TS: shivika/ishkara/rumya (shivika & ishkara part updated)

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hlw peeps
i wanted to write a three shots on shivika, ishkara & rumya
In each part one couple story are included
in my story obros r not brothers
they r not obrois, rich brat
this story simply based on couple
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part 1- shivika- Birthday gift
part 2- ishkara- salty tea
part 3- rumya- let's run
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try to update as soon as possible
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SHIVIKA ~ BIRTHDAY GIFT
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Anika: mujhe samundar bahut pacand hain. ye khuli asnan, nila nila pani, thandi thani hawa sab kitne sunadar hain. par wo abhi tak aye kyu nahi.
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she is waiting her anonymous frnd whom she met fb 6 months ago
gradually she fall in love with him yet she never saw his single pic
today is her birthday & finally she is able to meet her love
cold breeze blew & her hair fall on her face
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suddenly a little boy called her
boy: didi ye ful apke liye bheja hain. inme se apko jo pacand aye wo lene bola
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since her childhood anika is a very naughty girl
she alwayz do that which told her not to do
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anika pick all the flowers & just then a number flashes in her mobile
she recevied the call, before he could say anything the caller said
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caller: mujhe tumhe sari flower dena tha
aur mujhe pata tha tum sari flower tbhi loge jab tumko koyi ek lene bola jaye
anika: acca mere wareme itna kaise jante ho
caller: mujhe tumhare wareme sab pata hain
anika: aur ye meri number kaise mila tumhe maine to kbhi nahi dia tumhe
caller: kaha na mujhe sab pata tumhare wareme wo sabhi jo tumhe bhi nahi pata
anika: jassos ho kya jo sab mallom hain aur ye phone pe kyu bat kar rahe ho
samne kyu nahi ate sakal acci nahi hain kya
caller: sakal ekdm hero jaisa hain
anika: acca to samne aao
caller: have patient
anika: agar tumhe samne nahi ana hain na to main ja rahi hoon
aise chuppan chupai khelne ka shukh bahi hain mujhe
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she is ready to go
suddenly roses rain started on her
anika turn & see a boy bend down on his knee holding a heart shape ballon
she knows the boy
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anika (told herself): are ye to wohi kanji ankho wala doctor hain. Dr. shivaye
yehi uski anonymous frnd hain 😳
shivaye: happy birthday anika, i love u , will u marry me
anika(happily): yes. aur ye mera abtak ka birthday gift tha
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they look each other lovingly
& going to kiss
thats moment alarm rings loudly
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anika wake up from sleep
see herself in room
& see the nurse who was sitting in couch looking at her in not interested as she see it everyday
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anika(herself): gosh ye sapna thi, anika tu na uss kanji ankho wale k chakkar me ekdin pagal ho jayegi, par bade hi suhana sapna thi. but main bahut gussa hu ajj mera birthday hain, at least ajj k din to kanji ankho wale mere liye kuch aisa romantic kar sakta tha par unko romance tode ate unko to bas apne kanje ankho se bas gussa karna ata hain. ruko abhi jake class leti hu unke
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(anika is admitted this cancer hospital, 6 months ago. she is in her last stage. the day she is admitted she met Dr. shivaye. she is totally fida on his blue eyes. since the say she irritted him calling him kanji ankho wala,baby, honey, sweeto, janu, janejigar etc. etc. she is going to die so she never felt bad or embrass for doincharacter deela kam.
for her logic marne se pahele kuch tufani karke marte hain na)
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bt today she was really angry ki her kanji ankho wala even not wish her happy birth day. kya pata ye uski ankhri birthday ho
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she walk towards his cabin. everybody ward boy, nurse look at her
sabko pata hain anika k deewangi k wareme
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anika: ajj to khair nahi unka
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when she reached his cabin she find no one
she called him bt nobody answered
she searched him whole hospital bt couldn't find him
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then she listen to conversation of some ward boy that Dr shivaye yesterday night met with an accident. he was injured badly & spot dead
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anika shocked at first
then came to her room, lying on her bed & slowly told herself
anika: kanji ankho wala tum mujhe aise ullu banake cale gaye. kya socha picha chutega itna jaldu mujhe tumhara. koyi bat nahi main bhi to bahut jaldi arahi hu uoar. phir dekhna jannat me agar tumhara life jahannum na banaya na to main bhi tumhara anika nahi
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anika smiled herself proudly
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Part 1- pg 1
part 2~ pg 2
part 3-pg 2
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All I can say is that I LOVED it❤️...
For once, I don't have the right words to describe a piece of work😳
It's just so emotionally beautiful👏
Finally they are going to be one
Even if they are not on this planet...
It's amazing dear😃
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Originally posted by: ...Angels...

