Overpowered : Anshi Os( updated )

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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is a fiction on shivaay and anika ...O will be less and rudra more cause I just can't seem to completely decipher the inexplicable insoluble Omkara so as of now can't write about him


A man was staring into the mirror adjusting the blazar he wore as a habit he raised his hand to fix his hair but stopped abruptly remembering the memory of a certain girl mimicking him ...a chuckle came onto his face thinking of the happy dance she did ...hmm how can someone be so carefree even when carrying huge burden on their shoulders .He always felt weary when carrying the huge burden of Oberoi business then how come dis girl barely his age does it with a huge smile. He prided himself for understanding wat the other person is like but dis girl is a huge mystery apart from his brother Omkara. A loud laughing sound brought him to reality he went to see wat was happening


As he came out he saw the very person invading his thoughts these days standing in the midst of people clutching the back of her dress with her hands then she just ran from there . He saw rudra shouting" have u no sense it happens with anyone ..." tia was trying to say something to rudra as Om was restraining him . His first instinct was to go after her Om can handle here he thought.


He stood stunned like a statue seeing her crying resting her head on a wall ...he knew she goes through a lot wat with her being an orphan hearing dat word even in his head made his knuckles tighter. As he approached her he felt his heart tear at the sight of her tears...she was still clutching the back of her dress without his knowing his hands held her

" kya hua " his voice so gentle surprised even himself she looked up her eyes wide seeing him she turned her face to wipe her tears with one hand ...he inwardly chuckled dat was soo shivaay style he hated to show his tears to anyone and here she was doing the same

" are u here to mock me more ...do it tomorrow its enough for today "

" why r u crying and why clutching dat dress of urs " she glared her eyes menacingly

" why do u care its me who's humiliated na ur gf and her friends are down go there dress phatna tho ameer logonko kya pata hoga " so dis had something to do with his gf and her friends

" come with me " as he saw her glaring he opened his jacket buttons and gave it to her as he saw her looking boggled he draped it over her and took her hand...he took her to his sister's room made her sit on the bed went to the closet and gave her a dress which reached his hand first...

" washroom is there go change and door andhar se lock kardena " he left once again his voice and words surprising himself

In the kitchen rudra was swearing words Om was shaking his head trying to stop him...

" Uski tho mein chodunga nay looser kahi ki ...bhaiyya Didi kahan hein arrey wahi anika" shivaay had a questioning look at how rudra called her Didi ...

" Uhhh mmm ya she's fine she's just ..."

" Didi " rudra yelled making him turn around. There she was standing at the door like an angel dressed in a white top her face looking fresh although eyes were red she was nervously smiling at rudra. As he felt his gaze deepen he could see the dress was lightly transparent he turned his eyes and closed them feeling his heart rate speed up

As he moved to go away he saw three set of eyes eyeing him ...he moved out not trusting his voice or eyes which were showing so much of how he felt


Dis is dedicated to iqra ...love u Sweet heart only cause of u am writing dis varna I would be writing ruddy boy dialogues...I don't know if u like anshi but dis is wat I can come up with ...there's a part two... revenge of Rudra Singh Oberoi ...le jappi

Jessi




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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome do update next part jaldi se
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey Jessi
I can't believe that's shivaay
loved how he made anika comfortable
totally outstanding
do write more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Jessi it's too good
Am looking forward for more anika and rudra encounters
Shivay looks sensible here
Do continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Revenge of Rudra Singh Oberoi

It was a busy evening in the Oberoi mansion pinki the mother of shivaay was busy taking selfies with her high tech fashioned honewali bahu ...the bahu in the pretext was priding herself on the amount of likes she's receiving while pinky was staring like a star struck kid .

A well built handsome guy who's usually naah almost always in a cheerful mood was frowning he was feeling helpless for probably the first time in his life .he again revised his memory on the morning events ...how dat lady Baba's friends tried to trip his Didi anika and she fell very awkwardly resulting in tearing her dress instead of helping they all were laughing like fools ... then he remembered bhaiyya's words an Oberoi can never give up ...If my brothers won't let any outsider to touch me I won't let any outsider to say about my sisters .

