AnShi SS: Bolna.. Maahi Bolna.. (ch4-pg5)

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ch1.

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My take on precap for 28th August.

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"Annikaa..." He roared as he raised his hand on her..

"Just shut the hell up..." he hurled words at her.

For a minute,everything came to a stop as everyone gasped in shock as to what to saw.. Shivaay raising his hand to slap Annika.

"Shivaay.." Daadi screamed.

"Aap ne isse sar pe charha ke rakkha hai.. Dekh lijiye isse.. Itni battameez larki hai yeh ki apne Boss ka mazak bana rahi hai.. Isse aur kuch aata ho tab kuch karein na..Isske rago mein kiska khoon daurta hai? Na class,status,family name,etc etc... Iss ke paas toh kuch bhi nahi,naa khud ke maa baap ya phir koi aur..Kisi ki rehm pe reh rahi hai.. Isiliye maine Prinku se kaha thha ki apne barabari walo se dosti karo,naki kisi kurey ke saath.. There is a reason ki kura sarak par rehta hai..."

"Shivaay.." Pinky came and slapped him hard which shocked everyone.

"Oberoi khandaan mein aajtak yeh nahi hua jo tune kiya.. Humare khandaan mein kabhi bhi kisi aurat ko be izzat ya haath nahi uthaya gaya hai... Yeh sanskar maine diye hai tujhe? Papaji bhi mujhe aur Jethaniji ko beti banakar ghar mein lekar aaye thhe." Pinky replied.

"Yeh larki humari khandaan ki nahi hai.. yeh humari apni nahi hai..." Shivaay retorted.

"Tu apni Maa se zabaan larhayega?" Daadi shouted at Shivaay.

Annika's belongings fell from her hands in shock and pools of tears formed in her brunette eyes. Her kohl lines also mixed up with her eyes.

She started shivering in shock. She somehow bent and took her handbag and mumbled very feebly, "I am sorry!"

She turned and ran away from everyone's sight wiping her big fat tears. Omkara and Rudra ran behind her to stop her..

Daadi came near Shivaay and said, "Aaj tune unki yeh izzat mitti mein mila di hai,Shivaay.. Aaj toh tujhe Billu kehne mein bhi sharm arahi hai mujhe..."

Daadi broke down while Omkara and Rudra consoled her,while Saumya and Priyanka took away Pinky to her room.

Suddenly,Annika came running inside the Oberoi Mansion again and went towarda the kitchen where Jahnvi was going to get a glass of water for Daadi..

"Jahnvi Aunty..haatiye yahaan se.." Annika pushed Jahnvi outside the kitchen very hardly and suddenly... BOOOMMM!!!

A bomb blast took place in the kitchen.. Smoke covered the whole area and everyone came near the kitchen area to see what happened..

"Om.. Annika wahaan pe... Mujhe bachayi usne.. Usse koi bachao.." Jahnvi stuttered throughout showing Om and others the place where the blast occured..

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There.. Annika lied down in her own pool of blood and scathed and burnt skin,eyes closin and opening rapidly and moving her lips to inhale some air..

Precap: Annika in hospital... Shivaay's guilt increases as he reads her diary. Saahil's confrontation with Shivaay.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Great start!
Can't believe Shivaay raised his hands, update soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh god yeh Shivaay bhi na .. Loved Pinky!!!
Omggg Anika 😲 .. Amazing start.. Please continue fasttt 😳
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Shivaay shouldn't have raised his hand on Anika...
Pinky was mindblowing...
Poor Anika...felt really bad for her..
Continue sooon
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Awsomeee and interesting start!!!! Just supperrbbb!!! 👏 well... So scary end and precap!!! And eagerly waiting for it!! Do con.soon...
Plss PM me if possible!!
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Ohmygosh! So damn interesting! Pls continue soon!
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superbb... shivaay should be shown mirror that status and family name is not everything.
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vidyu hope i can call u that how u get this ideas yar i mean they r just awesome nice start and interesting too
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teaser for ch2.

"She needs love,care and support from you all.." Doctor replied...

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"Chot usse lagegi...Dard tujhe hoga.." Om's words replayed in his mind as he stood beside the pool.

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"Aap meri Didi se door rehna... Aap bohut burey ho... Har waqt mere Didi ko satate rehte ho... Jaaao..." Saahil shouted at Shivaay who went to see him who was staying at the moment with them in Oberoi Mansion.

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ch2.

Leelavati Hospital:

"Annika ab kaisi hai? Kuch serious toh nahi hai na?" Omkara asked looking worriedly.

"Omkara,she is fine. 1st degree burns hai... Tum logo ko Bhagwan ka shukr manana chahiye ki usse zyada burns nahi hua warna jis tarha ka blast hua hai,that was enough to kill her.. Woh shock mein jachuki hai.. You all need to provide her with love and care warna she will suffer from mental trauma... just take care of her.." Dr. replied and went away.

Everyone heaved a sigh of relief and thanked their Bhagwan for keeping Annika safe.

The nurse handed a list of injections and medicines to Rudra and asked him to bring it for Annika.

