Omkaara : Ankahe Jazbaad!!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Watching the last episode... this was making rounds of my mind...
An extremely passionate fiction and poetry reader and writer that I am... I couldn't help but pen Omkaara's emotions in the form of a small 4 stanza poem!!! 😳
Hoping for your good/criticising response with equal anticipation...😊


Ankahe jazbaad...


Aaj bhi jo ek baar lab muskuraate,
Nazron me tairte gham har nazar se chhip jaate...
Zaroorat thi gar kisi ki dil ko toh bas vo gustaakh,
Aahaton se padhta jazbaad, lafz chhipa le laakh...


Raatein toh sukoon se aaj bhi kat ti nahi ae bekhabar,
Raushni ki takraahat se phir dard ko mil jaata sabar...
Yu aankhein moond, sunte aaye hain zindagi ke kadwe saaz,
Ab zubaan chaahe bhi to keh nahi paati ansune raaz...


Sambhala phir mitti ki khushboo ne, the hausle choor,
Na dekha peechhe mud, usi mitti ko bana baithe apna fitoor...
Muddato baad jaana asli khushi ka sabab,
Na hasratein thi, na ummeedein dil me ab...


Tanhaayiyaan hai ab bhi, par saath ka bhi hain ehsaas,
Mujhe toot kar chaahe jo vo hain dil ke paas...
Rooh ka vo hain raabta, mohabbat ka zarna,
Zindagi le lena gham nahi ae khudaa, ehsaas ko kabhi door na karna...


Keywords (in case u don't understand urdu) 😆

*Gustaakh = audacious (referred in a positive way)
*Jazbaad = feelings
*Lafz = words
*Saaz = music/tunes (here referred to the painful happenings of life)
*Hausle = spirits
*Fitoor = passion
*Muddato = eons
*Sabab = cause
*Hasratein = desire
*Tanhaayiyaan = loneliness
*Rooh = soul
*Raabta = connection
*Zarna = flow



If a true Omkaara fan likes it, he/she won't show kanjoosi on hitting the like button 😉





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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amreen OH MY GOD this was mind blowing 👏 , 👏 , 👏 You are such a great writer.You Penned down everything so aptly. 👏 I hope your exams get over soon because i am dying to read more of your write-ups.
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Oh god dearo!! That was fantastic!! Loved it yr!!.. D words used wer just wow!! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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👏lovely
thnx for the meanings😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amreen meri behen aa gale lagjaa 🤗
It was beautiful re am proud of you
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is beautiful...I love poems and I was actually hoping someone would pen one and you did.
Wish fulfilled.

Thanks a lot.

And the way you depicted the emotions.

Ab zubaan chaahe bhi to keh nahi paati ansune raaz...

This line is my favourite. It spoke so much in so less words
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amy...perfect it was😳😳😳

thanx fr the meaning😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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this was perfect
amazing
I m short of words
u did an amazing job
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amreen its amazing ❤️
And thanks for the meanings at the end 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yar dil cholia apne to !!! ❤️
bhut UMDAAH!! 👏⭐️

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