The Revenge Chronicles: Short Story (CH 1 updated - page 3)

26javey

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

That was a really strong start. I'm looking forward to the upcoming chapters. Thank you for the pm.

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Batool M

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Amazing first chapter 😊 Thanks for the PM 😃

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soumya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Omg...I love this...

I love stories with suspense.

I am falling short of words to describe how amazing this is.

Loved the convo between Om and Shivay . My sweeties.

Rudra and his names...demonic entity...pfft😆

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iamred

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

My dearest Niki

Have I ever told you that I am somewhat in love with the way you write?

Oh, I haven't?

Well then, the secret is out!

You have rendered me speechless so I don't even know what to comment but please do understand that reading your work is now a vital part of my life!

XOXO

~Red

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Priya.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Nikki

I loved it . Shivaay and Om convo. Can totally imagine the scene. How well these two know each other.

Detective Om - I love that!

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Raniaa3

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Hi i am new here! But I love the story you have going! Its too good!

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teju

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

niki what a chapter

firstly you need a hug for this my girl 🤗

damn interesting that tia and her mom i hate both of them

lets see what happens next

thanks for the pm

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Hi Niki,
I'm sorry I couldn't comment earlier. I was terribly ill...still under the after currents of the same. But had to drop in and tell you how wonderfully things are shaping up here. You're an awesome writer. Thanks for the PM. I will give a detailed comment when I regain some strength.
Love,
Sakura

Edited by Sakura24 - 9 years ago

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Jamina Mohammed

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

This was Awesome. I am excited to know what's gonna happen next!!
Thanks for PM 😊

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mistofshadows

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: MahaSrilu
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"Gripping" would be the word to describe the update.

And the bonding of Om and Shivay is beautifully written...totally loved Om's POV and also his care towards Shivay...And there it is another mysterious scene...Here I was waiting that you would clear the suspense of prologue and got another mystery instead...and loved the Omkara & Shivay part... and Tia is definitely a Witch and her mother is Demon...liked the way Om tried to pry information from Shivay.

Over all I LoVed the update.

thank for the PM.

Hello there!

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

The fic as I have imagined would genially lean more towards the mystery quota so the reveal would definitely take time.

I tried to keep Shivaay and Om as normal as possible yet giving undercurrents to a tension that would soon raise its hood.

I enjoyed writing the mysterious scene the best😆...maybe I am getting kind of sadistic.

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