Riddhima drabble - Page 2

Really nice Sneha👌🏻👌🏻

Sia handled it so sensibly👍🏼

Very nice...👏

I wish Sia had been this good...but sadly woh bhi apne bhaiyya ki chamchi hain...chaku leke aa gayi thi Riddhima ko maarne when she came to know she is a spy.

❤️👏☯️well deserving ending.

💔broken Riddhu 😭

Originally posted by: Abhyudaya

wish it seriously happen dear

but then this cannot

so let's enjoy here

thanks for this

Thank you 🤗

Originally posted by: Amekha

My heart went out for her reading it. Riddhima has really suffered so much. 😭

Awesome drabble Sneha and what I liked the most about it was that Riddhu never spoke to word to that family.

It was sia who fought for her. I enjoyed that thoroughly.

I would just say, I'm very hurt and disappointed. I will take a huge break and never try itv again ever in my life.

Thank you Amekha 🤗❤️

Originally posted by: Anika_PreRish

Snehu baby,this was beautiful as always. 🤧😭❤️

Thank God,Sia is there to take stand for her.

Sia is such a pure soul.

RaiSinghanias' are a**holes 🤬😠

Itni short time mein itni acchi kaise likh leti ho...

Lovely..

Anika 😒😭

I am so disappointed today. They are terrible !!

Thank you!

Originally posted by: SnehaSneha

I would just say, I'm very hurt and disappointed. I will take a huge break and never try itv again ever in my life.

Thank you Amekha 🤗❤️

I'm also very disappointed

Are you leaving the forum 😭😭Pls don't

Lovely OS, yep in the show we wont have heroine leaving so easily but here you are writer; director and producer; so you can write to your satisfaction yeah😁😁😁

Originally posted by: SnehaSneha

This would never happen in the show but I can write it 😆

After Sia's revelation, Ridhima has controlled her tears with much difficulty.

"Ridhima-" Vansh choked on his own words

"Mai Sia k sath rehna chahti hu kuch der" She said looking down at her, faintly smiling. Sia held her hand and squeezed it, smiling back.

Everyone nodded and left the room.

Ridhima has locked the room from inside and when she turned around to face her, her cheeks were wet with fresh tears, she sunk down against the wall and let her tears out. Sia looked at her too weak to get down and console her.

"Ridhim" she said weakly

"Im sorry Sia, I can't take it anymore" She sobbed

"Ridhhima" she stretched her hands asking for a hug. Ridhima crawled like a 5 year, and reached to the bed huging her tightly

"Aah" Sia gasped

"Sorry" she giggled.

"It's okay Ridhhima, you're allowed to shed them, I am back, I will make everything alright" she caressed her hair and assured

"Sia, I don't want you to make things alright" she said wiping the tears. Sia gave her a questionable look

"I want to leave, please Sia, i will stay because of you but I want you to know I really don't want to" She confessed squeezing her hands

Sia looked hurt but what else would you expect from a girl so broken. She was her friend, a loyal one before being her bhabhi. His family showed no shred of humanity with her then why does she expect her to stay??

"Bolo Sia" Ishani said "kyu bulaya hai sabko?" Aryan added

"Ridhima and me are going for dinner, you all are invited, if you want to come" Sia said, not able to look at those monstrous faces.

"Ridhima, have you packed your bags?" She asked smiling at her

"I don't have anything left to pack" she stuttered heaviness visible in her voice. Vansh looked up at them unable to process what was happening. He has not been able to have even a minute alone with her. He couldn't even apologise. She has been confined to Sia's room and haven't come out.

"You do have something" Sia said staring at thread around her neck

"The Mangalsutra Ridhima, remember what we talked about, I let you go, you let that go.. and move on" She smiled

Ridhima inhaled sharply and removed the MS, Vansh has been terrified. He looked at her letting go of the only symbol of their relationship left and she handed it over to Sia. Sia has very easily broken it into pieces and.threw her around like Ishani only difference was that Ridhima ran up to collect it last time but now she was standing there like it didn't matter.

