SSO V/S SVR TASHN-E- ISHQ - AN OS completed

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Hello friends.

Suddenly one idea clik on my mind after watching SSO n SVR . so I write a stupid os on them. Plz bear it



Its 15 days since SVR n mallika return to their love Paradise from oberai mansion.
Today mallika invite all youngster of oberai house to her pre wadding tour till goa .its a tour of 1 day n 1 night.

After a lot of convince from om rudra mallika n specially anika shivaye agree to go to goa . tia is not coming with them bcoz she is busy in her reki seminar.

So rana's take a mini bus. Oberai join them.

Total members are SVR mallika , shivika ,om , rudra , priyanka , somya . N two three cousins of SVR n mallika.

All are enjoying n singing . specially anika rudra Somya n cousins. Om is busy with riddima on phone.actually he is irritating by her stupid imposed idea n choices. Shivay is busy on tab doing emailing with his client. SVR n mallika busy in their personal talk.

Ani - mallika svr ye thik bat nahi aapne hume invite kiya hai or aap dono khud mai hi busy hai.

Mal - sorry anika. Ok to bolo kya kare.

Rud - dumbshrass khelte hai.

All clap.

Rudra snatch om phone n ask riddima to talk later.om give him thankful look.

Game is about to start

SVR - you enjoy mai thoda kam kar leta hu.

Mal - its not right Siddharth hum yaha enjoy karne aaye hai business karne nahi.

SVR - to fir ye bat sabko samjhni chahiye.

Shivaye hear him but ignore.

Mal - anika tum shivay se bat karo.

Ani - kya mai .na baba na. Bagarbille ko kam k bich disturb kiya to meri khair nahi.

Mal - matlab anika tum shivay se darti ho.

Ani - kya mai or SSO se darti hu. Usne to meri chameli bhi na dare.

All look at her except om rudra somya n priyanka.

Ani - chameli meri chappal .kya batau kitni bafadar hai ye humesha sath deti hai. Yaha tak ki sso bhi isse darte hai.

All smile at her talk.

Anika reach at last seat where SSO is sitting n doing some work.

Ani - SSO sab aapko khelne k liye bula rahe hai.

SSO - anika .I am not child Jo game khelunga .or waise bhi mere pas karne ko bahut kuch accha hai.

Ani - agar aap nahi aaye to humari team haar jayegi SVR ki team se.

Sso first time look at her after hearing SVR name.anika know she hit bulls eye

Ani - to aap chahte hai hum svr se har jaye.

SSO - no I am ready.

N he join them n they start playing. SVR n SSO make it ground of war n taunt eachother. So game dismissed. They sing n take some food n sleep( its sleeper bus ) .

Next morning all reach goa.

After getting freash all meet n take breakfast.

All are chatting . n siddarth n mallika busy in their romance .n SVR taunt SSO over him being alone at romantic city goa.

Shivay MV ye Siddharth vikram rana khud ko samjhta kya hai. Ise to mai maja chakha ke rahunga .or bata dunga ki shivaye Singh oberai kisi ko bhi complex de sakta hai.

After sometime

SSO - mallika mujhe na dadi k liye gift lena hai unka birthday aa raha hai. Or tum to shopping mai ek dum perfect ho .to mere sath chalo.

Mal - ok mai Siddharth ko bhi bol deti hu.

SSO - are tumhe uske liye gift nahi lena surprise

Mal - wow shivay not bad. Good idea .mai bag lekar or Siddharth ko bol kar aati hu.

She left n SSO smrik

SSO - ab pata chalega tumhe SVR ki shivay ko taunt karna kya hota hai.

15 min later

SVR room

SVR - ye shivay sing oberai khud ko samjhta kya hai .mallika ko le gaya shopping karne. I know ye usne Jan kar kiya hai .mujhe jealous karne k liye.

He hit his leg on floor

SVR - ohh yes .so Mr SSO khud ko bahut smart samjhte ho .meri kamjori ka fayda uthaya or use le gaye.or sochte ho tumhari koi kamjori nahi.mai kar bhi kya sakta hu. Par tum khud bhi nahi jante ki tumhari bhi ek kamjori hai. Ab aayega maja .I am coming SSO with your ssoo .

He smrik n call anika

Ani - Mr rana aapne mujhe q call kiya. Kuch khas bat hai

SVR - haa anika. Actually mujhe mallika k liye ek surprise gift lena hai to kya aap meri help karengi. Akhir aap bhi use acche se janne lagi hai.

Ani - aww .so sweet of you .bilkul meri rasmalai ki tarah. Par mallika.

SVR - wo to SSO k sath kahi gayi hai so let's go.

Ani - OK

They left. SVR order his hacker to track mallika no n they reach same mall.

Ani - wow kitna beautiful hai na Mr rana.

SVR - ab aap meri help kar rahi ho .mallika ki dost ho to meri dost banogi.

Ani - mmm. Okie. Dost

SVR - to fir aap mujhe sid bulayiye.mere dost yahi bulate hai mujhe

Ani - par mai kaise aapko

SVR - ohh come on anika hum dost hai.

