asmaani story index - final notice - page 62 - Page 47

Hi sorry for late reply but i really dont which moments to specify of riansh like the pool and suitcase that was also nice, i would love if you use these ideas for riansh and also pls think about a book on riansh like fifty shades of grey thank you so much

DII APP KI NEW STORY FAMILY INDEX PE SHOW KU NAHI HO RHI....😭😭

OR ALSO I WANTED TO ASK TOU WHEN WILL YOU UPDATE LAL ISHQ I'M WATING ....🥺🥺

Originally posted by: raveena0605

Hey thank you for the reply

I was thinking of a scene where since riddhima is paralyzed Ap tries to kill because she actually trusted vansh. And while trying to save herself riddhima is badly injured and ends up in coma.

And Vansh finally came to know about to all the dirty deeds of Ishani ,Aryan and Ap..

I think this will become a Ts😝😝...

Finally got around to writing and publishing this story. Hope you like it! 🤪

riansh ss: home (18+ ONLY)

Originally posted by: asmaanixx

Finally got around to writing and publishing this story. Hope you like it! 🤪

riansh ss: home (18+ ONLY)

Thank you, i toh forgot i have sent a request ...but never mind aapki stories ke liye i can wait forever...

Originally posted by: asmaanixx

Finally got around to writing and publishing this story. Hope you like it! 🤪

riansh ss: home (18+ ONLY)

Thank you, i toh forgot i have sent a request ...but never mind aapki stories ke liye i can wait forever...

Originally posted by: raveena0605

Thank you, i toh forgot i have sent a request ...but never mind aapki stories ke liye i can wait forever...

No problem!

Galti meri hi hai as I took so long to complete it. 🙈

Hello everyone!

As some of you may or may not know, writing is my passion. Over the past fifteen years, I have witnessed the evolution of my vocabulary, writing style, length capacity, creating intriguing plots, and characters.

One thing had always held me back - lack of confidence.

But now I have finally reached that stage where I am ready to start penning down my story and achieve my dream of publishing my own book.

While I embark on my journey towards that goal, I would greatly appreciate it if you all provided me with constructive feedback on how I can improve. Whether it’s characterization, plot points, grammar, sentence structure, etc., any and all feedback is welcomed.

If you are unsure of how to go about it, then please use the following link to guide you.

https://www.nownovel.com/blog/give-constructive-criticism/

Thank you so much for all your continued support. 🙏🏽

Idk mai kya bolu. For me ypur stories are perfect just the way you write them. Agar kabhi kuch lage tou I will tell you.

I am happy that you are working on your dream & I pray that you will be successful in that.

I wish to see you getting praised worldwide for your work❤️

🤗

Congratulations, aap apni book likh rahe ho. And hum aapko kya tips de, i got motivation to write from and several other writers, but phir bhi link bhejna apne kaam ka, will try my best to give constructive criticism.

Hello gur,if you don't mind me asking,I always wanted to know how you strengthened your Vocabulary. So plz if you could guide me ,thank you