"Sia beta ye kya kar rahi hai?" Dadi said sobbing

"Bus kro dadi" Sia stopped her with her hands

"This would be Ridhhima's farewell dinner, jise aana h aao, or nahi aana chahte to or achi baat hai, let's go Ridhima" Sia announced and Ridhima nodded leaving half of the family shocked and half innerly happy.

"Kaha ja rahi h.. Ridhima?" They heard his cracked voice

Ridhima wanted to hit him tightly across the cheek but controlled her urge to.

"Aapse or aap sbse dur, you've moved on bhai, and she needs to too" Sia said dryly

"Please ek bar meri baat-"

"Apne suni the?" She turned to face him

"Wo meri dost banke yaha ayi the or meri dost banke ja rahi hai" She sternly said

"Is Ghar se aap se, meri dadi se, sabse uska yhi rishta h ki wo apki behen ki dost hai"

"Or ye akhiri decision hai, mera bhi or Ridhima ka bhi, mai nhi chahti is ghar m aj k baad Ridhima k pak kadam pade, or agar apne ya Angre na Ridhima ko stalk krne ki koshish ki... I will make sure I leave too" she said determined and walk out of the mansion.

Ridhima has never felt so light. The air outside the mansion was fresh and less toxic. Sure her life would be tough. Sure she won't believe in love for a long time. But she was sure life will be better. Life would be happy and free. She would still be the selfless kind woman she wanted to be, surrounding herself with her patients, feeding pigeons in the morning and spending the nights at the shared rooms. But at least she would be safe and sound. She could sleep without worry, without millions of destructive thoughts occupying her mind. She would be fine. She would be fine. She breathed and let go, let go.

Well awesome fan-fiction to say the least.I have read some fan-fictions too & I have some ideas but can't put it into words eloquently like u and other writers.

So Here's the short Synopsis-

After much trials & tribulations Ridzi & our Vansh finally reunited.But happiness alas is always short lived for this couple. Kabir & his henchman Mishra along with Anupriya(who escaped from the jail) plan a car accident & plant a Speed-Type Bomb in VRS car which can blast the car if the Speed increases beyond 60 kilometers.(Got this idea from Race 2 movie).

Kabir who always manages to enter VR Mansion stealthily inspite of tight security with the help of his associate Hacker Mishra( In this story Mishra is a hacker) manages to jams the CCTV footage & jammers thus planting a secured Loop before the Footages where the Security Guards monitoring the Mansion gets to see the same footage always.

Vansh who has hired Ahana to originally dislodge both Kabir & Ridzi due to being misled by Ridzi's Spy Truth seeing her manipulative ways retains her services as his Business Consultant so that she cracks new Business Deals for him.However Ahana being the Traitor betrays Vansh & helps Kabir in jamming the Mobile Jammers within the house.

In this story Ishani who was snobbish earlier has reformed seeing Ridzi's care for her Bhai & in knowing the fact that Ridzi had always protected her unborn child from Kabir.That Unborn child is Ishangre's beautiful daughter Pari & calls Vansh & Ridzi as their Mama & Mami.She's around 6 years old.

Now our Hero in this story is not Vansh but carbon-copy of Vansh-Name u Guess Riansh Rai Singhania.Riansh has his own Interesting Quotes on every facets of life.

Since VRS was not able to give time to Ridzi due to his growing Business Ahana convinces him as per Kabir's plans to go on a short holiday with his wife Ridzi.Vansh plans a short Hill Station Trip near Mumbai with his wife where they could be back after 1 day.He plans to go to his Beautiful Villa there leaving 2 year old Riansh in the care of Ishangre.

Unfortunately on the way the car gets blasted & both Vansh & his wife Ridzi lose their lives. Sad indeed.😭😭😭

After this news reaches the Rai Singhania family they are devastated.The Cops tried to investigate the same but Kabir the foxy guy manages to erase every visual evidence of the Crime scene.