"Annika didi.." Saahil screamed as he came limping all the way from his home worried for Annika.. Annika's friend brought Saahil in the hospital.

"Mujhe meri didi se milna hai.. Please mujhe andar jaane dijiye,Bhaiya..." Saahil pleaded to Omkara in tears.

"Saahil..teri Didi ab thik hai..So rahi hai abhi.. Abhi aap agar andar jaoge aur didi tension se uth gayi aur agar unhe dard hua toh,tujhe accha lagega kya?" Omkara consolingly asked Saahil.

Saahil nodded in a no and hugged Omkara and cried in his embrace..This brought tears in everyone's eyes.

Saahil spotted Shivaay just round the corner of the ICU area and went near him.He pulled him down with his little hands. Shivaay knew it was Saahil and he could see the anger and pain in his eyes.

"Sab aapki wajah se hua hai,Mr.Shivaay Singh Oberoi.. Kanji Aakhon Wala Bagaad Billa.. Na aap mere Didi ko satatey aur naahi meri Didi aaj ICU mein hoti... Aap bohut burey ho,Bagaad Billa... Aapke seene mein dil nahi hai... Aap bohut burey ho... Aapne meri Didi ko harbar hurt kiya hai..Par,meri Didi ne sabkuch khud sehen karliya... Aap ekdum bhi acche nahi ho.. Aap sirf dimagh se sochte ho.. Dil se kabhi nahi sochte ho... Aap toh yahi chahte thhe na ki Annika didi aapke saamne ghutne tek de.. Loh.. Aaj meri Didi aapke saamne jhukk gayi... Jo Didi kisi ke saamne nahi jhuki aur jisne life ke har problems ko saamna kiya,aaj woh aapke saamne jhuk gayi.. Aap bohut gande ho..." Saahil rebuked Shivaay and started to cry..

Rudra and Omkara hugged him tightly and let him cry..

ICU:

Annika was mumbling something in her sleep and sweat beads formed on her forehead and face. Nurse was checking her vital stats when suddenly Annika sat up,screaming, "Jahnvi Aunty.. Aap hath jao wahaan se... Jahnvi aunty ko koi bachao.. Mujhe Jahnvi Aunty ko bachana hai.. Chhoro mujhe... Uss aurat ne bomb plant kiya hai kitchen mein.. Please mujhe jaane do.."

Everyone got alerted hearing Annika's screams.. They immediately entered the ICU. Rudra and Omkara went near Annika.

"Jahnvi aunty ko bachalo..Woh kitchen mein jarahi hai.. Rudra.. Om.. Aunty ko leke aao wahaan se.." Annika mumbled,wriggling in their hold..

"Annika.. Main thik hu,baccha.. Dekh.. Mujhe kuch nahi hua hai.. Tu shant ho ja.. Teri tabiyat bigar jayegi.." Jahnvi replied hugging Annika..

Annika found motherly love and solace in Jahnvi's arms. She hugged her tightly and uttered soothing words in Annika's ears.

Suddenly,she saw Shivaay.. Her eyes' popped up and again,she started screaming..

"Chale jaiye yahaan se,Shivaay Singh Oberoi.. Aapko sirf chheenna aata hai,dena kuch nahi aata hai.. Aapke paas dil nahi hai... Aapke seene mein patthar hai.. Simple si baat keliye mujhpe haath uthaya aapne.. Chale jao yahaan se.." Annika screamed and with that,she fainted again in Jahnvi's arms.

Doctor came immediately and examined her.

"I already told you Omkara. She is stressing herself and shock mein jachuki hai.. Uss blast incident ko bhula nahi parahi hai and isske chand minute pehle jo Mr.Shivaay Singh Oberoi ne uspe haath uthaya,woh baat bhi.." Dr.Annie replied.

"Par Annie puttar.. Ab hum aisa kya kare taaki Annika puttar thik hojaye?" Daadi asked.

"Usse yeh sab baatein bhulni hogi.. Pyaar se bhulana hoga usse... Usse abh aap sabki pyaar aur vishwas ki zarurat hai... I will come daily to monitor her health.. Kal discharge kardungi usse.." Dr.Annie replied.

"Sure.. Hum sab aapke instructions ka follows karenge.." Pinky replied.

Oberoi Mansion:

Shivaay was pacing the lengths of the pool area and recollecting every snippet of today's incident. His face bore a new kind of raw expression today.. He was feeling really disturbed and hopeless from inside. He was recalling Saahil's words..

"Sahi toh bola Saahil ne.. Mere paas dil nahi hai.. Dil ki jagah patthar hai mere seene mein.. Mujhe dena nahi,chheenna aata hai.." He recalled these harsh words of Saahil..

Suddenly,he closed his eyes and tried to feel something. Images of Annika groaning in pain in the kitchen where she laid in her own blood and her cries were flashing infront of his eyes. His heart wrenched up..

"Chot usse lagegi aur dard tujhe hoga..." He recalled Om saying these words to him..

Precap: Shivaay reading Annika's diary.. Annika discharged from hospital.

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