ZaBeer TS : Ayetbar chapter 1 edited Last part page 4 - Page 5

Originally posted by: .ROSY.

Very cute and lovely...it is very nice...

Originally posted by: bugsbunny12

Very nicely written 👏
keep it up 😛

Originally posted by: MsChanadlerBong

Nice one. You should continue it. Thou can you please give English dialogues. I'm so bad at reading Hindi. *hides face 🤔

Originally posted by: mijanur

Excellent OS sis. I like Zara and Kabeer conversation. Yes, you should continue it.

Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--

Wonderful..

Loved it..

Unique & lovely title...

Thanks for pm..

Originally posted by: Mimou

Nice

Continue soon

Originally posted by: 2filmy

Beautiful OS

thanks for the pm

please continue

Originally posted by: sana1819786

so wonderful dear

loved it

ofcourse u shuld cont

will wait for next part

update soon

thanks for pm

bye take care

Originally posted by: Adiya45

Amazing os👏

Loved it ❤️

Plz continue

Outstandingly written

Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: Srivalli.t

Awesome os!!

Loved it.

Very beautifully written.

Plz continue soon..