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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Oh no! nooo...this shouldn't have happened. Cannot even imagine Ishana's mental state after all the horror. God, her part of the chapter was so sad. But why such a short chapter? I would like longer ones pleasse because you write just so well. Waiting for the next one.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

OMG. Feeling very very bad for Ishaana.

She had already lost her family and top of this !!

Waiting for next update eagerly!!

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Heyy Akira..
you got a new reader today.. 🤗
Bravo girl 👏
You nailed it.
I hope he will meet his ishana soon 😭
The blending of Ishana's emotions is so well & Omkara still trusts her awwe
Please update fast..i cant wait

P.S i guess i know you akira. Was you in EMA forum ? RagNa / Rachana fan ?

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javeria

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Interesting start

Poor ishana, her life is changed completely.

Looking forward to read more.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

It was so amazing

I am crying for Ishana

Glad that Om had that trust in her

I hope IshKara meet soon

Try n update soon it is so amazing

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Annika_Ishqbaaz
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Waiting

Originally posted by: BlackWidowBaby
raz shaz amazing... you nailed it girl... bravo... waiting for the next update

Thank you baby! 🤗❤️

Originally posted by: hurrom
amazing...w8ing for the next...

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it! 🤗

Originally posted by: littlesmile
Aki it was amazing 🤗
Ishanas pain was 😭 hope om finds out want happened to her Loved how Om trustedishana and said she cant murder her family.Ishkara toh mil nahi raha show Mein wears living on fanfics only 😆 I m soo glad ishkara fans write such beautiful stories 😃 waiting for next part 😳

Thanks so much baby! You'll just have to keep reading to find out whether or not Om will find out about her. Haha, I hear you. They're being properly stingy with IshKara. Thanks again darling! 🤗❤️

Originally posted by: MusicAddict
Hey Akira,
you get a new reader today...and woah! You write just brilliant, really brilliant!
I just loved the prologue and chapter 1! Ishana's pain and anguish is so beautifully and painfully written, that the reader feels it herself. The way you wrote, gave me chills you know, goosebumps!! Kudos to you for that!
And the biggest fact is that, you covered up the point that CVs are missing out upon! The strength and layers in the character of Ishana. They are missing out upon monologues, and development of her character. And that is what you covered. What is she going through? In all this mess, how much torment she has tolerated? And it was just amazingly written!! Hats off for that!
Waiting eagerly for further updates!!
You had me hooked!
Lots of love,
Sakshi!

Welcome aboard Sakshi! I'm very glad you're enjoying the story so far. Your words are very kind and I can't thank you enough for the love and support. Ishana's character is the character that has so much potential and I feel CVs aren't using her to her fullest and they will not be using her either because if there is anything 4Lions is famous for, its the butchering of their characters.

It's a terrible situation for her right now but we'll see what happens next. Thanks once again and keep reading! 🤗❤️

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: .ButterflyNeet.
My god,
I was so impressed at how carefully you wrote this scene, it captures the horror and terror so well well. You use your words so carefully and precisely and it comes across as sincere. Thank you for writing such a beautiful chapter.

Neet

Thank you for leaving me with such a kind comment. I love hearing from you and it's always a pleasure knowing that what I've written is appreciated. ❤️

Originally posted by: Abhia2Twinj4eva
Hey akira 😊
The update was pretty fab😳just awesome 😳👏
Plz continue soon 😳
Anjum😊

Thanks so much for the love and support, Anjum! Keep reading! ❤️

Originally posted by: Aahana-
Oh no! nooo...this shouldn't have happened. Cannot even imagine Ishana's mental state after all the horror. God, her part of the chapter was so sad. But why such a short chapter? I would like longer ones pleasse because you write just so well. Waiting for the next one.

It's a dark time but this is Ishana we're talking about. She has her strengths. Haha, sorry about the length of the chapters. As I said, I have two other work in progresses outside of IF and I am trying to split my time evenly across both platforms.

Thanks for letting me know your thoughts, it's always a pleasure hearing form you!

Take care and keep reading! 🤗

Originally posted by: -Aarfa-
OMG. Feeling very very bad for Ishaana.
She had already lost her family and top of this !!

Waiting for next update eagerly!!

It's a test of time and patience. Some will pass, some will fail. We'll just have to wait and see what happens next. Thanks for reading! ❤️

Originally posted by: ...Dexterity...
Splendid !

Thank you! ❤️

Originally posted by: -Enigmatic-
Heyy Akira..
you got a new reader today.. 🤗
Bravo girl 👏
You nailed it.
I hope he will meet his ishana soon 😭
The blending of Ishana's emotions is so well & Omkara still trusts her awwe
Please update fast..i cant wait

P.S i guess i know you akira. Was you in EMA forum ? RagNa / Rachana fan ?

Hi! Welcome aboard! Omkara trusts her not to murder her family, as for whether or not he trusts her, we'll have to wait and see. It's a difficult time for both of them but that's what makes it so fun. I'll update soon!

Yep, that's me! I was and still am a Rachana fan. Praying for her comeback soon. Miss seeing her on my screen. What's your name? Username changes throw me off and sometimes I forget. I think we've interacted before, lol.

Anyway, thanks for reading! ❤️🤗

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
Interesting start
Poor ishana, her life is changed completely.
Looking forward to read more.

I'm glad you're enjoying it. Will be updating soon so watch the space for more. Thanks for letting me know your thoughts!

Originally posted by: -Abhiya-
It was so amazing
I am crying for Ishana
Glad that Om had that trust in her
I hope IshKara meet soon
Try n update soon it is so amazing

I'm glad you're enjoying it. Yes, it is a difficult time for Ishana but I wouldn't go as far as saying he trusts her entirely. He just trusts she won't take the life of her family, but other then that, she is the woman who tried to steal from him.

Keep reading and watch the space for more! I'll be updating soon.

Take care! ❤️

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littlesmile

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Aki this soo unfiar 😡 U stopped at such a thrilling point 😆 Finally ishkara met again but I was wondering how come ishana didn't knew about om being there.Is she trying to take revenge on oberois ? But y 😕 soo many questions 😆 just update the next part soon I can't wait 😳

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Neet

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Yet again such a beautiful chapter. I just wish you write a little more. Your writing is so good that I wish I could keep reading on and on. Please do write a longer chapter because this confrontation is going to be so good.

Neet

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Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Wasn't expecting an update from you at all. Such an amazing surprise. Keep it up 😉

I can read and read and read all day. You are too good with words and its all so vivid. I can literally see the scene unfolding in front of my eyes. This was longer than the previous one but please let the next one be longer than this. I know I will never be satisfied but still do try because I just can't get enough of your writing. Love it a lot ❤️

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