Ani - OK.

SVR n anika did a lot of shopping. Mallika n SSO look at them.laughing n giving each other hi- fi. Mallika smile n shivaye feel jealous.

Shi mutter - ye anika bhi na kisi k bhi sath hasne bolne lag jati hai.

Mal - shivay kahi kuch jal raha hai.

Shi - kya jal raha hai. Mujhe koi fark nahi padta.ab chalo


Mal - OK

N she laught at SSO jealous face.

At exit of mall four of them come face to face.

SVR - hay mallika SSO tum bhi yaha.good . mai or anika mom k liye gift lene aye the.

Mal - good. So kaisi rahi shopping.

Shivay is drinking cold coffee n pretend that he is not interested but he is listening all carefully

SVR - I enjoyed a lot . or tum anu

Ani - mujhe bhi bahut maja aya sid.

N both hi- fi n SSO split his coffee. All look at them but he show his poker face n left.anika n mallika laugh n SVR smrik.

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.mallika n shivay sit in car. N SVR n annika in their. SVR car overtake SSO car .but his car get punchered.

SSO stop his car n taunt him.

SSO - to kuch logon ki tarah unki car bhi punher ho gayi.

SVR glare him

SSO - waise agar tum mangoge to mai tumhe lift de sakta hu. But you have to ask for this with please.

Svr - no thanks .mai or anu restaurant ja rahe hai. Akhir isne meri help ki to treat to banti hi hai .chalo anu.

Ani - par

SSO hold her hand n drag till restaurant which is exactly in front of them..n order watchman to send his car for repair.

Shi get jealous n

SSO -mallika help to tumne bhi ki hai meri to mai bhi tumhe treat dunga .chalo.

N he hold her hand n drag her .

Svr - mai order de kar aata hu.

SSO - mai bhi.

Both left

Mallika come to anika.

ani - mallika aapko nahi lagta ye sso or sid kuch jyada hi ladte hai.

Mal - sahi kaha tumne .par inka ye jhagda bahut purana hai.or dekho ye log bich mai hume ghaseet rahe hai.

Ani - to kuch karna hoga.

Mal - par kya??

Ani told her something

Mal - are you sure.

Ani - are itna sure to mai tab bhi nahi thi jab champa ka color change karna tha.

Mal - champa ? Color?

Ani - are champa . meri scooty.

Malika give her disbelief look n both execute their plan.

Both SVR n SSO come.

Both together - are dono kaha chali gayi.

They ask waiter n gate keeper but no one know. Both get tensed n start searching mallika n annika.

Its 1/2 hour gone but they didn't find both n get tensed. They forget their ego n talk

SSO - pata nahi dono kaha honge.

SVR - mallika ne subah se kuch nahi khaya wo itni bhuk bardash nahi kar sakti.

SSO - or annika to yaha nayi hai. Aaj take Mumbai k bahar nahi gayi.

Both - hume jald se jald unhe dhundna hoga.

Both sit in shivay car n he drive

Sso - ab kaha chale

SVR - redwin plaza waha ka pizza mallika ko pasand hai shayd wahi ho. Damm phone bhi nahi lag raha dono ka.

SSO - bechari anika kahi kho na gayi ho.

They reach plazza n see malika n anika are not there. They show people their pic. Yes shivay has anika pic

One man - haa un dono ko humne waha dekha .us taraf.

Both show look at man hand n run like manic.

It's a beach anika n mallika are watching sea shore.

SVR run n hug millika like he get his life back.anika is looking at them admiringly n next sec someone pull her in tight hug. She take some sec to register what is happening. She recognize that touch. Its shivay's .

Her heart beat raise due to his closeness.

Shi cup her face n ask.

Shi - tum thik ho na anika .tumhe kuch hua to nahi

His face show many emotion.

Mal - shivay for kind of your information mai bhi gayab thi mujh se bhi mil lo

Shivay left her. Poor anika she is still in shock.SVR n SSO look at both .both are alright.

SVR - what the hell is this .koi is tarah bina batay jata hai.

SSO - isse or kya ummed ki ja sakti hai . iske liye har cheej prank hai. Or ummed bhi kya ki ja sakti hai aisi ladki se .jiske na khoon ka pata na khandan ka.

He felt sharp on his cheek.

Ani - just shut up mr shivay sing oberai. Just shut up. Mai kuch bolti nahi iska matlab ye nahi ki aap mere khandan par jayenge. Insan apni personality khud develop karte hai na ki unka khandan ya khoon. Qki kuch log itne acche khandan mai janam lekar bhi basic manners nahi seekh pate.

She run from there.

Mal - really shivay its so disgusting .

