IshKara OS: No More Secrets *Banner Updated*

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Posted: 9 years ago
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This Os is Dedicated to ..Tejaswi..
Hope You'll Love it :)



IshKara OS: No More Secrets



"Ishana Enough or should I say Bela , aur Kitna Jhoot Bologi, already itna bada saach chupaya , aur kya baaki hai"Om screamed, not Ready to Listen a Single Word from Ishana.




"Om, Ek baar mei Puri baat toh sunno, Please"Ishana Pleaded In front of Om.




"Bass Karo yeh Drama, Paise chahiye na tumhe , Yeh Lo" Saying so , he threw Some Bundles Of Note On her face.




"Enough.
Tumhe kya lagta hai mujhe yeh sab karne mei maaza aa raha hai?


Tum sirf Apne baare mei soch rahe ho, Jaane ki koshish ki kya majboori thi meri?


Nahii , tumhe Sirf maine Jo dokha Kia vohi dikh raha hai, aur Jo mere Saath Dhokha ho raha vo pata hai tumhe?"




Ishana Cried her Heart Out ,
" Pata hai jiss Papa ke liye meine itna Saab Kia, khud ki life bhulke unke Gambling Ke paise chuka rahi hoo, Apne Dreams , Wishes ko side mei rakha.


Puri Life dedi taaki meri Bhen ek Normal Zindagi jee saake , Logon se Jhoot Bola unke Feelings ke saath khela kyu , Just because I loved My Papa n Chapli, I wanted them to be happy.



Ek moment ke liye bhi Mona ko Realise hone dia ke We are Facing Crisis.



Sabke Saamne Ek Happy Go Lucky Girl ki Image banai taaki unhe pata na chale ki mujhe Hurt ho raha hai.



Agar mai hii Weak ho gayi toh unhe kaun Sambhalega?



I had a Mask on my Face , no one could See the Pain but then you came , Someone who Felt the same Pain I was Going through, You could Understand what I was Feeling.



Pata nai chala Kaise Mujhe Jeena Sikhaya dusro ke liye nai Khud Ke liye.


Everything was just soo Perfect.



I did have a plan to Con you but after Meeting you, My heart stopped me, Because it had Fallen for You.



Yes , I was in Love.



The Feeling Itself was so Special.



That's it when I Realised that No more Conning.



Mai tumhe sab Saach Batana chahati thi.



But Maybe 'Desting Had some Other Plans'.



That Day itself , Vo Gundey aaye aur Mona ko leke gaye.


Tum Jitna pyaar, apne bhaaiyo se karte hoo , utna hi pyaar mei Meri Mona se Karti hoo.



Papa toh aadhe se zyada time Naashei mei hote hai, jab unhe pata chala ki Mona nai hai ghar pe , tum soch bhi nai sakte unhone kya kaha mujhse!



Kehte hai , Galti ho gai mujhse Jo Tujhe Adopt Kia.




You Realised, mai unki beti bhi nai hoo. Jis Papa ko itna pyaa Kia, Jo unhone kaha Kia , Apni Life se Zyada Importance Unko Di, unhone bass mujhe Ghar se Nikal diya .




I know when a person is Drunk, he ain't in his Senses but whatever he says is True.



I'm a Burden.



You were my Last Hope and wow , life is seriously very Cruel with me.




The person whom I love the most, for whom I'm read to give away everything, doesn't want to even see my Face.




Pehle Papa aur abb Tum.




Papa ko toh Farak bhi nai Padega mai hoo ke nai , Tumhare Liye toh Shivay Bhai aur Rudra hai.



What about me ?
At the end of the Day , I'm left all alone."




Om Listened To Each and Every Word of her, He never Realised when did he start to Cry




His Mind Went Back to the Last Conversation he Had with Riddhima.



"Mr.Omkara Singh Oberoi , tumhe Kya lagta hai mai Tumhare Saath isliye hoo because I love you and your Lifeless Sculptures?



Really, Well the answer is a No.



Mujhe agar Pyaar hai toh Sirf Media se, Fame chahiye thi Mujhe Jo mili bhi sirf Tumhari wajah se.



Atleast tum nai toh tumhara Naam toh mere Kaam aaya.


Varna Kisi ''Drug Addict se kaun Pyaar karega!" I used you Omkara.


And guess What I'm not the only One who's using you, your Dearest Bela or Ishana jiske liye your Leaving me , is a Con Artist.


She is with you for Your Money , not for Mr.Artist."



After Listening to what Riddhima said, Om did Feel that Ishana was also Like her .



His mind asked him To believe what Riddhima is saying and he did believe her but after Ishana's Confession, his Heart Cried.


It all felt so right, he should've listen His Heart."


It wasn't that late, Everyone Makes Mistakes but those who Accept Them and Try To correct it are the one who succed in their Lives.



Both Ishana And Om made Mistakes but now they're ready to Forget it and start a new life for themselves.




"Your not alone Ishana, I'm there With you.



I'm Really sorry yaar.



Pata hai sabse bada Stupid hoon mai, Jisse Pyaar karta hoo usko hi apne zindagi se door kar raha hai. Please Forgive me. I know I've made a huge Mistake..."




"Not you, We've made a huge Mistake. Let's just Forget it..."




"And be back Together..."




"Again..."




"But wait , This Time No More..."




"No More Secrets..."




X.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.xx.x.x..x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x


Hello Meri Pyaare Readers,
I know i have to Update my Fanfic but I wanted to write this Os soo badly from when. Today itself I wrote it , hopefully you guys Enjoyed Reading it. *FingersCrossed*
Give in your Comments and Let me know How did You Find It.
Liked it ? Loved it ? Hated it?
Everything is welcome.
Love Kriti :)




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Anika_PreRish thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow.. this is really awesome..
finally,IshKara are back together and no more secrets between them.
Ishana was so much in pain.. Felt bad for her.
Riddhima hai hi itni selfish.. huh!!
do write more.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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At this time the only heal for ishkarians is the writers stories...
well written yaar..hope in the show something like this happens..om understood her emotions..
loved it...do write more
IshKara😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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res
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M lazy to unres it late..Bt this convo is d exact convo I want between Ishkara...
Too Gud yaar... I loved it so much...😳
Edited by D_mi_cheeky_me. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was sooo beautiful
Urgh i hate ridhima😡 just want her to leave Om alone...
The pain that Ishana is going through is well portrayed👏
I cant understand how ishanas dad can be so cruel like this? like she sacrificed all her needs for this man and all he does is throw her out of the house when his daughter is taken away?
Loved the Os❤️
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dear, its very beautiful. Both feelings, especially Ishaana's were put perfectly. Keep writing more..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sweet..
Always understanding Omkara...

Thanks for the PM btw...
Edited by Akshata2010 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Kriti,
Lovely Os
You've depicted the pain, guilt and frustrations so well.
There was so much angst,
but I loved it.

XO
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww this too good dear !! Really beautiful - the angst was portrayed brilliantly.
Hats off - yaar mere aankhon mein sach mein aasoon aa gaye.
I could feel them enact this out in front of my eyes.
Amazing !! Keep writing.
Thank you so much for the PM!!❤️🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww.. Rulaa diya yaar! (i mean, literally).
It was soo good. I would have the first to reply but meri exams chal rahi hain and I just didn't have the time. LOVED IT LOVED IT.


AND you wanted criticism right?? I have no idea what to criticize. It was just bittersweet with a happy ending.

Now all I can hope is, don't make Ishaana's real name Bela ;)

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