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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

It happens only with few writers and stories that you forget to exhale until the last sentence, word and fulstop has been read through ... you my darling are one of those blessed people. The power of shiv, the helpless attraction Annika feels towards him...and all the terrible times they'be been through...felt as if I tasted all those in the span of few well constructed paras. Awesomely done!

I hope you will forgive my absence in the coming days...my exams are here. Will be waiting to hear from you on my updates though . So happy to have you back here.

Love,

Sakura

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twerping

@twerping

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

This was absolutely breathtakingly fantastic! The passion,the intensity, the heat! Ouff! You have most definitely left us on the lurch,craving for more! This was superb! Also looking forward to you updating the FF! Dying to know what happens next there!

Thanks so much for the PM! This OS was a well-chosen bedtime story in my case and hopefully will now fill my dreams! ☺️

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floral

@floral

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

amazing os

loved it

aww poor anika

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wafa.M

@wafa.M

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

that was sad...felt bad for both of...them :-(

I hope you would continue...this want to read more ;-)

Anyways it was beautifully written :-)

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vidya29

@vidya29

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

*Res*

Please don't be miffed with me! I'll complete all pending reviews and this one.I get it that it must be frustrating to see all these res'.

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strangerthings

@strangerthings

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

such an intense n amazing update wud like to read more about what really happened. keep it up.

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ArhiIPKKND

@ArhiIPKKND

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Wow...i marvel at ur choice of words n writing style...very engrossing...wish it wasnt an os...curious to find out more of this slighly dark story of urs...❤️

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cuteariya

@cuteariya

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

I hate this kind of girl who can't even protect their self respect

Let other to have power on them yuck

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kirim

@kirim

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Sheer brilliant , I loved it
I think you should continue it
It's gonna be breathtaking to read more
Please continue it

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chorabali

@YeojaNextDoor

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Awesome, wonderful, beautiful, mindblowing... This is a gem!!!!! Totally loved it!!!!
Can u plz continue this? Wud love to kmw what happens after this.. 😊

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