After an hour a loud ear piercing yell shook the Oberoi mansion... it was later followed by more yelling. All the family members( except shivaay some meeting for him) came to the guest room initially all were shocked after dat pinky too yelled the rest wore amused smiles dadi was shocked to hear the positive energies tia sprouting all swear words


" chal beta selfie le le re ...chal beta selfie le le re ...abb selfe le le lady baba "

" arrey rudra kya kar rahe ho suno tho "

" arrey anika Didi ek selfie plzz ...arrey pout kariye na ...matlab muh ko aise aage rakhiye fish ki tarah bass" after his selfie session with anika he was literally jumping around

" kya hua isse dimag teek hein na itna kushi kyun"
" kyunki iski prank successful hui ...itni innocent acting mere samne nay rudra" Om answered anika's query while admonishing his bro

" Haan tho O no acting sacch bol dunga ...Haan I pranked tia tho " Om was stunned at his abrupt frankness while anika looked clueless

" rudra u know na shivaay ko phir gussa ayega thu phir root jayega phir tumhe manana ...kya zaroorath thi iss bachpana ki"

" O yeah bachpana nay hein and zaroorath thi...arrey woh bimbos meri Didi ko mere samne insult karenge tho should I keep quiet ...for me priyanka and anika are both same...areey indono ki tho naam rhyme karthe hein... Hayee see am intelligent"

Anika stood rooted in her place dis guy before her she thought he playfully called her Didi but he went to d extent of pranking even knowing his brother gussa ..." kya prank kiya tumne "

" arrey I added a chemical in her face pack and body pack now she has black scars all over her hahahaha... it will go in 2 hours O its ur chemical na dats y I know " anika watched as Om lunged and rudra ran around the kitchen

As she was walking to come out of the house she replayed her day first she was humiliated next HE helped her then dadi came to boost her moral and then dat Tarzan guy O or Om offered her a chocolate saying it cures any bad mood then at last rudra pranking For her ...she was feeling all warm and mushy which she felt only with her sahil ...

As he was looking into his cell he felt someone collide with him as an instinct he held dat person . he looked up to see the very person he was running away from ...her face threateningly close to him he realized he was holding her waist with his hand he saw her cheeks redden her eyes lowered a sight which craved him to lift her face up
" woh meri hee galthi thi dhekke nay chal rahi thi sorry..." she was interrupted by a loud yell coming from his home with his eyes he looked questionably at her

" umm woh gussa mat hoyiye woh rudra hein na galthi se apni face pack bhul gaya aur apki gf ne usse laga liya ...uski face pe marks aagaye ...galthi se tha abb Baccha hein pata nay na" ...shivaay rolled his eyes yeah bhi ...he for one knew rudra isn't dat innocent

" actually galthi meri thi usne face pack laney Keliye bola aur mein bhul gayi...usse kuch mat kahiye muje dantiye ..."

" OK enough kuch nay bolunga usko teek hein ...and koi face pack lagaya kya tumne "

" kyun nay tho "

" tumharw gaal tomato ki tarah laal hein " she blushed even more and ran from there ...shivaay felt victorious to see those red cheeks


After few hours the three brothers were eating the food anika made...Om was looking confused at his two brothers ...one ( rudra) was more than happy cause his plan was success and his bhai didn't say a word about it...another had a light smile from the time he came.


pheww over I know its kinda lame


Edited by Messi2 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh i loved how he comforted while trying to appear unaffected...He was so gentle when he dealt with her!
It is pitiful to see her crying alone, she needs to let it out and hopefully Shivaay will be there for her..
would deffo want to see such a scene in the future
waiting to see Rudra's revenge so continue soon
Anyway beautiful piece
And do write more...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: abhiya_12

Jessi it's too good
Am looking forward for more anika and rudra encounters
Shivay looks sensible here
Do continue




waiting ki kab yeah show mein bhi completely sensible hojaye...anika rudra will come... thanku
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow its beautiful yaar!!! Loved Shivaay 😳
Plz continue soon!!!!! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Jessi,... tusi chaa gayi... I love u so much dear... Itna achha... I wud really love to see such a Shivaay... 🤗
Mimi
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey dear...amazing start plz post next part soon😊

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