ZaBir's Frustrations! Part 7 UPDATED on p9!! - Page 4

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi guys

Apologies for the delay in post part 5. Please ignore my errors or typos. And hope you enjoy it.

Btw have taken a sabbatical from the show for the time being. 🤢

Will start watching again once I hear some good news regarding the storyline...

Please like and comment at will! 😃

Part 5


Zara was standing in Kabirs fitness room surveying herself in the giant mirror, turning left, then right to get a 360* view of herself.

She liked what she saw.

Contrary to her initial reaction, she now stood wearing the red and black coloured bra and knicker creation, together with the suspenders. Losing her nerve at the last minute she had put on the black silk robe too.

There's no one there, she told herself.

Zara was unable to suppress the grin as she saw the image in front of her.

She looked amazing!

Her sensuous curves and creamy skin presented a perfect contrast to the red and black of the lingerie and she felt beautiful!

Naughty too!

But more, beautiful.

Suddenly she was overcome with nervousness, blushing she covering her face with her hands.

She had remembered Kabir.

What would he think if he saw her? Would HE like what he saw? Or would maulvi saab stay as reserved and conservative as he had become since returning from Kashmir? Surely her sultry image would melt his resolve!

On second thoughts Zara didn't think he would mind seeing her like this. After all he had been mesmerised by her in the night dress in Kashmir. She felt sure he would appreciate her effort.

She blushed some more.

"Stop it Zara! You are a grown women!" Zara chided herself to get a grip and stop acting like a love struck teenager!

She decided she would keep the things and try to incorporate them into her routine somehow.Satisfied with herself she turned around to walk back to the bathroom to change her clothes when she stopped in her tracks as she saw her husband.

Shaitaan ka naam liya to shaitaan haazir!

Unbeknown to her, Kabir had been standing behind the net curtains, observing her.

Zara froze mid walk as she began to blush a deep shade of red all over.

She felt a multiple of emotions including embarrassment, shyness and nervousness but most of all exhilaration!!!

Wasn't this what she wanted? To confront her love! For Kabir to see her, to love her to complete their relationship?

"Kabir...tum?"

She quickly recovered remembering the state she was in and tried to cover herself.

Unsuccessfully-

Fumbling with the belt of the gown-

But not getting anywhere-

Ya Allah this is so embarrassing! Zara lamented.

What will Kabir think!

Reema! You always get me into trouble!

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Kabir had died and gone to heaven!

Or that's what it felt like as he saw his gorgeous wife strut her stuff in front of the mirror, as he arrived through the bedroom at his gym!

Firstly he couldn't believe what he was seeing. Then as he registered Zara in those sinfully erotic clothes his eyes nearly popped out in shock! His gazeslid down her slightly flushed face,while she looked at her reflection with a shy smile, down her milky white neck and rested on the swell of her ample, heaving breasts which were hardly contained within the tiny strips of the lace.

Ya Allah!! Kya nazara hai! He thought. God had truly created the female form with perfection. And Zara really was a hoor! In her naivety his wife didn't realise how she was affecting him.

His eyes went down further, enjoying the unobstructed view for the first time, to feast on her slender waist and her flat stomach!

He was unable to suppress the moan which escaped involuntarily!

Remembering his religious education, he willed his eyes to look away not to go further down but he was helpless. The scraps of material barely concealed Zara's body to his view which created an eruption of desire in him. He had never set eyes on a woman before especially not such a beautiful one as Zara. Nor had he ever seen anything so enticingly seductive.

The situation was surreal.

Kabir was in a trance as he saw his forbidden fantasy unfold before him!

He literally couldn't breathe, seeing Zara in this erotic outfit which accentuated her every curve and touched the places HE wanted to touch.

She looked ravishing!! And he was aroused beyond reason!

He held onto the wall to steady himself as he felt the passion inside him burn him up into million fragments!!

He wanted to devour her!

His trance broke, as he watched her turn and freeze on registering his presence.

There was utter silence with only their erratic heartbeats drumming away!

He saw a number of emotions cross her face but the one that settled on it eventually was the one that he knew well! Her adorable shyness.

Zara's hand flew to her mouth in shock. She tried to cover her milky skin with the gown she was wearing.

"Ya Allah! Kabir..tum??"

A pause.

