My Dream Track SS: JSSO part 2 tick tick tick tick pg 2

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Part 1 : Dream Boy

Priyanka "Anika tum batao tumhara dream boy key baarey mey."

Anika "Kyaa ? Mujhey nahee pata ?"

Priyanka "Batao na kaisey nahen pata zaroor pata hoga tum baataaney sey mana kar rahen hon."

Anika " Mainey kabheee iss baarey mey socha nahen ."

Soumya "Tho abh socho na. Bathao tumhey kaisey admee chahiye." stealing glances on SSO.

Anika " Umm chey feet hona chaahiyen ,acchey naukri honey chahiyen hard working aur aur filmy han aur khadoos shakal bilkul naheen aur hummesha hasstey baath karney wala ."

Soumya bass "Han paison aur logon ka value patha hona chahiyen ." she said looking at SSO.

Anika said lost deeply in her memories of childhood "Rishton ka value patha hona chahiyen ."

Soumya "Wah Anika dee wah .Aap tho aadha filmy hon."

Anika "Tumney poocha thaa."

Soumya " Aapney sirf aapkey liyen kuch nahen poocha I mean aapsey kaisey hona chahiyen romantic,"

Anika "Kyaa bakwas hain abh."

Dadi came same time enquiring about some list.

Anika "Daadi mainey food catering sey baath kiyan hain aur kuch items humey hotel sey aayengey aur bakee farm house mey hee banana accha hoga isskiyen mainey aada list hee diya baakee main personally handle karoongi."

Dadi "Decorations ? "

Anika "Decoration abh thak suru naheen huin bass sabh items ready hain aur farmhouse bhijwaaya gaya hain mujhey wahan jaana hain aur poora karna hoga ."

Dadi "Tum kaisey jaa rahen hun .Do din mey pooja hain."

Anika "Main aaj raat ko nikalney waaley hoon mainey ek gaadi arrange karwayeee hain ussmey chalee jaaongi."

Shivaye "Gaadi kisskeee hain."

Anika "Babloo.Merey padoos mey rehtey hain who transport business kartha hain who Pune jaa rahan hain tho mainey bhee gaadi book kardee half price mey."

Shivaye "Dadi mujhey bhee Pune jaana hain wahan arrangements poorey karney hum donon jaa saktey hain."

Anika "Main chalee jaaongi .Mujhey kaam bhee hain."

Anika left taking a call speaking of some arrangements.

Anika "Han Babloo chey bajeey nikalengey .Sahil ??"

Anika "Theek hain main tumhaarey ghar bhejoongi .Han donon acchey dost hain."

Anika "Han tum yaheen aajaon yahen sey nikaltey hain ."

Anika "Han sabh gaana daalna . Nahen tho tumney dekha mujhey time nahen mila mujhey bhee dekhnaa thaa. Sahil pooch rahan thaa .Abh nahen hoga naa CD aaney key baad . Sach mey tumhaarey pass hain . Nahen abh nahen main ghar aaney key baad dekhoongi Sahil key saath.

She came face to face with SSO.

SSO "Plan mey koi change nahen hogee .Yup sharp 6'O clock .By road. Yup Poorey guest house .I said their wont be change in plan . Yeh pooja bahuth important hain whole family would be there. No but and if's security bhadaon contact them keep how many ever you want .Their should'nt be a compromise on security."

OM "Shivaye are you sure you want to go by road ,when you know she know our plan .She will definitely try to strike. "

Shivaye " I can't trust anyone else for security mujhey khud check karnaa hee hoga. "

OM "Risking your own ."

Shivaye "Kuch nahen hoga .She can try but she will get exposed .Yeh ek chance hai to avoid the disaster."

Om "I don't think you should be going alone .Main bhee saath mey aaon."

Shivaye "If you come with me who will see responsibilities here.Who will see about others ."

Om "Rudra hain,dad hain sabh hain bass hum donon jaa rahen hain."

Rudra "No teenon jaa rahen hain."

Shivaye tried to convince them but it's a failed attempt.

Soumya "Anika dee aapkey lien koi aaya hain ."

Anika "Han shaayad Babloo hoga .Tho main chaltee hun Daadi ko bata dena ."

Soumya "Aapka luggage?"

Anika "Who ghar sey hee aarahan hain. Main ney Sahil ko bathaaya tha ussney pack kiyya hain."

She went out to notice Oberoi's convoy is ready too with three brothers and security vehicles and different from the pack an Innova standing far.

Babloo "Anikaji main yahan hoon." Said a six feet man waving to her.

Anika "Tumhaara gaadi kahan hain."

Babloo "Who Innova ."

Anika "Tumney bola tumhaarey pass shaayad doosree thee."

Babloo "Han usska chota accident huan .Mainey dost sey yeh gaadi mangwayee hain repair honey tak."

Anika "Sahil ?'

Babloo "Han who ghar mey hain maa khyaal rakhegi aur Dhruv bhee hain na ."

Babloo "Chaley."

