Taming The Oberois (Chapter Seven updated)

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Anaïs

@OmkaraDeewani

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

I love the way you write. Very few people have the ability to keep their readers interested enough to read past the first page, you are one of them. Keep writing 😆

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-Anji-

@-Anji-

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Oh I love this ! Please update fast !

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eesha

@mayu.x

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+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Ooww its to amazing..
Rudra really gave her red bulls.. 🤣
And Shivay picked Anika up in bridal style
Lovely yaar..
Update soonish..

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Hey Red (catchy name might I add),

That was a good start. You have got a nice hold of language and flow. Anika and Shivaay are as usual at each other's throats.

Waiting for more.

Regards

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deejagi

@deejagi

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

that was lovely. Tia still not in her senses as she is not even feeling jealous of Anika when Shivay picked her up while transferring Tia to Rudra's fold. Eager to read the next part, so please update that sooner than expected.

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mistofshadows

@mistofshadows

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Oh God...what an update.
You just made my morning...seriously.
Tia, the flying angel and Rudra...I loved it. It was hilarious and truthfully speaking Rudra can actually do this.
Shivaay was however more concerned with Anika. Even afterwards in the office he thought of her reaction much more than the fact that he got kissed and after the Angel drama, he zeroed on Anika.
I am loving this.
And thanks for the PM.
-Niki

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joya.asya

@joya.asya

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

nice update 👏
waiting for next part
continue soon😊

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Mahalakshmi

@MahaSrilu

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Wow...ReD bull gives you wings ...seriously. The update was awesome OMG did Annika got hurt .loved Rudra and Shivay one for creating the situation and the other for carrying annika.

Edited by MahaSrilu - 9 years ago