FF: It Hurts : PART 1

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Posted: 9 years ago
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From time to time I get really weird ideas so I am just going to make a story out of that too.

PART1

Once upon a time in the 21st century, there lived a family in Delhi known as the Oberois. It consisted of seven members; Jhanvi and Pinky, the daughter-in-laws of the house (both widowed), Jhanvi's children Omkara, Rudra and Priyanka, Pinky's son Shivaay and daughter-in-law Anika. Everyone except Shivaay and Pnky loved Anika. Shivaay married her as it was the last wish of his Dadi. But the mother-son pair despised her to the core and never lose a chance to insult her, alone, in front of the family or in front of society. But Anika? As long as she had the support and love of her Januma, Priyanku, Omie and Hunky, she was fine with everything.

It was another ordinary day in the Oberoi mansion. Anika woke up early in the morning, got ready and did all the works from cleaning the house to making breakfast by seven o' clock. Now it was time to wake up the muzeebats. Omie was the easiest to wake and he would go and wake Priyanku, but our Hunky slept like a log and not even bhoogamb would wake him up.

Anika rolled a magazine and kept it to his ears and screeched,

"OMG Rudra, tumhaari ex teri car ki windshield thod rahi hai!!"

"MY CARR!!!!!" he jumped out of his bed and ran out.

"He still falls for that." Janvi laughed as she came in.

"Maine usse fox aur shepherd ki kahaani sunayi and told him that one doesn't when its gonna come true."

"Seriously Anu, you are too good with everything." she said, with emphasis on everything.

"Not everything" Anika smiled sadly but quickly replaced it with a bright grin. "Ma aap Rudr ka coffee dena. main jaakar dekhthi hoon Shivaay ready ho gaya hain ki nahi!" She left Janvi alone.

Janvi sighed. It's been an year and a half since the two were married, but Shivaay only saw flaws in her. No matter what she did, he would always pick out the mistakes and insult her for each of it. It is very hard on her, everyone could see that. Maybe that's what Pinky and Shivaay wanted; for her to get fed up and leave them. But every time she had such thoughts, the other three had to bring her out of it, because this was the Oberoi parivaar and 'yaha par divorce nahi hotha'




Anika opened the door to see Shivaay in his briefs.

"EEE" she screeched and turned around.

"WTH?? Tum knock nahi kar sakthi?? Bloody uncultured."
Ouch that hurt..

"Sorry, woh main sirf yeh poochne aaya tha agar aapko kuch chaahiye?" Anika inquired still facing the wall.

"Yea right, jaise tum sab kuch pefectly karthi ho. You can turn around." She turned around to see him wear his coat. "Kuch nahi hoti tumse? Yeh suit, mujhe dhobara iron karna pada. Waste of time."

"Par maine iron nahi ki-"

"Har baath par excuse laana zaroori hai?? Badi Pativrutha banthe goomthe-phirthe ho, mera chota sa cheezon ka bhi kayaal nahi hai tumhei !"

"Sorry"

"TUMHEI SORRY KE ALAAVA KUCH AATHA HAI?? KAL MUJPAR CHAAKU CHALAYEGI AUR KAHENGI, 'I AM SO SORRY!' HEY NA???"

"Haye, teri itni himmat, tum meri bete par chaaku chalaayi??" Pinky came in right then.

"God mom-"

"Tum jaisi aurat aisi hi hoti hain, divorce karegi toh half hi property milegi na? Maar diya toh pura ka pura jaydaadh teri hi ho jaayegi hai na?? Meri saas ne tum jaisi luchchi giri huye aurat mein kya dekhi?? Murderer khaiki!! Nikal jaao yaha se."

Tears threatened to fall from her eyes but she held them and quickly got of there. People would think she was accustomed to it by now but all the 'I am fine' smiles were a dikaava. She found it suffocating to be with her saas now.

It hurts a lot..

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Anika_PreRish thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
IT HURTS to see Annika getting hurt by Shivaay and Pinky..
Thank God others support her.
please continue sooonish
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Great Update
Annika is hiding so much of her Pain maybe Because She loves Shivay a lot 😭
I want her to just Annoy Pinky 🤬 and throw her out.
Update jaldi .. want to know what happens next .
Pm karna maat bhulna.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#4
Interesting
Update soon and do pm me too
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Posted: 9 years ago
#5
Okay, that hurt!
His words were no less then a blade that cut her through.
Anika, stay strong girl!
Waiting for the next update. 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesomeee
can't see anika in pain
but i loved his bond with the rest of the family
and want to just kick shivaye & pinly
update sooon
and pm me tooo plss
when you update next
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start
Continue and update soon :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I know its been a long time but i hope you plan to update this.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#9
This is hurting...very much...how can Shivaay do this..nd how can Pinky do this???
But nyc plot..
Pls do continue sooon..
Love Sharmi
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Posted: 8 years ago
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it hurts for me too to read shivaay being so mean and pinky too
very intriguing tho continue soon

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