After the 13 days silent period of their funeral Kabir makes Fake property Papers with his crooked team of lawyers & comes to claim the same but he always forgets this bitter fact this his sibling the Great VRS had always one trick up in his sleeve-Aangre presents new fresh set of Will Papers where it gets revealed that till Riansh turns 23 years old & is smart enough to handle this vast Business empire both Ishangre & Siya would remain the caretakers of this mansion & Business if at all he & his wife Mrs. Riddhima Vansh Rai Singhania lose their lives due to accident or untimely death.

Kabir's efforts proves futile & the story moves 25 years into the future where Riansh who has the exact same Chiseled features like his father is the new Toast of the Corporate World-Young Businessman of the Year from London( he was sent & raised abroad by Ishangre as their own son for his safety).

Kabir also manages to turn into a succesful Business rival through his illegal/legal deals.He starts ANUBIR enterprises & in revenge manages to get some deals away from the Rai Singhania enterprises thorugh his mole in the Business-Ahana.Kabir is the CEO with Anupriya being the Chairman of this rival corporation.

Riansh who is 23 years old now is just like his father & cares for his Big sister(let's name her Pari- 27 years old now) deeply just like his late Father.However unlike his father he's not that much of a Layered or stubborn character.He's known for his ruthlessness not only in the Corporate World but Mafia world too.He is a trained Martial Artist & is proficient with various firearms.Seeing the threat to his life Aangre gave him quite a tough training right from his childhood.

In short he's the definition of a perfect Multi-Billionaire.However as I have mentioned before though ruthless he retains an emotional state within his grey shade.He's soft-hearted & has that tough Independent streak-inherited from his fiesty mother Ridzi.

Though soft-hearted he's neither fool or stupid like his father Vansh.In London he successfully managed to track one employee using the tech-devices(He's a tech-expert too) & threw him into the custody of Scotland Yard after discovering what that crooked employee was upto.

In short Riansh has inherited the twin Qualities of being a Spy from his mother & the classic Mastermind Brain from his father.

After coming back to India & hearing the truth from his foster-father Aangre who's now the Chairman of Rai Singhania Empire(as per the new will) (Mind u Kabir somehow killed Aryan & Chanchal Chachi & tried to implicate Aangre as a measure of revenge but got foiled due to Aangre's smartness & sources within the Mafia).Aangre informes his foster-son Riansh regarding the stealing of Business secrets from the Company.

Riansh hatches a master-plan & thus successfully throws one spy of Kabir from the company(Besides Ahana the wily Kabir has managed to infiltrate & implant 2-3 spies within the company).In due course of time Riansh also discovers Ahana's secret but rather than exposing her like the True Grand-Master decides to play the old adage of Divide & Rule between her & Kabir by supplying fake tenders to her.

Kabir & Ahana somehow fall in love & get married to each other & give birth to an equally evil son let's name him Rahul.Rahul is also smart just like his father/manipulative like his mom but over-confident like his Dad Kabir.

In all this drama of web/lies & Deceit a lively girl enters the scene-let's call her Maya(20 years old).She's not a Physiotherapist like her mom-in law Ridzi but she runs a successful Boutique Business.But the land on which she runs the business is a Prime Real Estate Land & this brings her into direct conflict with Riansh.

However Rahul also sees her & wants to make Maya his mate( but he's not a good guy rather he has multiple flings with different girls).Riansh on the other hand remains aloof & is silent like his Father Vansh.

Sparks fly between Riansh & Maya when they meet yet they have the same old argument & clash between Rich & Poor.In due course of time he gets impressed by her fiesty & bold nature & plans to make her his mate too but always gets foiled due to the evil tricks of Rahul who plans to separate the couple.

Meanwhile Siya discovers Kabir's new identity as Businessman & also somehow manages to overhear the truth regarding the untimely accident of Vansh & Ridzi 25 years ago.However before she could blurt out the truth Ahana kills her.

Shocked at her death & losing a second mother-figure in Siya drives Riansh over the edge.How he uncovers the real plotters & takes revenge for the death of his parents 25 years ago forms the real crux of the story.

It was awesome sneha❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️...I loved it ☺️😊😊😊

Another beautiful piece of writing by u😍😍🤗🤗....please do write more🤗🤗🤗🤗...love u baby 😘😘😘😘