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soumya

@Ayuzawa

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Omg...I had read a similar story in manmarziya forum on Ardhika. Was that you?

I really really wanted to start an ff on ishkara after I finished my current one and I had specifically chosen thus concept after having read the book but now that you have written this I cannot imagine anything more perfect than this.

Well I missed my chance.

This was really beautiful thought. Strong emotions and gripping execution. Love it. Do PM me when you update.

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Koeli

@Koeli

Channel Moderator

+ 16

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Ayuzawa
Omg...I had read a similar story in manmarziya forum on Ardhika. Was that you?
I really really wanted to start an ff on ishkara after I finished my current one and I had specifically chosen thus concept after having read the book but now that you have written this I cannot imagine anything more perfect than this.
Well I missed my chance.
This was really beautiful thought. Strong emotions and gripping execution. Love it. Do PM me when you update.

Yup I did posted it there as well... U can still write on this concept don't hold back... It isn't souly my concept either na...

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Koeli

@Koeli

Channel Moderator

+ 16

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: -Abhiya-
too much awesome
loved the way u decribed Om's emotions n Ishana's bitterness
loved the last dialogue
cont soon

Thanks... I hope I can justify it 😊

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Koeli

@Koeli

Channel Moderator

+ 16

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan
omg!!!! wow ...
awesome start
i like the story
he is already in love with her
yup she is a fighter... n strongest person
love their convo
its not so easy for om...
update soon npm m if possible

Thank you 😊

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bhavika

@BhaviJas

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

This is so damn painful...can feel Ishana's pain...
update soon.

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Saumya

@Sparklle801

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

So interesting and capturing story. I am not much in the dark and intense love stories but I am surely going to read this one.
Update soon.

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Fireflake

@Fireflake

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

This was beyond amazing!
Reading this just broke my heart for Ishana. She has so much of agony and hurt inside her.
She has encapsulated herself within the darkness and her pain.
Yes Om! Don't give up on her. You can bring her out of this.
This was a treat to read! 👍🏼
Waiting for more updates.