They started the journey and just crossed the city when the Obroi convey stopped their vehicle in middle with three brothers waiting outside.

Anika got down to enquire what happened .

Anika "Kyaa huan tum loog yahan kyon khadey hon."

OM "Shivay ka plan hain ."

Rudra "Hum bhee aapkey saath aayengey."

Anika "Kyon."

Shivay "We sure have our reasons waisey bhee tumhaara journey ka paisey bhee company ley rahen hain so we can sure accompany this car."

Shivaye got into the innova without saying a word.

Anika was still struck .

Anika "Baake gadiyan bhee saath chalengey."

Om "NO Convoy doosri direction mey chalegi distraction key liyen."

Rudra "Hum issmey."

Babloo looked at Anika to confirmation she just signed him to let go .

She got in the front while brothers sat behind.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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My name is SAKIV or else hidden in that name.
I am New to ISHQBAAZ family but not last.
I have been introduced to this serial by Nichuss dee.

My Dream track are the name of series which I write .I have a bad reputation of not completing every series I write but I attempt again and again to finish but stops in middle.

I am generally a slaughterer of serious tracks and I end them up turning them into comedy.
I wrote many stories in YHM when I used to follow that.

Now I am following only Ishqbaaz but didn't see many episodes but read written updates of all episodes and watched very few.
In Love with SHIVKA for now.

My style is just spinoff from series won't change the start just continues with same story line but just spinoff with my convinence.
ThANKING YOU.


By the way any idea what is full form of JSSO.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mr.PsychoTech

My name is SAKIV or else hidden in that name.

I am New to ISHQBAAZ family but not last.
I have been introduced to this serial by Nichuss dee.

My Dream track are the name of series which I write .I have a bad reputation of not completing every series I write but I attempt again and again to finish but stops in middle.

I am generally a slaughterer of serious tracks and I end them up turning them into comedy.
I wrote many stories in YHM when I used to follow that.

Now I am following only Ishqbaaz but didn't see many episodes but read written updates of all episodes and watched very few.
In Love with SHIVKA for now.

My style is just spinoff from series won't change the start just continues with same story line but just spinoff with my convinence.
ThANKING YOU.


By the way any idea what is full form of JSSO.

Hey nice story and idea luvd it do continue soon nd possible plz pm me
I guess JSSO means jealous shivaay singh oberoi
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mr.PsychoTech

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font color="#0000ff">My name is SAKIV or else hidden in that name.</font>
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<font color="#0000ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">I am New to ISHQBAAZ family but not last.</font>
<font color="#0000ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">I have been introduced to this serial by Nichuss dee.</font>

<font color="#0000ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">My Dream track are the name of series which I write .I have a bad reputation of not completing every series I write but I attempt again and again to finish but stops in middle.</font>

<font color="#0000ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">I am generally a slaughterer of serious tracks and I end them up turning them into comedy.</font>
<font color="#0000ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">I wrote many stories in YHM when I used to follow that.</font>

<font color="#0000ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Now I am following only Ishqbaaz but didn't see many episodes but read written updates of all episodes and watched very few.</font>
<font color="#0000ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">In Love with SHIVKA for now.</font>

<font color="#0000ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">My style is just spinoff from series won't change the start just continues with same story line but just spinoff with my convinence.</font>
<font color="#0000ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">ThANKING YOU.</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">

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<font color="#0000ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">By the way any idea what is full form of JSSO.</font>




Hi
Nice to read the story. I so wanted to see JSSO.
Thnx for this dream sequence.
Update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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waahhh its interesting...
shivaay om n ru with anu... maaza ayegaaa...

waiting for next part


*** bhaai... will kill u if u stop this in mid... finish it soon :P
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PART 2: TICK ...TICK ...TICK ...TICK


Babloo "Kyaa sir bahaar aayen hon yahan bhee bandh rehnaa chahtey hon khulee hawan shahar mey naheen miltey .Pollution sey bahaar hain."

Babloo replied as Shivaay asked Babloo to switch on AC.

Anika "Han naa. Hummesha wohi bandh jindagee aur karma ."

Shivaye "Will you plz just shut up.I just asked to switch on AC not for some environment lecture."

Om "Ussmey bhee kyaa wrong hain they justv stated their opinion."

Om "Feel the fresh air .Refresh hojaaogey."

Shivaye was just silent .Then Rudra continued.

Rudra "Tumhaara height kyaa hain."

Babloo "chey key kuch oopar hun sir kyun."

Rudra "Wow Chey fot tick."

Babloo "Kyaa sir kyaa baath kar rahen hon."

Om "Kuch nahen who aisey hee kuch ulta seedha baath kartha rehtha hain."

Om "Tumhaari gaadi hain ?"

Babloo "Nahne sir doost kee hain,ussney mera gaadi thok dee thee mainey usska liya mera waala repair honey tak."

Om "Tum waisey kartey kyaa hon. "

Babloo "Bahuth kartha hun sir ."

