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Posted: 9 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: srividhya68

wow
amazing upt
loved it
ObBros are always the best
keeping a secret from each other is impossible
Annika is giving lame excuses to not hire shivaay😆
the way omru tickled shivaay was so cute & lovely
finally shivaay confessed in front of his brothers
waiting for Shivika's nhok-jokh
cont soon


Thanks ObBros are just love
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: chandanagimsy

Finally omg..please update soon..can't wait for next...aww childish rudra and om ish are married wow.. But what happened in one year for anika and shivaay... Please tel na


Thanks for your comment
I started this story when shivaay gave 3 day challenge. It is basically on how Shivaay won but that ended up realizing he was wrong and in love. Now one year later they meet
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
Thank you so much for your response.I know the last chapter wasn't up to mark yet you all have been so generous to like it. So here you go the other half of the previous chapter but I will title it as Chapter 5. It is not very long I Know.

Chapter 5

"Seriously Shivaay am so happy for you. My big brother found true love. FINALLY", Omkara spoke happily
"Bhaiya aap ki aur Annika Di ki Shaadi ke liye I am so excited. Waise main Annika Di se bhi angry hu", Rudra pouted
"Waise Shivaay yeh dramebaaz sahi khe raha hai. I didn't expect this from Annika", Omkara said in fake anger
"Tum dono uss bechari ke peche kyun pade ho", Shivaay said defensively
"Bechari", OmRu said together giving Shivaay a look
"She hasn't hidden anything from you guys, I have. She doesn't even know what's in my heart and I don't plan to tell her a thing", Shivaay told them
"Why?", Rudra asked confused
"Haan Shivaay tu kyun nahi batayega usse", Omkara asked not able to understand.
"I don't deserve her, I never actually did and after what I had done too her definitely not. She is an angel and I am some kind of devil", Shivaay spoke lost
"Aap mere superman ko devil nahi bol sakte", Rudra added defensively
"Shivaay manna ke you were a bit extra rude with her, sending her to jail, but I am sure once she gets to know the real Shivaay Singh Oberoi, she will instantly fall in love", Omkara told his elder brother
"There is more. I hurt her. I was inhumane.", Shivaay spoke still lost
"I know you Shivaay, You would never hurt anyone unless there is a good reason", Omkara told Shivaay hinting that he wanted to hear the truth
"There is nothing that can happen, all is lost and is all my fault. I misunderstood and she had to pay the prize", Shivaay spoke closing his eyes as those flashbacks ran through his head.
"Tell me What happened", Omkara asked
"Nothing", Shivaay said not wanting to remind his younger brother about Sevetlana and Tej video clip.
"Tujhe meri Kasam Shivaay, saach bolo", Omkara asked him this time a bit angrily.
Shivaay narrated everything from the start how he got the video clip, how he ended up displacing it, annika giving him the clip, he blaming her, he vowing to destroy her, how he destroyed her, the day he found out she was innocent and Tia's mother was behind it.
"It is all my fault isn't it. It was all because of me. If I accidentally did not end up taking those pills you wouldn't have been that angry, it is all my fault. I am so stupid", Omkara chided himself
"Don't you dare, don't you dare speak a word against my brother. He is the best person I know, zindagi mein mushkil hone ke bajaye he keeps spreading smiles around him if this isn't a sign of strength what is", Shivaay wiped of the tears of his younger brother taking him into a bear hug.
"Aap dono humesha mujhe bhul jate ho", Rudra pouted and the other two opened their arms and Rudra smiled and joined in as well.
"Rudra, phele moment emotional tha ab awkward hai", Omkara spoke and Shivaay joined in
"Yeh moment humesha khatam kaise ho jata hai", Rudra asked confused and his two brothers smiled in reply while he had a confused look.
"Om kya bade papa ne kissi meeting ka zikar kiya", Shivaay asked
"Tujhe ab bhi businesses ki padi hai", Omkara asked looking a bit irritated
"haan after all it is all our hard work", Shivaay replied but stopped suddenly as if he was going to say something but wasn't too sure
