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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
niki 😭
what is this now u killed all of them

i am so sad about this but yet a good update dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello guys! Back with another drabble!!



Jhanvi [Part 2 - The Brothers]


She leaned across the doorway; her eyes focused on the three figures deep asleep on the huge King-sized bed.

Her eyes drifted to the blue themed room which gave of a sense of calmness and serenity to the ambience.

There was a sudden shift on the bed and the figure in the middle ensnared the whole of the quilt in the blink of an eye.

Rudra had always been a demanding child. Thank God for Shivaay for without him she hadn't been capable of bringing him up. With a slow silent gait she stepped into the room her eyes flitting onto the motionless form of the three brothers.

On the right side of the bed lay Shivaay, fast asleep, his body curled towards Rudra.

Omkara lay on the left side of the bed and he too faced Rudra who lay with his mouth popping open like a child right between his brothers.

There was a subtle change in dynamics tonight; she could feel it.

Always it had been Shivaay who would lie in the middle but today it appeared as if both the older brothers had decided to shield the youngest from any gust of dastardly wind.

Jhanvi understood the reasons quite well.

After all Rudra had nearly got shot today. Thank God that the bullet merely grazed him and she knew well enough that no matter how much nonchalance Omkara and Shivaay portrayed at their younger brother's melodrama, both were nearly ballistic at the incident.

Shivaay's rage had become a spectacle with the media repeatedly airing it in their channels. But Om was not the silent sea of calmness either.

She was his mother and despite him being more closer to his brother; there was no way she could miss the bubbling rage in his eyes at the thought that someone had hurt his younger brother.

She sighed and there was a rustle of sheets. Looking back at the sleeping figures, her eyes met a different scene.

Omkara and Shivaay had each extended a hand and placed it on Rudra. They closed together like a vice-like chain to protect him from all the problems of the world.

For a moment they looked like an impenetrable fortress; something no power, no conspiracy, no greed could break.

Jhanvi smiled.

Edited by mistofshadows - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Res!

-Edited-

So short yet so sweet. It was a pleasure to see the bond between the brothers from an outside perspective. The way Jhanvi understands them and their love and bond was beautiful. She's too sweet and not disillusioned to accept that handling Rudr alone was never her cup of tea.

Dil bole, Oberoi! 😳
Edited by -Sarcy- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Nikki 🤗

I have to search new words to praise you.

As usual I loved it.

Jhanvi I have a girl crush on her 😳 . It's always a pleasure to read anything from Jhanvi's pov.

I want Tejvi one now am greedy when comes to Tejvi 😆

Waiting for the next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Ahhh nikki this was so heartwarming. Simple and yet so powerful.How beautifully you describe Jahnvi and her feelings.I love your writeups.They make me feel so good😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Damn! Damn! Damn!
This was too beautiful!
I simply love this woman's character!
Rudra is a baby to Shivaay and Omkara and the extents to which they go to, just to protect him, shield him, is admirable!
Eagerly waiting for your next update, Niki!

XOXO
~Red

P.S. Missed you!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Such a Beautiful one
Loved it ❤️
Love Kriti :)

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