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Hey Everyone! How are you all? I hope you are doing well. I am sorry for not updating this story for a while. I had been really busy with work and school. Some days, I wanted to write but I felt a lack of inspiration and my mind couldn't come up with anything.


I have been working on the next part and I will update it tonight. I hope you didn't forget the storyline lol.

Thank you for waiting.


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Hey Everyone! I am back with the next part of this story. I know you all waited for so long for the next part and I am sorry to not be able to update. Now put on a smile, give me a virtual hug and enjoy the update:


Part 12


Riddhima was enjoying the scenery outside as their car was zooming past them. They were on their way to the place where they had kept Kabir and Anupriya. Angre was driving the car and Riddhima and Vansh were in the back seat together.


“Why did you put it that way in the family as if I will be sitting on that head chair all the time?” Riddhima asked Vansh, turning towards him. “You know it’s not like that. Even in our home, we didn’t care who sat where. Sometimes you used to sit on that chair and sometimes me.”


“They have disrespected and humiliated you for so long. They should know who they are messing with and I will be reminding them with each chance I get,” said Vansh looking at her. “I felt like ripping their head off their body every time they hurt you, humiliated you.” Vansh gritted his teeth. “But they are your family,” said Riddhima. “Then they should act as my family, not go behind my back. And family or not, no one gets away hurting you,” Vansh looked straight at her eyes.


“Good! I expected this answer from you only. I would have been really upset if you forgave your family so easily. Although I didn’t take it further by punishing them, I am not going to forgive and get along with them easily.” Riddhima said, shaking her head and snuggling closer to him. Vansh put his arms around her and said, “You are right to do that.”


“We are here,” Angre announced as he put a brake on the car. They all came out of the car and saw the place surrounded by guards. It was a small abandoned factory in a location with no one in sight except birds. This is where they bring all their culprits and traitors so that no one listens to their screams and pleads. And now it’s going to be their biggest culprits.


They walked inside the factory as the guards greeted them. Angre took them in front of the two containers in which Kabir and Anupriya were held captive separately. He opened the containers and dragged them out. They both looked no less than zombies. Red and blue bruises on their body, disheveled clothes and hair, one could hardly recognize them.


“Tch tch tch, look at your state. You two look like the perfect examples of roadside beggars. On second thought, even they look better than you.” Riddhima mocked them, smirking at them. “How did you like it here? With no food, water, locked in a dark container, it must have suffocated you to death. On top of that, you two couldn’t even talk to form any good for nothing plan to escape.”


Anupriya charged at her, enraged by her talks but fell down on her face when Vansh stuck his foot out. “How much more will you fall, Mom?” Vansh said Mom in a way that it felt like a curse. “You signed your death warrant the moment you laid your eyes on my family and killed my mom. I don’t understand how you thought you would get away with it.”


Riddhima picked her up by her hair and pushed her towards a chair there. “Let’s have some fun, shall we?” Riddhima walked over to the table with torture tools on it and traced them with her fingers until she came across the dagger. Picking it up she walked towards Anupriya and traced her face with it.


“Wh...What are you d..doing?” Anupriya gulped looking at the dagger in her hand. Riddhima traced the tip of the dagger on her face, from her forehead to her jawline to her throat. She stopped it on where her pulse is and said, “You know I can end your life in a swift movement right now. But what’s the fun in that? You will just get an easy death if I do that. You deserve slow and painful death, tortures in every last moment of your life.”


“You were so proud to be a Raisinghani, right? You always walked around proud of your looks and power. I already took away the latter, and now I am going to ruin your looks too.” Saying that Riddhima started tracing her face again but this time she pressed the tip of the dagger against her skin, cutting it along the way earning loud screams from Anupriya.


“You betrayed my Vansh, you betrayed everyone in the family by plotting behind their back. You tried to kill him and because of you, I was in the hospital. I lost three years of my life with him, just because of your pathetic self,” Riddhima spoke menacingly before slashing the dagger in her arms.


“You are a bloody traitor who deserves nothing but death for all your deed. You know, in ancient times, they used to write ‘traitor’ on the person’s forehead who betrayed them so that other people would know what kind of a person he or she was. Vansh, do you want to do the honor?”


“Absolutely,” said Vansh before taking his pocket knife out. Grabbing her face, Vansh wrote the word ‘traitor’ on her forehead while Riddhima held her down. They were unaffected by her screams, pleads, and cries. They looked cold and emotionless.


All this while, Kabir hadn’t said a word. He knows there is no way they can get out of this alive. He knew Vansh was dangerous when he went up against him. No matter how much he planned, he was somewhere always scared of him. Now he looked even more dangerous and the only person who could have ever calmed him down and stopped him was Riddhima. But she looks more lethal and dangerous than him if not equal. Both of them are so powerful individually, he gets shivers thinking of the consequences when they come together. He just wants them to kill him without torturing him anymore.


