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best and amazing update..
beyond words...
update sooonish.

A very sad and emotional update

Please update ASAP...😊
cant wait to read further
The whole concept is just WOW👍🏼

awesome update
omg ish is pregnant...
bt she is so strong...
loved it

Awesome updates 😃😳

It was sad

wow amazing ss. You are one fab writer

I don't share the common sentiment to why Ishana should not have terminated the baby.
Where do we draw the line? How do we decide that the rape baby should be kept and the ass who did this to Ishana should be killed? This argument can go on but the bottom line is- birth. While its easier to delve on the theories of every life being sacred and killing being cruel, practically it has consequences. Ishana is very young and she can have a beautiful life ahead and I don't see why one should feel obligated to bear a child of someone who would care a ass about it. I don't advocate abortion but I don't agree with not doing it because of the moral principles and sentimental values you hold- and when rationally, not keeping the baby makes more sense. But, I guess it's too late.

And it's your story to tell. I'm looking forward to how you take this from here.

And wonderful writing, Akira.

Much love.

Hey Akira! Finally commenting on chapter 2 first and then chapter 3!!
This one is for chapter 2-
Dude, you write amazing!! Really amazing!! You aren't much descriptive, but more precise and even that precision conveys the same emotions and intensity to the reader! That is the beauty of your work! Ishana's character has been amazing written and portrayed by you! Someone who has suffered hell, is broken and shattered inside, yet holds the strength to deceive the world showing them that she is fine, and also her thoughts of revenge! Brilliant!

And this is my Om!! Sensitive and sensible, the only one who cares and has faith in her, inspite of all that she did. Loved the ObBros convo!! 'His hands would only draw the one woman whose thoughts plagued his mind. Ishana' Darling, this was brilliant! Just a line but I loved it! Imagining O making Ishana, woahhh! It has intense and passionate feels!! And the fact that Ishana would never leave his mind...and heart!❤️

Now coming to chapter 3!!
This chapter was FANTABULOUS!! Such angst, intensity, thrill and somewhere deep within, a passion!! Brilliant babe! Trust me, I loved each and every line of it! I can't describe how much I loved it, but I just did!😆 Ishana's efforts to keep everything normal, and Omkara's continuous pestering her, just brilliantly written!! *Heck I am repeating the same words all over again😆*

Ishana is pregnant? Jeez!! I never thought you would take the story forward this way...unpredictable! Ishana is so broken, yet strong! She is shattered beneath yet fierce!! Loved it. The way she broke down when he held her wrist, clearly shows how that hell had tormented her and tortured her!! She doesn't deserve this!!

Waiting for further updates Akira!
Lots of love
Sakshi!

heya