"Main...wo.. main...wo" Maulvi saabs stuttering spoke volumes!

"Kya aap ke madrasay main knock kar kay kamre main aana nahi sikhaya?"

She didn't feel as bold as she sounded! In fact she was terrified of the new uncontrollable feeling evoked inside her but it was about time that they took steps to close the gaps between them.

He was nervous...and extremely turned on by the look of things!

"Er...erm...I ...erm...tum..."

A slight dip of her eyes told Zara the aroused state Kabir was in. Her confidence and boldness grew. She walked towards him and looking straight into his eyes, smilingly, ran a finger down his cheek and asked innocently,

"Tum...teek ho?"

Main teek hoon?
Main teek hoon!?!
Tum meray saamnay, meri jeeti jagti fantasy ki tarah khadi ho aor pooch rahi ho kay "Tum teek ho?!?!"

Are you out of your mind women?? Kabir wanted to shout.

But her confidence had unnerved Maulvi saab! It had been a long time since HE had been rendered speechless- had no counter argument- wanting this sweet torture to continue.

He couldn't come up with a suitable retort to her teasing!

In fact, at this moment he wanted her to have her wicked way with him and was ready to follow her to hell and back!!

"Array tum to kaamp rahay ho! Kahin bemaar to nahi ho? Kya iss liye kaam se jaldi aa gaye?"

The delectably erotic body and the innocent questions were surreal. Extremely erotic in their naivety. So like Zara! Unaware of her own seductive power over Kabir!

As she stood on her tiptoes to touch his forehead with her right hand, Zara inadvertently came close to Kabir and pressed her breasts against his chest!

Ya Allah Kabir signed and closed his eyes in pleasure! The feel of her body up against his, sent a shot of desire through kabir, and together with her intoxicating aroma his control snapped!

That was it!

The last straw for Kabir's patience and his pent up desires!He couldn't take it anymore!

He slid his hands through the gap in the robe, around her and grabbing her bottom. The action eliciting a shocked gasp from Zara!

"Let's see how Zara begum reacts to her own dose of medicine" Kabir thought as he pulled her right into his arousal. Looking into her shocked eyes, he bought his head down to her and smacked his lips onto her luscious ones.

Zara 's thoughts just before she lost herself in the soul searing, earth shattering and all-consuming kiss were "Uff it's the quiet ones who are the most passionate. Maulvi saab! All those suppressed sexual desires! Ab to mari khair nahi!"

Should I continue???
Edited by arnavkidevani - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#32
Updated Part 4 on page 5. Enjoy!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#33
DEVANI!!!!
update the next part yaar!
Lol kabir ki halat 🤣
Reema is so funny she sent the text? 😆

Wait impatiently for the next part!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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i couldnt stop laughing! aww, i loveee Reema so much!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Goodness...
Reema is devilsh but in a good way...

You have penned the mulvi's thought so well, I wonder if you are in his head...nicely done.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: aqua.m7

DEVANI!!!!

update the next part yaar!
Lol kabir ki halat🤣
Reema is so funny she sent the text?😆

Wait impatiently for the next part!



Thanks hun 😆
Glad your enjoying the story. Sorry it's not that serious or similar to the serial characters. I got too tired of analysing their actions and getting upset about them. So decided to write how I would like to see them- 😃

Next part is a little mature but not sure if it will be suitable to put here... 😕
But thanks for reading and commenting 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: arnavkidevani



Thanks hun 😆
Glad your enjoying the story. Sorry it's not that serious or similar to the serial characters. I got too tired of analysing their actions and getting upset about them. So decided to write how I would like to see them- 😃

Next part is a little mature but not sure if it will be suitable to put here... 😕
But thanks for reading and commenting 😊


So ur not going to update??😭
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: aqua.m7



So ur not going to update??😭



Trying to tone it down without losing the meaning... 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
#39
Cliff hanger...how can you leave us there?
No ...can't wait more... please update soon. Why do you want to change it? Just give us what you feel is right.

Reema...I love her.
Pls continue soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: JazzyM

Goodness...

Reema is devilsh but in a good way...

You have penned the mulvi's thought so well, I wonder if you are in his head...nicely done.



😉 lol do you think so? I have a "maulvi" of my own whom I observe very carefully 😉 😆

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