SauShivKara TS: Raksha Bandhan (last part-pg1) *complete*

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Saumya witnessed Priyanka from a distance who was watching her tying the Raakhis' on the wrists of Shivaay,Omkara and Rudra. Priyanka looked really happy as she received blessings and gifts from her brothers and Priyanka hugging them.

The sight brought tears in her eyes. It refreshed those hidden memories of her brother who always used to wait for Saumya to tie the Raakhi on his wrist.

But.. Alas!!

Her brother died in a road accident which left a mark on her mind and heart. She was really attached to her brother and the mere feeling of him not by her side,kills her from inside.

Saumya excused herself from everyone and ran up the staircase and went towards her room. She slammed the door really hard and slumped down against it and cried her heart out,remembering her brother.

She took out a box from her bag which had the last memories of her brother. The last Raakhi which she had to tie on his wrist but couldnt because her brother died on that day.

She pulled her legs to herself as she lied down in a baby posture and cried her heart out,hugging her brother's picture and that Raakhi which she made all by herself.

"Kehne ko saath apne tanhayee chubhti hai,
Bas chhupke iss dil tanhayee dhalti hai,
Bas yaad saath hai...
Teri yaad saath hai..."

"Dada.. Aap mujhe aise chhorke chale kyun gaye? Aapko pata hai na ki aapki Laado aapse kitna pyaar karti hai aut aapke bina jee nahi sakti hai? Aapko kisne haq diya mujhe chhorke jaane ko? Kyunn.. Kyun chale gaye aap?" Saumya cried and vented her frustration out.

Shivaay and Omkara came running towards Saumya's room and banged on the door and pleaded her to open it. Saumya could hear Shivaay and Omkara's voice.

Saumya quickly wiped her tears and kept her things on its place and went towards the washroom to freshen up.

After she came out,she opened the door to find Shivaay and Omkara looking at her with a shocked and worried expression. They saw her in a white salwar kameez with her hair tied up in a ponytail.. Her angelic and happy face bore sad expressions. Her eyes lacked the twinkle.

"Tum thik toh ho,Saumya?" Shivaay asked curiously.

"Aur yeh safed kapre??? Kahin jarahi ho tum?" Omkara asked.

"Woh!!! Main aaj Pune jarahi hu.. Shaam ko wapas aajaungi.. Aaj meri bare bhai ki barsi hai.. Barsi ki puja keliye jarahi hu..." Saumya replied and went away leaving Shivaay and Omkara shocked.

Precap: Last Part.
Edited by VidyutKiDeewani - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I am first
Now coming to the story, this first part was so emotional.
As soon as I read the title I knew I had to read this story!
I felt so bad for my Somu😭
I am glad Shivaay and Omkara checked if she was okay or not like two older brothers.
I can't wait for the next part.
Update soon dear!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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That was so emotional😭
Glad to see that shivaay and om are concerned about her...
it must be really depressing to see the celebrations on the day her brother died😒
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Posted: 9 years ago
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last part:

"Aap yeh Puja nahi karsakti.."

"Par kyun?? Jinke liye yeh Puja rakkhi hai woh mere Bhai hai.. Baat ko samajne ki koshish kariye Panditji.." Saumya pleaded with tears.

"Yeh Puja sirf koi larka karsakta hai.. Larkiyan yeh Puja nahi karsakti hai..." Panditji said.

Saumya was weeping silently for the inability to do the Puja. She slumped down in despair.

Suddenly she heard a voice from behind.

"Panditji,yeh Puja hum karenge.." Shivaay and Omkara replied jointly.

Saumya looked at them with her teary eyes and as Shivaay and Omkara looked at her,they smiled and asked her not to cry.

Soon,Shivaay and Omkara sat for the Puja and completed all the rituals.

After the Puja,Shivaay and Omkara took their position and sat beside Saumya,who looked really sad and was watching her brother's picture.

"Rajveer?!?!?" Shivaay and Omkara gasped shockingly.

"Yaani.. Rajveer Pratap Shekhawat Saumya ka bhai hai..." Omkara finished his word.

Flashback:

"Shivaay..Omkara.. Main tumdono ko ek ahem zimmedari saupna chahta hu.. Mere marne ke baad tu meri Laado ka khayal rakhna jaise tum apni behen Priyanka ka rakhte ho..

Jaanta hu,Priyanka jaisa pyaar nahi de paoge tum Laado ko..Par phir bhi,usse mauka dena taaki woh apni khudki jagah tum dono aur baki sabke dil mein jagah bana le.

Meri jaan ki koi guarantee nahi hai... Army waalo ki yahi ek buri baat hai.. Please meri Laado ka khayal rakhna.. Waada karo tum dono mujhse..." Rajveer asked.

"Hum dono waada karte hai,Raj.. Tumhari Laado ko hum apni jaan se bhi zyada pyaar karenge aur uski raksha karenge..." ShivKara promised to Rajveer.

Flashback ends.

Shivaay and Omkara sat on each side of Saumya,who was sitting near the Ghaat area and shedding tears. Saumya sensed their presence and was about to wipe her tears when Omkara said,

"Inn aansuo ko beh jaane do,Saumya.. Halka lagega tumhe.."

"Haan Saumya... Rajveer nahi hai toh kya.. Hum dono toh hai na tumhare liye... Rajveer ne jaane se pehle tumhari zimmedari humdono ko saupha thha.. Rajveer mera aur Omkara ka sabse accha dost thha... Tum bohut khushnaseeb ho ki tumhe Rajveer jaisa bhai mila thha.." Shivaay consoled.

Saumya broke into fits of tears. She was crying her heart out. Shivaay and Omkara knew what she is going through.

Both Shivaay and Omkara side hugged her and promised to her yhat they will never ever leave her side and will fulfill the promise they made to Rajveer..

"Thanks Bhaiya.. Bappa se prarthna karungi ki aap dono jaise bhai har ek behen ko mile." Saumya replied with a smile.

"Bhagwan karebtum jaisi behen har ek bhai ko mile.. Chalo chalo.. Raakhi bandho hum dono..." Shivaay replied with a smile.

Saumya smiled and did the Raksha Bandhan Pooja of Shivaaya and Omkara and Saumya tied the Raakhis' on their wrists..

"Hum dono ne tumhare liye koi tohfa nahi laayr hai.. Kya chahiye tumhe?" Shivaay asked fondly.

"Aap dono mujhe mil gaye hai,isse bara tohfa aur kya hosakta hai.." Saumya replied with a smile and hugged Shivaay-Omkara.

Shivaay and Omkara were really happy to see her smile after such a long time..

"Phoolon ka taro ka,
Sabka kehna hai,
Ek hazaaro mein,
Meri behna hai,
Saari umar humein sang rehna hai..."

******

THE END.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This part was so beautiful dear❤️
You have made me love Shivaay and Omie even more!
I know it's bad of me but I hate that pandit😡
I know it's a ritual/custom but he made my Somu cry😭
I loved this update so much!
Write another story soon😃

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