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Posted: 8 years ago
a super fantastic update...grt wrk dear...grtt...luvd it to core...pls do update soon😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
very beautiful part...
loving the OmRu bonding and miss them in the show...
wish they take lots of rest and get well soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ishra-rocks

Awesome update... ❤️

Thankyou for liking it dear
Edited by FlauntPessimism - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Oh Deeps...I missed the PM 😆
Ahh...the well beloved Obbros..how I've missed them 😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
superb dear 👏 👏 👍🏼. i always wanted to see omru bromance. but IB team now turning the story line into most common marriage,love,hate and pregnancy tracks. and worst case is now kunal and leenesh are suffering from dengue and missing from the show 🤔. i am badly missing their chemistry in the show.
I expected when rudra got shot they will show more emotional scenes btween omru. but no😕
then i thought when rudra kidnapped by rumi will show some omru bromance. but no 😭

reading ur ff is more interesting than watching the serial. please upload soon. i have daily checked this link to see whether u uploaded or not. plz plz upload atleast one epi per week ❤️ ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: arachne

Oh Deeps...I missed the PM😆

Ahh...the well beloved Obbros..how I've missed them😭

Nhi issues dear, thanks for commenting 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
I was waiting fr the update...read it in office and enjoyed to the core...
Om is going to leave his dream for Rudr
Rudr victim of bullying...

I just wish that CV's read such ff's on forum and get some better ideas this was the Ishqbaaz bonding we wanted to see...

waiting for next update pessimistically as u update after a long time :P
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Posted: 8 years ago
Oh my God!!i read it all in one go.its amazing..
wow so wonderful to see the bond between bros..
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Posted: 8 years ago
"What this was all happening and you didn't tell me?", he heard Shivaaye's voice from the other side of the phone, "So what would have you done?", said Rudra, "You are not even here to do something, And I didn't want you to fly down to Mumbai, just to teach Reyaan a lesson. Plus that was not even required, O can manage such petty stuff", "Petty stuffs?", said Omkara, "Actually I was ready there to help him, but before I could have come to his rescue Reyaan himself said he wouldn't irritate anymore, I think he realized that the person in front of him is the brother of Rudra Singh Oberoi"

"OK enough", Omkara replied, "Shut up and hand over the phone to me" and he snatched the phone without waiting for a response. "But I have to talk to him", said Rudra. "I said shut up and off to the bed" said Om while pointing his fingers towards the bed. Rudra left with a grumble

"I am sorry Om, you had to suffer so much due to Rudra.", said Shivaaye, "I never knew that he had this problem or else I would have...", "It's OK Shivaaye", said Om while turning towards Rudra, "Good that he has already got experience of being bullied, now he wouldn't have issues when we bully him. Ok I have some work, lets talk later"

"WHat is this O, why did you tell to Bhaiyya that you will bully me?", Rudra exclaimed, "And what were you boasting about Reyaan being afraid of you", Om asked with a smile. "Yes... ummm, actually I, ... I wanted bhaiyya to know about it" said Rudra. "Really" said Om with a smile, "Do you know what I want. Slapping you" "What???...", even before Rudra could have understood, Omkara gave a pat on his cheeks. "O this is so not..." Pat on the head this.
This continued for next five minutes while Rudra was trying to say something which might stop Om, and Om was just patting him at different places. finally Rudra gave up any attempt to save himself and just joined into laughter with Om.

"I never knew that being with you could be so much fun", said Om. "But I always knew", replied Rudra with his gaze down, "That is why I always did stuffs to make you angry, you felt nice while scolding me na. And then while scolding me you spoke to me, so wasn't it a win win situation for both of us, I am a genius, don't know why you don't agree O" He raised his eyes while saying the last line. "Rudra!", Om said while brushing through the hairs of Rudra. "Would I always remain O for you? Would ever find me worthy enough to become your Bhaiyya. I know I had said that I am not your brother, but...", "Yes you would always remain O for me, ", replied Rudra, "You can never become Bhaiyya, because that position in my life is restricted for Shivaaye Bhaiyya, just like the position of O in my life is restricted for you"

"I think I uselessly came back", said Shivaaye while entering the kitchen where Om was preparing some dish and Rudra was trying to supervise him. "You both seem to do pretty well without me". "bhaiyya!", shouted Rudra while humping towards him, "Thankfully you are here otherwise I had to eat whatever half baked or burnt food that O prepared", "Really!", said Om, "yes Shivaaye great that you are back. Now at least I do not need to spend my entire day preparing food for this glutton, I can concentrate a bit on my art now.

"Oh hello", Shivaaye replied, "So I look like a cook to you both" His voice startled Om and Rudra for a moment. "No Shivaaye, I meant...", said Om while reaching near him. "Good that you learnt how to cook Om", said Shivaaye even before Om could have ended his statement, "now you can easily assist me and folks I would cook only when both of you are assisting me" , he continued with a wink before getting into a hug with his brothers.

"Guys don't you think the moment is gone", Suddenly Shivaaye and Rudra heard Om's voice, "it was emotional earlier, but has become awkward now";. They smiled releasing each other from their grip, fully knowing that the moment can never end and their relation would always hold the strongest position in the world


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Thanks all for liking my FF, this was my first attempt
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Posted: 8 years ago
the part was beautiful, Omru bonding, Rudra praising himself, and Om scolding him, patting him and win-win situation rudra said. Also taks with shivaay, bonding and talks when he returned and shivaay says about assisting in kitchen and Obros moments will be forever. Beautiful chapter/

I did not expect the FF to end, but a superb FF, I will give feedback on other chapters as I get time.
Edited by Madhura.. - 8 years ago

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