Babloo "Hummarey area mey ek garage hain bikes key liyen aur Pehley Auto chalaatha thaa fir lone lekar OLA mey cab chalaarahan thaa."

Shivaye "Pune kyon jaarahen hon."

Babloo "Koi pehchaan waley ney kahan kuch gaadi bhej rahen hain puraney sastey mey dekhney jaa rahan hun koi kaam key ho saktey hain."

Shivaye "Second hand."

Babloo "Nahen sir ,kuch dass saal puraaney ten haath change huyen hain abh tak.Suna condition mey hain kuch repair karna hain aur kuch change .Bss Gaddi ek dum first class."

Om "Bahuth planning hain bhaai aagey ."

Babloo "Merey teen laundey hain driving aathee hain.OLA ya UBER mey gaadi rent dey doonga fir auto garage bhee kholna hain."

Shivayen "Kitney din mey hoga."

Babloo "Kyaa sir mazaak kar rahen hon garage kholney kuch lakhon mey paisey chaahiyen aath dass saal lagengey ."

OM "Kitney bhachthaa hain mehney mey."

Babloo "Kyaa sir saarey kharchey bhar savings bank mey kuch pandraha bees hazaar bachegee sir ."

Om "Itnaa kaam karney key baad bhee ."

Babloo "Sir sabkey ghar mey thoodi milthi hain paison ka peed .Humko tho kamaana padtha hain sir ."

Rudra "Hard working tick"

Om "Money value tick"

Babloo "Anika ji waisey aap kyaa kaam karthee hain aap tho canteen rakhney soch rahen thee naa."

Anika "Soch rahen thee Shani merey saamney aagaya." Looking at sso.

Babloo "Sir aaney kabhee SRK sey miley they kyaa. Suna hain who bass badon badon key events mey aathey hain."

Anika "Unsey math poochon naa who Hindi filmey dekhthey kahan hain har waqt angreezi shouk chadee rehtee hain .SRK aur KRK donon mey bhee faraq nahen pakad sakengey"

Om "ek baar mila thaa .Christmas eve right."

Shivaye "I guess new year ."

Anika "KRK ."

Shivaye "Sharukh."

Rudra "Anika dee aap bhee na mainey Dilwaaley premier show dekhee thee Kriti key saath."

Babloo "Wah saab humey ticket bhee nahen milee thee Anikaji badi fan hain SRK kee. Hummesha usskey movies dekhtee hain."

Rudra "Filmy tick."

Om "Smiling face tick."

Rudra "No khadoos shakal tick."

Rudra "Anikaji boliyen tho REYS tho hum saath mey jaayengey main tickets book arrange kardetha hun IMAX mey primier."

Anika "Faltoo Kuch nahen hoga .Entertainment milnaa hain tho chota hall mey aakey dekho mast mast .Uss AC waaley mey tho baath bheee karoo tho sab lok ghoorkey dekhtey hain kee jaisey koi humney unka cellphone uthaaya hon."

Shivay "Its is called manners doosro ko disturb na karney kee."

Anika "Tho ghar mey dekhiyen naa hall hain kuch library,ussey manners nahen kyaa .."

OM "Tum donon ruk jaon tum donon ko chodunga tho car car ko thoddogey .Abh bandh karo .Babloo kuch ganan rakhon naa ."

Babloo "Jee sir."

Shivaye "Waisey tum ek doosrey ko kaisey jaanthey hon."

Anika "Hum ek hee area mey rehtey hain .Hum aapkey jaisey nahen hain kee koi dekhey hee nahe ass pass mey koi insaan hain hain kaun haain. "

Shivaya "Mainey tumsey poocha nahen."

Babloo "Padoosi hain sir do teen ghar choodkey, hum to saalon sey jaanthey hain doosrey ko .Hummarey bhaai Dhruv bhee Sahil ka dost hain."

Anika "Jab aapkey wajah sey Sahil kidnap huan tho inhoney hee madad kiyya thaa."

Shivaye "Don't blame your every mistake and problem on me."

Babloo "Anika jee chodiyen naa."

Om "Babloo yahan sey right leon hum doosrey raastey jaayengey."

Shivaye "Why this way."

Om "Merey informer ney kahan kee yahan risk ho saktee hain. Convoy bhee isee rastey jaa rahen hain."

Shivaye "Informer ."

Om "Mainey "

Rudra "Humney ."

Om "Humney kisse ko appoint kiya hain yeh patha karney hummarey security mey faults kaisey huyen "hain aur kisskey wajaha sey."

Sivaya "Kissey aur mujhey bataaya nahen."

Rudra "It's a secret my BRO."

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Posted: 9 years ago
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you guys know who that informer is.
Edited by Mr.PsychoTech - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey i like ur story line...ShivIka ki nhok-jhok is also good..
Pls dont take me wrong but pls make the dialogues clear nd understandable. Liked the 2nd update...
Continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I loved Shivaay and Anika's funny conversation
Pls add romantic scenes too
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dat was funny 😆 jealous shiv is a treat 2 read 😆

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