Obliterated Hope-SS ShivIka Chapter 1 Pg 2

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Hi Everyone The Name is Lekha 😃 Also known as Lee I am a writer and this is the is the first time I am writing something super intense! and this is my first experiment with angst! I have another story in the pipeline 😳( please be patient for that one the wait will be worth it I promise😳)

I have butterflies in my tummy Hopefully I can deliver something 😳

Presenting to you dear readers Obliterated Hope

Companion Short story to https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ishqbaaaz/4689456/shivika-os-just-like-that-an-on-pg4 by SRKian(read that to get full context of this(Characters slightly differ from the original Story ) (Thank You! You inspired me to start writing again) I own nothing but the concept of this story and the changes I made to character names

Teaser( Not Proof read)

Sometime in life you are put in scenarios where you have to lose something to appreciate it. A millisecond is all it takes to loose out on a chance at normalcy, filling you with regret of not telling your news to the one you love. If Only... The person who needed to know knew ..


Index

Teaser Right above you Yo!!

Chapter 1 Signs of Anguish Pg 2

Be nice to each other

Lee


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Posted: 9 years ago
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I think you mean 'lose.' Only correcting you since you are such a serious writer, and all.
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'If only,the person who needed to know,knew' man u got me wid line!update soonish n plz pm me
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One more left in the second sentence.
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Waiting for the story, don't make us wait too much😆😳
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Looks interesting ...

and Nazis go to your CC 's
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Trying to create a rapport with each of the characters the story Positive criticism appreciated!!

NOT PROOF READ IGNORE TYPOS/GRAMMATICAL ERRORS


Chapter 1 Signs of Anguish

Omkara Oberoi knew when something was off with his family and he knew the mannerisms that changed when something happened and he was worried when he had to see his best friend/sister in law Anika pace around the dining area like a wounded lioness.

Something had happened and he could notice the tears and the frown on her usually cheery face. He wanted to approach her and ask her what is going on but he stopped when she got a phone call and headed off into her room in tears, all whilst trying to stay optimistic

It was concerning to Om but he put it away at the back of his head for the moment. He decided to follow her into her room thinking she might be in trouble, after all he noticed signs of anguish better than anybody he walks in to hear the last part of the conversation between Anika and Tia. Do what ever you want to do Tia he heard her scream into the phone and hang up and saw her slump into the couch in tears.

Though Om wasn't great at helping with emotions he could gauge her hurt as if something big happened he went sat by her and whispered to her trying to comfort her Anika maine abhi tumhe niche rote hue dakha please batao na kuch hua hai kya? She looks at him pools of tears flooding into her pretty hazel eyes and only whispering Sahil and family over and over not knowing what to say .. Om was shocked and pulled her into a comforting hug urging her to say something which she starts narrating incoherently

Flashback

Tia- Anika you took away everything I loved and cared about you took away the one i loved. you should actually worry about yourself darling.

Anika - What do you mean Tia? kya karne wall ho??

Tia- Simple honey tumhari dukhti nas pe vaar karna hai mujhe.. your weakness is in my hands.. Sahil is with me... One wrong move from you will make your life miserable darling ... *Sadistic Laugh* Listen to me well Anika Oberoi, You will be implicated in a business scandal and you will not be able to do anything about it Nothing !! when and where you wait and watch ... till then Sahil is going to be with me !!

Anika-Ok. Don't hurt Sahil please I beg of you Tia ( tears pooling into her eyes) Don't do anything..

Tia- You will never know what hit you Anika the hurt you caused me will come back to you in immense manner .

Anika - Do What you want Tia (She screams and hangs up the phone)

Flashback Over

More tears spring up into Anika's eyes and she mumbles hiding her face in her hands what wrong did my baby brother do everything hurts Om everything hurts so much right now I don't know what to do anymore I had a piece of good news for the family but I don't think it matters anymore she goes gets a copy of her medical records and hands it to Om and rambles this is what I was going to tell everyone at dinner tonight your brother and I we are going to have a baby I wanted to make this a special day but I don't want to tell anything to anyone anymore not at the risk of everyone hating me for the trouble I am causing them

Om looks at her shocked & is getting slightly angry at her stubbornness and he yells at her for the first time in years shocking himself and Anika and he exclaims So just like you always do you will bottle up your feelings right Anika I have a question for you though does bhai know about the baby? he sees Anika shake her head negative and he gets angrier God damnit woman for once stop being a superhero trying to protect us , you have to tell bhai about this Tia thing and the baby also no one hates you He says with his expressions softening and he looks straight into her eye and takes a promise from her you have to tell bhai about this Anika we can help you .

At what cost ? Anika whisper yells and adds Tia is out to make my life miserable so why should I give anyone any hope and joy when everything is almost over?


DUN DUN DUN DUN DUN 😆 this took the life out of me Reviews appreciated!!

LEE 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
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very interesting😉
so Shivika are already married, and Tia is the vamp😆
I absolutely adore when Om talks and tries to protect and comfort everyone around him😳

ok so Tia has kidnapped Sahil, Anika is pregnant, Tia gonna destroy the Oberoi family by blackmailing Anika😛

Ok bring the next part, waiting for it😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Lee
Wonderfully written.
Tia as vamp is nice. I am sort of irritated with the way they portray Tia. Sweety sweet.
Anika is under turmoil. Bring it on sweetie. Want to see how it turns out.

Waiting for the next update.

Bunny.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lee this is interesting...looking forward to the next part.

Jaldi post karna:)

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