AnShi SS: Staying In Each Other's Company. Finished last chp pg:55 - Page 22

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Posted: 8 years ago
BEAUTIFUL is the word...😃😃
just BEAUTIFUL...😊😊...
I loved the update...❤️
Waow...TejVi are sooo adorable & PinIka (Pinky + Anika) bonding was so good...
& ofcourse ShivIka are soo cute together...OmRu as usual the best...👏👏
Update soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Read it!! You have a really good imagination when it comes to suspense and drama!! The way you mix romance with suspense and exciting events is really awesome! I was visualising this scene while reading it and it was just delightful! Tia finally gets her punishment but poor thing, I kind of feel bad for her as well. She is genuinely in love with SVR it seems and love is capable of making you do things that otherwise you wouldn't dream of! Glad Svetlana and Roop got exposed! Looking forward to next part!
Just one suggestion, please could you add hyperlinks to the page numbers in the index on the first page? Please, pretty please! It would make it easier to navigate through the chapters!
Thank you so much for the pm! 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hello ppl...i specially want to thank all my loyal readers...Angels..., angel writer, my sweety Annika_Ishqbaaz, mystic river, Srividhya, nisha a.k.a nichuss, mihika..(missing her😭), zub_air, jo har baar sabse zyada lambha Comments deti hai vo hai..cuteariya, meri romance ki queen..Olicity queen😳, laurel24, pikychu, irosii, jazmeen, my tashan wali dost...lina a.k.a bit khusharberry😊, Vishaka, yadanu, crazyforu, Sophia21, SanyaEterna ...nd many more..
And a big thank u to twerps a.k.a. twerping...who gave me such a beautiful comment on my work...which made me feel so high...ab neeche hi hun...😆
Thank u so much guyz. Love u all..A big hug from me to you all🤗.
I feel so loved..u ppl r soo encouraging.

Well i hope i havent bored u soo much with this thank u bakwaas😆.here is my next part...get going for ShivIka...😉

