogi. Balki dadi, Priyanka, Saumya aur OmRu bhi bahut khush honge." Shivaay kept on explaining, hoping against hope that Anika would agree.

Anika thought for a second. Even though she would have jumped at the opportunity, she had to think of Sahil too. They would finally get away from buaji and Sahil could have some peace. She herself could stay with him and provide him with the upbringing he deserved.
"Theek hai," Anika said, finally agreeing to his proposal.

"Okay toh tum pack karlo. Main tumhe kal pick karne aa jaunga." Shivaay got up from his seat and left the house after goodbyes.

Acha hua ki yeh ziddi ladki maan gayi. Ghar mein sabh isske jaane ki vajah se itne sad the. Rudra toh khana takh mushkil se khaa raha hai. Vaise joh ladka Ganpati bappa ke har saal jaane se itna dukhi ho sakta hai, uska uski didi ke jaane se kya haal hua hoga sabh soch hi sakte hai. I don't understand how this girl managed to win over everybody's hearts in such a small amount of time -S


Part2:Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Good one please do continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice writing dear

i hope this happens after the cd fiasco
shivay asks anika to work for him in his company and then will finally get some office scenes

anika n sahil could may stay in an outhouse or stay where they are- i'll be happy either way as long as there is some interaction
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nyc...
Anika is gonna stay wid them..thats absolutely awesome..
So ShivIka r gonna get more closer to each other..
Do continue..
Finally Tia is gone frm Shivaay's life
Love Sharmi
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Shivaay wants her to be around him? So damn cute! Tum mere sath reh logi? Hilarious! And she agrees too ;) good one! Update soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Eee i cant wait to see a jealous nd possessive shivayy
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Shivaay and his excuses...He is so cute...
Nice start...Please update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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That was really cute.
I enjoyed reading it. Please continue soon.
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Awww! This was nice! Really enjoyed it! I wouldn't mind Shivay paying her another visit at her home in the show as well!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start dear
Eagerly waiting ur next update

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