Random Fan-made OS: Heartbeat *complete*

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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is a random fan-made OS about a girl named Annie who loved Shivaay Singh Oberoi. Her love was silent but remained unrequited.

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Her friends gathered around her to see her for the last time. They were really sad and tears fell from their eyes.
Deepika,Sanya,Swadheenta,Tejaswi and Angel were her best friends. Always stood by each other's side. Perfect example of true friendship.

Annie slowly kept her frail hand on Deepika's hand. She slowly asked through her eyes about him. Deepika replied nodding her head in "NO."

Tears fell from her eyes which made their heart wrench. Tejaswi and Swadheenta couldnt control their tears and burst out crying. They cant see their best friend crying. Deepika asked Sanya to call him for one last time. Sanya called but no one answered.

Annie could feel what was happening around. Suddenly her vitals started to drop slowly.Her heart rate started to drop and she was sinking.Her friends felt her wriggling and Annie clutched the bedsheet tightly.

Suddenly,she felt his cold palms under her warm ones. She slowly turned her head towards Shivaay who clutched her hand tightly and placed a kiss on her hands. She smiled meekly and finally,tears fell from her eyes for the last time and closed her eyes,forever..

She left..

Her friends cried loudly hugging her body which became cold by now and Shivaay became numb. For the first time in his life,tears fell from his eyes for someone whose endless and pure love for him remained silent and unrequited.

"Main rahoon ya na rahoon,
Tum mujhme kahin baki rehna.."

P.S: (In this story,the charecter Annie is played by ME.. Shivaay ki deewani 😳 )
Edited by VidyutKiDeewani - 9 years ago

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---Angel--- thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
Aww you made me cry😭
What a beautiful OS dear! You have penned down all the emotions so well!
You truly are an amazing friend including me in your OS.
I can't wait to read your next story!
Thanks for the pm🤗









-Abhiya- thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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omg annika itna kyu rulaya😭
it was so emotional n beautiful
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Posted: 9 years ago
#4
a great story, but I like happy endings. but this is ok.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#5
It was soo emotional..
Short but very expressive
Loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#6
Main yahan? Kab kahan kaise??😆
It was truly beautiful!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#7
aaa 😭
what was that anika?
your os was so emotional
and this is my third intro in your os 😃
thanks for that
love you
but please dont write sad parts yaar
really feel like crying
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesomeee ...
Made me cranky ..
Darling ...
Mrs SSO ...
Edited by princessswadhi - 9 years ago

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