Ishkara SS: Rewarding Sacrifice (Completed)

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VReSh

@VReSH

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Oh my God!!! I am Shivering!!! you gotta continue Please!!!

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littlesmile

@littlesmile

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Loved ur OS 😳 This felt the soo real and gave me shivers.Please write a second part for this. I want to know what will happen next 😳

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

well written and IshKara's emotions were well portrayed.

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Neet

@.writtenletter.

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: loveispure
Wow👏
Brilliantly written

Thankyou!:D

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Neet

@.writtenletter.

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: AngelicTomboy

Can u plz make this a two-shot or three-shot ? 😳

Aww! I will definitely think about it! :D Thankyou for liking it so much!

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Neet

@.writtenletter.

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: VReSHna
Oh my God!!! I am Shivering!!! you gotta continue Please!!!

Oh thank you! That means so much that it made you feel so immensely! I will try and continue it because the response has been great!

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Neet

@.writtenletter.

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: littlesmile
Loved ur OS 😳 This felt the soo real and gave me shivers.Please write a second part for this. I want to know what will happen next 😳

Thank you so much! I am so happy that it made you feel so much, the response has been so great so I will probably write a second part! :D

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Neet

@.writtenletter.

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: VidyutKiDeewani
well written and IshKara's emotions were well portrayed.

Thank you! :D I am glad you liked it, and yes I will see and try to write a second part to this.

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mistofshadows

@mistofshadows

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Neet,
This is one of the best IshKara works I have come across this forum and I applaud you for it.
The best thing is you managed to ingratiate the OhBros in it altogether though it focused on IshKara.
You write angst really well. Omkara's reaction to Ishaana dancing on the pole to his volcanic outburst was brilliant. I must say I have become a fan of your work. Plz PM me whenever you pen another work.
Niki