Shivika SS : No One Can Love You More CH 11 Pg 48- 27/02/17 UPDATED

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noor

@noor j

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Posted: 8 years ago

#271

OMG how can you not be happy with this update. its such a beautiful one. Some lines, I had to go back and read just so they could stay with me for a longer time. Also the line "Neither would he" was so apt and so well placed. loved that he is repenting and that he knows this Anika has changed. I love the way you write and I just Cant wait for more.

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Anu

@chottekikhushi

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#272

Oh my God!!

I just came across this brilliant story and read all the parts on one go and I am seriously lost for words. Because I dont think I can do justice to praise it enough.

Each part is so moving and has captured and portrayed Anika's and Shivaay's pain so well. And I cant help but get angry at the injustice of it all knowing Ani is innocent and doesn't even know it!!

The last chapter was another emotional blow and moved me to tears...another heartbreak for Ani its terrible and I want a happy ending for her so bad!!

Your writing is just phenomenal!! Do continue soonish!

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ArhiIPKKND

@ArhiIPKKND

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Posted: 8 years ago

#273

Oh no poor annika...this is going to b devastating...like d way u r showing shivaays emotions as he finds out d truth...so real...awesome writing...

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#274

And he thought that today was a bad day...I cannot even begin to imagine who she is going to handle the new of Sheetal's death...this may just break her I think. One more loss to bear...how can life and fate be so cruel to 1 person?? I feel for Shivvay...i do...but right now my heart can only feel for her...don't even know what to think! 😭

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Riddhima

@Khushi_Dillse

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#275

UNEXPECTED twist...shital is dead...omg...

How anika react...how shivaay handle anika...

Phenomenal update dear...

Aahhh it's okay yaar but next week please update soon...

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nsanju15

@nsanju15

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#276

Amazing update as usual.. I didnt realize i was crying towards the end.. The way ur taking the story forward is phenomenal.. Waiting to c how they will break the news to anika..

Thanks for the pm..

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aarushi04

@aarushi04

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#277

Superb update!!!
Wow...nw shivay realised his mistakes...
He doesn't want to let anika go...
Bt it wud b so difficult!!!
Omg...sheetal died...anika will b shattered!!!
Waiting for her reaction ...
Dis story is so interesting...cant wait for next update!!
Continue soon
Thnx for pm

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Priya.

@Priya.

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#278

Originally posted by: Addie07
Thank you Priya
Your comment means a lot
Given that a certain someone in my family starts with every sentence of hers with Priya says😆😆😆

Aditi, you have no idea how familiar I am with "Adi Di says ...".😆😆 😆 And both of us are so frustrated with what's going on in IB , but still have not given up.😆

And coming to the update . That first para is just so amazing. ❤️

Shivaay finally comes to know the whole truth. But what a twist ! Before he could even process it properly ,he gets another blow. "He would change the future...he promised himself that he wouldn't let anything hurt Anika till there was breath left in his body ..." If only it were so easy.With the latest ,it's his turn to experience the same helplessness that Anika did. But then that's his journey to redemption.

Anika will be devastated at Sheetal's death no doubt , but eager to see how she is gonna react. Will she feel guilty all over again or will it prompt her to go back to serving in a conflict zone?

Waiting patiently for the answers ...and the update being late ...it's all cool.😃

Edited by Priya. - 8 years ago

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Ruchi

@Rachna.KG

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#279

Wow...profound what a masterpiece. I was up till 3 AM reading the story and its out of the world. I feel like reading again and again. I think your story also helped me understand Shivaays character and also scared me because I am certain that this is how the story is going to progress in the show. Different circumstances but he will hurt her till she is no longerthe person she is.
Your story brings out what the writer of show intended. However the way you put it makes it more understandable. Dont get me wrong but with limited understanding and lack of experience the first thing which came to my mind is that can this passion obsession last so long and isn't true love based on trust which seems to be lacking in both the stories.
You are an amazing writer and I cant tell you how content I feel after reading this masterpiece.
Thank you.