Part 13: Phail Gaya Raita!!😳

Everything went well..it was around 9.30 when Anika was cooking in Shivaay's kitchen. She made some gajar ka halwa for her three bros who were damn hungry...OmRu nd Sahil. Shivaay entered the kitchen.
"Umm...smells really good!" She heared him say...but she found the voice to be a bit closer than usual. She turned nd there he was right behind her. She blushed lightly.
"Ab kya?" She asked him demandingly...
He circles his hand around hwr waist when..
"Ouch!" Ye kya kar rahi ho tum?" He asked her rubbing his hand. She had hit his hand with the back of the laddle.
"Aap kya kar rahe the?" She turned and questioned him.
"Vo..." nd he looks at her his cheeks were red..she smiled at it. He pouted.."Aisa koi maarta hai kya?"
"Aww i am..." she saw him grinning..."...not sorry" she finished. She chuckled looking at the expression on his face.
"Ab ye sab chodiye aur isse chak kar ke dekhiye." She handed a spoon of the dessert to him.
"Waise tum gajjar ke halwa banane mein expert ho..mujhe kyun keh rahi ho taste karne keliye?" He asked wriggling his eyebrows...
"Vo kya hai na..."
"Mujhe pata hai. i noe ki mein Master Chaf hun but..."
"O hello zyada udo matt. Aaj kuch kam lag raha hai isiliye maine aapse poocha ki taste karo. Par aap toh hamesha Tadi maarne mein busy ho."
"Accha theek hai...main taste kartha hun." He tastes the dish.
"Sugar is less."
Now Anika adds more sugar.
"Ab chak ke dekhiye..."
"Nahi mujhe lagta hai is mein ab bhi meeti thodi kam hai..tum cha ke batao na."
He takes a spoon full nd feeds her.
"Mujhe toh theek lag raha hai."
He eats the left out Sweet in the spoon she ate...
"Ab meeti hai."
She blushes...
"Thoda zyada nahi hogaya?"
"Bilkul nahi..." nd moves forward nd lookes into her eyes..
Both smiling..
"Bagad Billa kahinka" she says nd turns to fill the three bowls wid the dessert for her three lovely bros.
"Waise jab hum dono saath mein khana banate hain toh swaad zyada bad tha hain na...Simply delicious!" He said.
"Accha. Toh hum dono kyun na ek restaurant khol le...accha business hoga. Hai na?" She said.
"Mujhe isse koi problem nahi hai...isi tarah agar hum dono ek saath honge toh life ka swaad aur bhi bad jaaye ga na."
He said circling one arm around her waist. She blushed nd looked at him as he came forward.
"Anika did kahan ho aap?" Rudra's voice was echoing throught the hall. Anika realised that he was heading to the kitchen. She moved away from Shivaay took the tray in her hands nd left. Shivaay smiled and left.
After spending some beautiful time wid her bros she left to her room. Sahil was sleeping with OmRu. As she entered she found something on her bed. It was gift wid a note on top.
The note read..
"10.30 near pool side..Mein tumhare liye intezaar karoonga. Aur yehi dress pehenke aana.
She opened the present nd she was surprised to see the dress. It was a beautifull red gown with low neck nd a deep v cut at the back. She was surprised. She took a bath dried her hairs..wore her favourite body spray nd got dressed. She pulled her hair into a messy bun a few strands framing her beautiful face. Added some red gloss to her lips. The mascara was pukled up more up. She was looking gorgeous.
It was 10.30 everyone at the house were asleep after all that hungama at the engagement today. She went to the pool side area. It was beautifully decorated. It was simple. A heart made wid rose petals right in the middle of the place. And candles all around.
"Kisi mujhse kaha tha ki "Agar ladki ko kuch simple tareeke se pasand ho tho?" Isiliye maine bohoth simple sa ye pool side ko sajaya hai. I hope tumhe pasan aaya." A voice that broke her trance. He walked in a black armani suit. Perfectly fitting his manly features.
He walked and stood right at the the heart made with rose petals.
She was standing a bit far from him.
"My dear Paanika...i mean Anika aaj mein tumse kuch kehna chata hun. Mein feelings express karne mein thoda weak hun..par adjust kar lo. Bohit mehnath karke apne dil ke baat bolne jaa raha hun. Aur pls beech mein mat bolna.
Vo kya hai na mujhe pehle laga tha ki iss duniya mein paisa har cheez khareed saktha hai. Aur paisa hi iss duniya mein har rishte ki bunyaad hai. Par mein galat tha aur mujhe ye sab tumse milne ke baad hi pata chala. Tum ne mujhe zindagi ko dekhne ki nazariya hi badal di.
Mein hamesha OmRu se kehta raha tha ki mujhe tumse koi pharak nahi padtha...par mujhe baad mein samaj mein aaya ki mein sach mein Idiot Singh Oberoi hun. Jitni baar maine bola ki mujhe koi pharak nahi padtha mujhe utni baar zyaada phar padne laga. Sab ne kaha ki mein badal raha hun. Aur maine bhi ye baat realize ki.
Aur mujhe ye change accha laga. Jab main tujhe nahi dekhta tha..toh meri aankhen sirf tumhe dhoonthi hai..aur kabhi kabhi main koi na koi bahane banakar tumse baat kar leta tha. Purposely ladaiyan shuru ki taaki mein tujhe haar baar ki tarah admire karoon. Tumhari language bhi mujhe acche lagne lagi..tumhare aloo puri bhi. Jaanta hun thoda stupid hai par kya karoon tumne mujhe phasa diya. Aur mein bure thareeke se phass gaya.
Mein tadi maarna chata hun lekin mere naam ke saath tumhare naam jod kar. Jo cheez tumhe michmichi hoti hai na mein usse apne se bhi dur karlung. Aaj se saira bano bhi nahi peeyunga...matlab meri kaali coffee. Aur tum meri har cheez la naam rak sakthi ho. Aur main bhi usse uske naam se bulaunga. Tumhe jab bhi gussa aayega na to tum mujh par paani phek sakthi ho. Aur jab chaaho mujhe billu bula sakthe ho. Sahil bhi humare saath hi rahega shaadi ke baad. Main promise kartha hun meri puri family mere Maa papa mujhse zyaada tumse pyaar kare. Jaisa tum chahthi thi vaisa hi ek hasti khelthi parivaar ke saath rahogi. Aur tumhari iss smile ko bhi tumse dur nahi jaane dunga. Meri har decision mein tum meri saath dogi. Tumhare har gham aur khushi mein mein tera saath dunga.
MEIN APNA PURI ZINDAGI TUMHARE SAATH RAITA PHELANA CHATHA HUN. IJAZAT HAI MUJHE?"