N she too left behind anika. Shivay stand there n feel someone put hand on his shoulder.he look at him .its SVR

SVR - shivay agar usse pyar karte ho to man lo. Q khud ko ye yakeen dilane k liye ki tumhe koi fark nahi padta uska dil tod diya. Saccha pyar ek bar milta hai.jab wo dur ho jata hai kaisa lagta hai mai dekh chuka hu. Or socho agar jo kuch pal pehle tak hume dar tha unhe kho dene ka wo sach ho jata to .to kya karte hum.pucho khud se kya use kho k jee sakte ho or agar jawab na aaye to Rok lo use isse pehle ki tum use humesha k liye kho do.

SSO look at SVR he assure him by his eyes. SSO hug him n run from there.

He reach hotel n see .malika is knocking anika door. She see shivay n glare him

Shi - look mallika abhi kuch nahi. Mujhe anika se bat karni hai. Or isse jyada imp kuch or nahi.

Mal - to finally the great shivay Singh oberai ko apne dil ki awaj sunai de hi gayi.

Shi - hmm .finally

Mal - par tumne Jo kiya hai na uske bad tumhe khub mehnat karni hogi.wo darwaja nahi khol rahi.

SVR bring duplicate key of anika room from reception. N give it to SSO n leave with mallika.

Shivay enter anika room .she is crying.she hit him by throwing pillow on him without turning her face.

Ani - ab q aye hai .chale jaiye yaha se

Shi - tumhe kaise pata chala mai hu.

He smrik n she fumble

Ani - kaha na jaiye yaha se

Shi - or nahi gaya to

She get up

Ani - thik hai mai hi chalk jati hu.

He hold her hand n twist her hand to her back. Both are facing each other. She is crying. Its second time he see her crying n it hurt him very much.he leave her n hold his ears

Shi - I am sorry

She look at him shocked.

Shi - I am sorry .tum janti ho na mai kuch bhi bol jata hu .I know kabhi kabhi kuch jyadi hi. Tabhi to tum mujhe wo bulati ho kya ba ba

Ani - baghar bills

Shi - haa wahi. Kya tum last bar is kanji aankho wale bagar bille ko maf kar sakti ho.

She hit his chest by her hand.

Ani - humesha aise karte hai pehle khub dard dete hai fir kuch aisa kar dete hai ki mai aapse naraj nahi ho pati.par har bar aisa nahi chalega mai nahi manner wali

She continue hitting him n talking. He hold her hand by one hand n by one hand's finger he put on her lips .

Shi - I love you anika.

She looked at him shocked n no word is coming from her mouth

Shi - tum janti ho I am not good with word . plz isi se kam chala lo

No response

Shi - kuch to bolo anika

No response again

Shi - plz anika kuch to bolo

Ani - mujhe chimti katiye

Shi - kya

Ani - pinch me

He pinch her

Ani - ahh. Ye kya kiya

Shi - Maine kya kiya tumhi ne to kaha that

Ani - par

Shi - par war bad mai pehle mera ans do

Ani - mera khandan nahi nam nahi.

Shi - mai apna nam or khandan laya hu apne sath tumhare liye

Ani - mai aapki tarah hi class nahi

Shi - tum jaisi bhi ho perfect ho

Ani - aapko roz mere utpatang word sunne padenge

Shi - manjoor hai..

Ani - tia..or gharwale

Shi - mai sab dekh lunga. Tum jawab do

Ani - I love you too.

She confess n both hug.

At night

All are doing bonefire party alongside sea.all are doing fun..shivika come hand in hand.

Omru priyaka somya look at them shocked. Om ask shi by eyes he nod.

On hug him n anika n congratulate them.

Rud - om congratulation q .or ye Bhaiya or didi ek sath kaise.

Om - Didi nahi Bhabhi pagle

What - rudy prinku n somya shout . n hug anika. Rudra dance like mad.

Shivay go to svr n thanks him .he too congratulate him .n both hug.

All look at both shocked.n put their hand on their mouth.

Mallika too hug anika n cong her.

Mal - aakhir humara plan kam kar hi gaya.

Both look at SVR n SSO.

SVR - Waise nice pair but mujhse or mallika se jyada accha nahi

SSO - no we look made for each other together.

N they start their verbal fight.all move their head in disbelief.


Ani/mal - shivay/Siddharth. Hum ja rahe hai fir se

Both glare them

SSO/SVR - hum to bas aise hi batien kar rahe the.

Both make puppy face. Ani/mal laugh n all join them .svr n SSO too start laughing with them .n all shared group hug.

The end.


So that's it..

Hope its worthy or reading.

Thanku..


Edited by sur1911 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Jaldi update Karo second part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hayee jallu singh oberoi svr dushmani me hi sahi shivikako pass la raha hain... wowww... plz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wah wah meri jaan kia baat hai. love u. its awsm. update soonish jaldi jaldi
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome ow loved it!!! It was so cute and romantic!!! Loved the jealous shivaay cute cute cute
Thanks for the pm!!!
Edited by Asad08 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Rest part of os updated.
Thanks for reply
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Posted: 9 years ago
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that was awesome...i loved it...finally Shivay accepted his love for Anika...Finally...;-) :-)

Do write an Epilogue to this Os...Will be waiting for it :-)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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That was super cute
Nice job
Thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Love the jealousy and the cuteness

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