Niki's Drabbles!!!! (Updated - page 6) - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I will come back to this one. Hey Mahadev; the number of works that I have to read are now piling up!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Hello,
Thank you for the PM.
This was so sad and profound.The woman who might be envied for having it all sits empty handed as she really has nothing.She has no husband to admire her strength and perseverance,love her,comfort her or support her.She doesn't really have a relationship with any of her three kids.She has a son she disappointed,another who simply views her as entertainment when she fights petty battles with her devrani and a girl who is almost always a bundle of nerves.Most importantly she hasn't got Jhanvi.
But this isn't the entire truth and I hope she realizes that she isn't that poor after all.Why I feel she feels this way is because I think is because she has lost Jhanvi in this gimmick of a marriage.
Amazing work yet again.
Take care.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Niki this was so beautiful. I love the way you describe everything. So apt 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Another beautiful drabble..
Really loved it a lot...
Do post next one asap..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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👏👏👏👏
Jhanvi has everything but still she's all alone
No one can imagine how much she suffers internally 🥺
Great one , waiting for the next one and thankie for the pm :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
awesome update niki
jhanvis feeling was described so welly
it's so true she has everything , everyone carve for every luxury of the world
but still she is the poorest of all
wow , awesome scene created by the magic of words niki
jhanvi was so welly described yrr
love it
thanks for pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27

AN: Hello guys! Another drabble.

Warning: Character Death


Death


They stared at each other.

The position they stood in, a perfect triangle, was not a new one. The three facets of a whole they would often stand in that pattern to give each equal attention.

But today the atmosphere sang of a different tone.

The air leaned heavily, crooning a tale of love, a tale of pain, a tale of sacrifice. It spoke of three souls so entwined that they delved into the poison of Tartarus as a whole and emerged through the Styx, their hands clutching each other.

The tendrils weaved a saga of unending hope and blissful camaraderie; one that breached every boundary. Yet, as time would have it, the wheel of fate turned and today stood three souls; broken, torn, hurt and shredded beyond imagination.

Their hurts, their pain, their anguish welled in their eyes as they stared at each other; their eyes devouring each other like it was the last time.

And so it was.

The blue-eyed brother put his hand into his pockets and slowly took it out.

The metal glinted in the light.

The other two followed.

The pattern they had formed appeared different now. The ease had disappeared, emotions cut off.

But there was a melancholy, a poignant feeling reverberating.

They took their positions, arms stretched forward, clasping the shoulder of one brother in one side and pointing the gun at the heart of the other brother.

They took a deep breathe in unison.

Their hearts thudded, an unbelievable amount of hurt weighing it.

And amidst that was a feeling of calmness, a relief palpable.

If not together, they would not live.

If Death unites them, so be it!

They closed their eyes and pulled the triggers.

BANG!

THE DAILY GAZETTE

Oberoi Brother's shot to Death

An event of tragedy shook the country when the heirs of the biggest business moguls of the country, the Oberois were found dead in a locked room of a cheap motel in the downside alley. The public reels with shock at this incident and investigation has spurred up to extract an understanding of the whole issue.

The dead; Shivaay Singh Oberoi(32), Omkara Singh Oberoi(28) and rudra Singh Oberoi(25); had been reported to have left their respective residences in the afternoon around 1 o'clock and had apparently been unavailable to the family members and business associates since then.

Shivaay Singh Oberoi is a well-known business tycoon and Omkara Singh Oberoi is a notable name in the world of sculpture and art. Rudra Singh Oberoi is a popular name for his high-end parties and is a usual page 3 material.

The Oberoi family has however guarded their responses to the incident. Tej Oberoi requested the media to let them grieve while the other members have resolved to stay silent in the matter.

Another interesting fact that has been discovered that, the brothers had apparently breathed their last holding onto each other.

Edited by mistofshadows - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Boy, oh boy! What should I say? You broke my heart with this one. But, it very well brings out the essence of the Oberoi brothers. Together in life, together in death. It was heartbreaking to read about all three of them shooting each other just so they could be together. Your descriptions and detail make the scene very vivid.

P.S: I hope Gul or the CVs never come across this piece because she is very capable of doing something like this in the show, show-suicidal tendencies that she has! 😆
Edited by -Sarcy- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Yeh kya huwa.
I am scared and crying Nikki.
Why they chose to take this step.
Death unites them 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Dead !!! Dead !! Dead !!! 😭
I want to read more Niki. Do continue this..

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