Anika was staring at him in awe during the while scene. Her eyes were pouring happy tears. She was the happiest person in the whole world. She just ran and hugged him tight.
She was litreally hanging on him. He too hugged her inresponse.
"MAIN AAPKE SAATH APNI PURI ZINDAGI MEIN RAITA PHELANE KE LIYE TAYYAR HUN"
Theyparted themselves from the hug but still were in each others arms. His arm around her waist nd her hands around his neck.
"Ab bol do no vo three words."
"Kaunse three words Shivaay?"
"Arrey vahi..."
"Par pehle ladke ko bolna chahiye..."
"Nahi maine toh itna lamba speech diya tha na toh ab tum bolo."
"Theeke ek kaam karthe hain hum donk saath mein bolenge."
"Ye acche idea hai".
"Anika.."
"Shivaay"...
1..2..3..
I LOVE YOU...they said in unison.
Both smiled widely. Their happiness knew no bounds.
"Shall i have the pleasure of dancing wid u?" Nd he lends out his hand.
She gives her in.
Shivaay snaked his left arm around her waist nd pulled her closer. Nd she kept her right hand on his shoulder.
"Waise Thank u...Shivaay"
"Kis liye?"
"Vo sab kehne keliye...aur main aapko ek baat bata dun...mujhe bhi bilkul accha nahi lagta tha agar main aapko nahi dekhthi tho. Mein bhi aapke baare mein hamesha sochthi rehti hun. Aap bohot acche hain Shivaay".
Shivaay arched an eyebrow at her revelations. He twirled her around nd made her back face his chest.
"U r looking Ravishing!😳
Anika heavily blushed at this statement. He traced a finger down her arm. He bent nd started placing soft feathery kisses on her nape.
She breathed heavily. He turned her around nd started sucking her neck. She gasped. Her heart was pounding very hard against her chest. It was like it would jump out any moment. He finally took in her lips. She clutched his shirt wid one handnd the other had a fistfull of his hair. He drew circles around her waist. His cold fingers touching her bare skin made her hot from inside. She pulled him closer nd bit his lower lip causing him to moan. He savoured her mouth for a long time. They parted nd they were breathing heavily. She saw his eyes were blazzing wid fire. The fire of desire..
She tried to run. But he caught her wrist nd pulled her closer to him. He leaned in further...

CLIFF HANGER!!!
SRRY FOR THIS...I HVE TO GO SO FORGIVE ME PLS...
WELL I HOPE U GUYZ LIKED THIS PART. I ALSO HOPE I DIDNT BORE U GUYZ TOO MUCH.. PLS IGNORE MISTAKES...
DO LEAVE UR COMMENTS ND LIKES

BYE BYE..GOOD NIGHT PPL.
Edited by lucky_princess - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
awsm loved it
nicely written
cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Sharmi, this is brilliant!!!!!!!!!!
Anika is so sweet, making Gajar ka halwa for her three bros
Sahil, Rudra and Om😳
Shivaay is so romantic😳
He truly loves her waist😆
Even in the show😆
Some of my favourite lines are"Ab meeti hai."
1..2..3..
I LOVE YOU... and"My dear Paanika...i mean Anika😆
And the last half is so passionate!
You are a wonderful and talented writer dear!
I enjoy reading every single piece of work!
You always write so well and even this time you have not failed to impress me! I can't wait for the next part!
Update whenever you can dear🤗
Thank you so much for the pm😳
Lots of love Angel❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome...
loved it truely passionately...
lol...shivika SHIVIKA. ...
update soon cant wait much..
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Posted: 8 years ago
omg its mind blowing awesome
i really loved it
wow i really loved shivaays confession
yaar u stopped at wrong point uff
plzz do continue soon
thanks for the pm dear 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Shivika...death karvayenge meri. ...
What a wonderful update...superb
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Posted: 8 years ago
Aww!! This was soo cute!! I think that speech of Shivaay is most definitely a masterpiece!!
Mein meri zindagi mein tumhare saath raita pheylna chahta hoon!! Ouff!! That definitely has to be the most romantic thing ever said! Loved it,right from the kitchen romance to the pool side proposal! Take a bow for the speech, Sharmi! It was brilliant! I would love to hear him say that to her in the show! 😉

Thanks so much for the PM! 🤗
Eagerly awaiting the next update! Expecting the heat to rise a few notches!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Such an amazing update Aww u thanked us so sweet of u infact thanks hamy bolna chaye bcz of u we actually enjoying such an great story

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