"Kya baat hai. Will you hesitate before telling me something", Omkara asked assuring Shivaay that he could share problems with
"App mere saath bhi baat kar sakte hai", Rudra added
"Kya tu busy hai", Shivaay questioned
"Not really", replied Omkara
"Bhaiya mein bahut busy hoon, college, gym, girls but app ke liye time nikal lunga", Rudra replied
"Tu kuch waqt ke liye office handle kar sakta hai. Bade papa bimaar hai aur main nahi jaa sakta. If I can depend on anyone it's you two but I don't want your lives to suffer in any way.", Shivaay spoke
"Just this much", OmRu replied
"But mujh se vaada karo that you won't change any of your schedules for this. Your happiness shouldn't suffer", Shivaay told them
"Ek problem hai bhaiya hum dono ko business ka B nahi ataa", Rudra replied
"Sahi khe raha hai I couldn't complete my education because of the drugs and for him college is only a place to visit friends and look at girls. Kaash main drugs ke influence mein nahi aata. If you hadn't made me focus on art I would have been completely useless", Omkara replied tears coming to his eyes.
"You are calling one of India's best selling artist useless. Uss artist ke fans kya kahenge", Shivaay asked him
"Arre O be worried about the fans later. You spoke against Shivaay Singh Oberoi brother, ab pata nahi wo apka kya karega", Rudra continued the tease
"Okay fine Shivaay Singh Oberoi ke bhai aur India ke best selling artist ki burayi karne ke liye maafi chata hun. Know let's focus on how we handle the business. Shivaay agar tu humari help kare toh. I mean hum tujhe sari details mail karde and you give us solutions", Omkara replied
"That seems perfect", Shivaay stated
"Phir hum chalte hai waise bhi It is getting late we will meet tomorrow", Omkara spoke and left with Rudra
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"Sahil, yeh tu kya kha raha hai", Annika asked
"Arre Di uss baggad billa ne banaya tha aloo ke prathe, wohi kha raha hun bahut tasty hai", Sahil replied licking his fingers
"Tujhe aloo ke prathe khane hai toh main bana dungi isse mat kha", said Annika irritated
"Lekin kyun Di yeh toh kitne tasty hai aur app hi kheti hai humein khana waste nahi karna chaiye", Sahil replied taking his second paratha
"Uss baggad billa ki wajhe se mera bhai meri baat nahi maan raha. Uss mein iss naukri se bhaga kar rahungi. I hate you Shivaay Singh Oberoi ", Annika mummered to herself
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"Oberoi House mein sab kaisa hai", Sevetlana asked
"Bahut hi bura aur wo hi humare liye bahut acha hai. Aaj tak mein ne in bhaiyon ko ek dusre ke khilaf khade hote nahi dekha, but aaj subha jab mein Omkara ke kamre se guzri wo aur Rudra lad rahe the", Roop replied back
"Aisa nahi lagta we are winning very easily", Sevetlana asked
"Winning after a wait of 20 years isn't an easy win.
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Will be waiting for your reviews.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84
Superb update...
It was awesome...full of bromance...
pls...continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
Brilliant update! Can't wait to read what's next! Anika in revenge mode is super hot and loved the scene where the bros talk. Hope you update soonish!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
20 yrs! There's some mystery! Really loved the ObBros scene! Can't wait to see OmRu handling the business, especially Rudra!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Brilliant update..this is amazing..it is par my expectations I can say..the bond between shiomru wow... Can't even describe...and now waiting for what anika will do... Excited for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
I really like reading your story...it has a dash of sweetness, touch of bromance and full of mystery...I am hooked to the story...you are good writer...waiting for next update...and do pm me...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: twerping

Brilliant update! Can't wait to read what's next! Anika in revenge mode is super hot and loved the scene where the bros talk. Hope you update soonish!


Thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: Akshata2010

Can't wait for more..


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