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Posted: 4 years ago
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After watching the precap and the episode I had a thought in mind so wrote this one. Do share your views about the same 😊


VR Mansion

Riddhima quickly left the VR mansion without informing anyone after the aarti. Vansh frantically entered the room to look for her as she was so worried when he saw her last but found a note instead

“Aaj meri ek galti ki wajah se tumhari zindagi mein itna bada toofan aya hai

Ussi ko shaant karne ke liye jaa rahi hoon, jaldi aa jaungi”

He couldn’t understand what this girl was upto now, hope she doesn’t land herself in some trouble again. She misunderstood that Vansh wanted to hurt Ragini. Does this mean that she was involved in Ragini’s kidnapping ? Then why didn’t she bring Ragini to him? It means Ragini’s killers will try to harm Riddhima too. All these thoughts created a havoc in Vansh’s heart. Meanwhile, Angre brought the CCTV footage which confirmed his speculation. He was leaving the VR mansion in search of Riddhima along with Angre when he was stopped by Sia who made him hear the recording and told him everything. He left with Angre.

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Scene - The storehouse where Ragini is hidden.


Suddenly Kabir entered the place where Ragini was kept and saw her with the phone


“Kaha tha na dimaag mat chalana, samajh nahi ata ek baar mein”

And snatched the phone from her hands and said,

“Lagta hai aaj tumhari kahani ka THE END karna hi padega Ragini, manna padega tumhari himmat ko , aisi haalat mein bhi koshish kar rahi ho, give up nahi kia . Anyways, lets finish this game now.”


Ragini – “Tum aur tumhari wo mom Anupriya nahi bachoge dekhna.”


Kabir – “Rassi jal gayi par bal nahi gaya. 3 saal pehle meri mom ke hathon goli khayi thi, aaj mere hathon khaogi and I’ll make sure ke iss baar pakka mar jao” he said with a smile


He targeted his gun towards her and Ragini closed her eyes. A gun shot was heard and blood stains were visible on the ground. Ragini opened her eyes to find her safe. It was Kabir’s hand that was shot by none other than the person whom he considered her pawn, Riddhima who emerged from behind. Kabir stood completely shocked at what just happened.


(Riddima was suspicious of Kabir as her gut feeling said someone was present in the room while she was talking to Kabir and the vase couldn’t fall off the table on its own, someone was definitely there. Her earlier suspicions had always been brushed aside by Kabir’s talks but not this time. She chose to trust her gut feeling now and followed Kabir thus reaching Ragini. She overheard them talking and got the biggest shock of her life. The man she trusted betrayed her very badly.)


Ragini ran towards Riddhima and Riddhima asked if she was fine. Riddhima signalled Ragini to run while she still held the gun pointing at Kabir.

He called out for Mishra who was already lying unconscious after Riddhima hit his head with a stick.

Kabir called Anupriya and informed her of Ragini’s escape and asked her to find Ragini. Kabir pushed Riddhima aside when she was looking if Ragini left or not and he ran to find Ragini outside but he couldn’t spot her. Riddhima followed.


Kabir - "How dare you Riddhima, tumhari himmat kaise hui mujhpe goli chalane ki"

Riddhima – “Himmat aa jat hai jab aur koi raasta nahi bacha ho. Tum toh kuch bolo hi mat Kabir, itna bada dhokha diya tumne mjhe, tum Anupriya ke bete ho!! Hamesha ye bharosa dilaya ki mere dost ho, meri fikr karte ho par sab ek chhal tha kisliye? Main pagal hamesha tumhari baatein maanti rahi.”


Kabir was angered that he lost Ragini and he went towards Riddhima


"Tum bas ek mohra thi Riddhima, bewakoof emotional ladki. Tum, tumhari wajah se main apne mission ko khatam hone nahi de sakta, Vansh Rai Singhania ko barbaad karke rahunga main. Ab tum sab jaan chuki ho Riddhima toh tumhe marna hoga isse pehle tum jaake apna muh kholo uss Vansh ke samne,fir Ragini ka number. Thankyou for your not so good services"


Suddenly he felt a big punch smash his face and he felt on the ground


“Kaha than na maine, ye meri dharam patni hai inspector, so don’t you dare”


Riddhima and Kabir were shocked seeing Vansh there with a gun. He had pulled a few strings and was able to get her mobile phone location to the earliest and followed.


Kabir laughed and said "konsi patni, ye Rishta maine judwaya tha tumhe khatam karne ke liye Vansh , ye mujhse pyaar karti hai, pata hai propose bhi kia tha mujhe. Tumhara ye Rishta ek dhokha hai aur kuch nahi"


Vansh – "Ek shabd nahi Kabir, jo bhi hai meri aur meri biwi ke beech mein hai, bahut hua tumhara yeh khel, ab meri baari hai"


Kabir - “Kya karoge maaroge mujhe go ahead”


Vansh – “Naah, not so easily”


He called out for commissioner and some police officers came and arrested Kabir.


Kabir – “I still have proof that you murdered Ragini toh sochna mat ki tum bach jaoge”.


Vansh laughs and says “Kisi zinda insaan ko kaise maar sakta hoon main” .


Ragini entered the scene, Vansh found Ragini on the way when he was tracing Riddhima. Kabir knew his game was over now and he was taken away by the police.


Riddhima was standing there happy that Ragini wassaved but shocked from whatever happened and terrified that Vansh knew all about her and now is the real test for her. She was terrified of losing Vansh and the thought of it unleashed tears from her eyes and she said


“Vansh, I’m so sorry, I wanted to tell you everything but nahi bata payi, maine tumhe dhoka diya, jo bhi saza doge mujhe manzoor”


Vansh stopped her midway by placing his finger on her lips


“Sssh kaha tha na aise rote huye nahi dekh sakta tumhe,Sia and Ragini told me everything Riddhima, ek dhokha tumne mujhe diya, ek dhoka tumhare saath bhi hua, yeh nahi kahunga ki sab bhool gya hoon, bahut kuch kehna sunna baaki hai abhi par pehle ghar chalo, sabse bade dhokebaaz ka hisaab karna hai aaj”


Riddhima felt relieved as whatever happens in future one thing that she's now sure of is that their bond will stay forever, crossing all the hurdles that life throws at them.

Vansh had already instructed Angre to inform the security to stop anyone from leaving the VR mansion specially Anupriya when Ragini told him the truth.

Vansh and Riddhima left for VR mansion whereas Angre took Ragini to the hospital.


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Edited by -Ayushi- - 4 years ago


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Posted: 4 years ago
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If only this would have been possible


Well written

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Beautiful

Mainr Shashwat sir ko bheja hai Twitter DM pei.

I hope he sees it

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Ayushiiii!!! This is awesome..

CVs ko ideas leni chahiye from the writers of this forum..

Bohiut hi accha likkha hai.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Wahhhhh Ayushi

Amazing OS❤️

Ye sab ho to achcha hai show me

Par pata hai nahi hone vala

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Goshhhh lovely OS

Kaash if this could happen 😭

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Posted: 4 years ago
#7

Amazing os...

Keep writing...

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Superb amazing 😉


Please continue the story. Wished too know their conversation and ❤️ Scene 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I wish it would happen in the serial..

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Nice shit.do write more please. Thanks

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