All I can say is that I LOVED it❤️...

For once, I don't have the right words to describe a piece of work😳
It's just so emotionally beautiful👏
Finally they are going to be one
Even if they are not on this planet...
It's amazing dear😃


thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
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ISKARA: SALTY TEA
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library, canteen, classroom pe srif aur srif ishana k najar me ane ka himmatwala koshis chodke om ekdm simple type k ladke hain, simple dress up, simple hair style, moti frame k googles.
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dusri taraf ishana khubsurt, fashionable, hot, college diva.
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ishana k piche handsome, rich 100 100 ladko k vir me om ekdm normal hain
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phir bhi ekdin bahut himmat jutake ishana ko jake,
om: mere sath 1 cup chai piyogi
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om k aise himmatwala offer pe ishana shocked jarur hua phir pata nahi kia sochke,
ishana: chalo
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dono amne samne baitha hain
om k heart beat marathon k race pe daur raha, muh me jaise dahi jam gaya, chai k peyale pe ek ship dete hi
om: waiter mujhko namak do
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ishana(surpisingly): tum chai pe nanak lete ho
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om:ha, mere janam namkin pani yani samundar k kinare ek saher pe hua hain, namkin chai pete waqt mujhe mera saher, mere apno k yad ata haun
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ishana chupchap om k bat sunne k bad kaha
ishana: pata hain main na kbhi samudar nahi dekhi, meri ghar hair paharme. asman uha pe karib se mahsoos kia jati hain
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phir dheere dheere samundar aur pahar k kahani kareeb hone laga, phir shadi, ghar basana aur akhir me buda budi
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on apni akhri shas lete waqt ishana k hat pe ek letter deke bola main jane k bad ise kholna.
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om k janeke bad ishana letter khuli
uspe likha tha
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"namak deke chai main kbhi nahi peeta tha, tumhare samne ghabrahat k wajese cini k badle nanak bol dia. aur phir apni beukufi chupane k liye wo sare kahani bol dia. issi liye 45 sal roj tumhari hat k bana namkin chai peea.
pata hain tumari hat k namkin chai bahut meetha hain"
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kuchdin bad ishana ek padosi k ghar gayi uha use chai peene dia gya.
ishana: mujhe toda namak dijiye
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padosi(surprisingly): app chai pe namak leti hain
ishana: ha namkin chai bahut meetha hain
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RUMYA: LET'S RUN
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Soumya: what r u doing here rudra?
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rudra: om my god. u r so beautiful. pahele kbhi notice hi nahi kia
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soumya: shut up rudra. itne rat ko aise chor k jaise mere room pe kyu aye ho. agar koyi dekh lega to kya sochega?
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rudra: aur kya sochega? sochega main tera hot, handsome, sexy ek lauta bf hu aur tu mera choti si, cute si little gf hain. hahahahaha
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soumya: r u crazy? ye sab tumko funny lag raha hain. tum samaj rahe ho meri shadi hone ja raha hain
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rudra: ye chal na bhagte hain. plz
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soumya: hehehe very bad joke. jao yahase. warna
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rudra: warna kya ha warna kya? kia kar sakti hain tu?
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soumya: ek thappad marke tumhare battisa tod dungi battamiz. nikal yahase
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rudra: (pull her towards him) ye ladki apne pura life bas underworld k bahen banke gujar dia. kbhi haqse mera collar pakadke to bol nahi payi "tuje mujse pyar karna hoga matlab pyar karna hoga. mujhe aur kuch nahi pata" jo bat bolni cahiye kbhi wo to bol nahi paya aur ajj uss paisewala takle se shadi kar rahi hain.
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soumya: ha kar rahi hu. meri marzi main takla, andha, bahera jisse marzi usse shadi karu tumhe kyu mirchi lag raha? tum kbhi khudko pucha ki jiss k sath bachpan se jawani tak bade huye ho uske sath tum apna buddapan bhi dekhte ho kya? kya tum mujse pyar kia hain kbhi? (crying)
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rudra: nahi pyar nahi karta hu tujse. tu bahut khubsurat hain. aur mujhe tu cahiye.
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soumya: (irritately) ha abhi line me aya hain. bas dunia k sare khubsurat ladki ko cahiye tumko. bagal me 100 ladki aur hat me sarab k bottle leke ghumne wala thakri kahika
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rudra: shut up. mujhe bas tu srif aur srif tu cahiye.
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soumya: ( kuch der chup rahene k bad) chalo bhagte hain
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rudra: are are pagal ho gayi kya. main to aise hu masti kar rahi thi nothing serious yar
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soumya: (angrily holding his collar) tum mujhe leke bhag raha hain ya nahi
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rudra: ( faking fear) bapre main to dar gaya. chal chal bhagte hain
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