Once they were done with Anupriya, they moved towards Kabir who was scared to death seeing them like this. Vansh looked at him and spoke, “You know what Kabir? Although you have been a pain in the ass, you have helped me to bring Riddhima back to me. I am really thankful for that. So I am going to show some mercy on you.”


Taking out a gun from a drawer, he kept it in front of Kabir and said, “Kill you mom, and then kill yourself.” Kabir was shocked to hear him. Sure he preferred to die soon rather than being tortured mercilessly. But killing his mom? He can never do that. “I am not going to do that. If you want to kill us, go right ahead but I am not going to kill my mom,” he shouted.


“Oh come on Kabir!” Riddhima spoke. “You are helping her by killing her. Do you want her to suffer from all the tortures in our hands or you want to free her from all the pain? If you don’t kill her, then I am going to turture her more and you will ot be spared either. So decide quickly. I don’t have time to waste on your stupid melodrama.”


Kabir felt helpless. He has been waiting his entire life to stay with his mother. He wanted love and care from his mother which she had been showing to Vansh. His mom promised him that they will stay together after Vansh is gone. How can he kill the mother he loves? That’s a sin he can never commit. But if he doesn’t, they will torture them every day, take them close to death but not let them die. His mother doesn’t deserve the pain.


Kabir took the gun with shaky hands and looked at it before looking at his mother. She looked miserable. She should be free of all this pain. He lifted the gun but his hands were shaking. “Come on Kabir! Why are your hands shaking? Don’t tell me you don’t know how to shoot being a police,” Riddhima taunted him.


“I am sorry mom. Please forgive me,” Kabir said before pulling the trigger and shooting in her heart. He fell on his knees looking at the lifeless body of his mother and started crying. “How pathetic son you are Kabir. You killed your mother. Shame on you.” Riddhima shook her head.


“Now no need to cry over what’s been done. You should kill yourself for the shameful act you have done,” said Vansh smirking at his state. Kabir looked at them for the last time and then shot himself in his head looking at his mother. “And cut!” Riddhima exclaimed looking at the dead mother-son. “What a dramatic climax moment!”


“Clean the place and take care of all these,” Vansh ordered the guards and went outside with Riddhima. Angre was still standing there shocked at the happenings. He had seen Vansh torturing other people in here, in fact, he also tortured people. But he saw a more dangerous version of him today, not to forget Riddhima. The way they made Kabir kill his mother was ruthless. He shook his head and followed them outside, promising himself to never get in their wrong sides.


So this is it for today! I hope you liked the update. Let me know your thoughts in the comment.


I know I am late to wish but A HAPPY RAMADAN TO YOU ALL.


See you soon!

Stay Safe. Stay Well.

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Awesome.... Both are powerful and compliment each other with their way for handling things or the way by which they carry on themselves...

Amazing..

Thank you for the update.

Stay safe.

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Amazing update.

I like fiercely Ridu.

Ridhu in Commanding form

Just loved the update.

Waiting for the next update.

Pls update soon.

Mujhe toh riansh ka dialogue yaad aagaya ke hum ek jaise hai.

I want ridhu to command over business and family.

Ridhu taking interest in business.

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Originally posted by: alshasubhash

Awesome.... Both are powerful and compliment each other with their way for handling things or the way by which they carry on themselves...

Amazing..

Thank you for the update.

Stay safe.


Thank you!

Yes, they both have an individual strong personality and they lift each other up with their personality.


You are welcome, dear.

Stay Safe.

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Originally posted by: Sonia.himk

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Fantastic

Update Soon


Thank you!

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I will try my best.

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Amazing update.

I like fiercely Ridu.

Ridhu in Commanding form

Just loved the update.

Waiting for the next update.

Pls update soon.

Mujhe toh riansh ka dialogue yaad aagaya ke hum ek jaise hai.

I want ridhu to command over business and family.

Ridhu taking interest in business.



Thank You!

Me too girl.

Her commanding form compliments Vansh.

Thanks.

I will try my best to update the next part soon.


Even though they said they are the same but the makers didn't show that. They showed Riddhima always crying and playing the role of Abla Nari who lives for other people's approval.


We will have to see what happens in the next parts.

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NOTE:


Hello Everyone! How are you doing? I hope you all are well. I know it's been a while since I have updated the story. The thing is that I have been really busy juggling college, work, and other things. I had finals a couple of days ago and it was really exhausting to prepare for.


However, I know I have an obligation towards my stories and readers. So I have decided to tie up my hair and start writing the next parts. I will update the next part in a few days.


Till then,

Stay Safe. Stay Well.

- Your writer

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