The last poem:seasons of safed-SPRING

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Posted: 9 years ago
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My courtyard,I m back
I am d summer , I m d rain,
I am d autumn, once again,
See my garden, adorned by spring,
With color of love,what my children did bring.

I can still remember,
all those days,
When he colored my white,
My urge to battle was all he did raise
I became the summer, I was the rain,
I was the autumn of golden grain.

I was a daughter,
Then became wife,now mother,
When I see my courtyard where flowers play,
I forget my winter which turned me gray,
End of d circle ,now it feels so great,
owe my seasons to him,whose color of love was safed.

End of my journey, how I interpreted the whole story of Dhani the widow whose life was suddenly changed, in a backdrop of 5 seasons.This is how life is, a combination of seasons which comes n goes,changes us,sometimes it make us return to where we began.
This post is totally inspired by d last take of Hamlet53,for whom I finished my ishq journey in all ups and downs.
Thanks to queen Elsa for her beautiful siggies, she brought d true flavour of seasons with her creativity.

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simpleAnna thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Credit:queen Elsa
Edited by simple2joy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Annnaaa... wat yar... ive to change the siggie yaarrr...ths wasn't the final one...ok let me read ths poem frst.. btw congo on being goldie... I'll b right back..
M bac..
😳 😳 Chhhoottiii take a bow sweetz.. 👏 👏 I'm so so proud of u dear.. ur words rhymes..something a fantasy fr me yaar.. the flow in ur writing improved with each season I believe.. I liked spring the most.. we all does.. n y shouldn't we.. the season wen flowers blossoms.. the season of colors.. Spring too like Autumn is considered as season of transition which I learnt thru ur poem..the season of renewal..the earth explodes with new life..!! Time to sew new seeds... Dhani's life circle completed here.. ⭐️ n the ending is fruitful indeed.. I love love ths unforgettable journey with all my angels.. 😳 love u as u accomplished ur task.. n making me proud.. muahhhaaass.. ❤️
Edited by NusiSg - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice happy ending poem good rhyming words, thanks for all 5 seasons.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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What a lovely poem Taz.
I saw the colors spreeding from Dhani's happiness garden. covering our lonely days by the joy of love.

Finally Dhani won her battle against life , inlaws, and society. she won her man's heart.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for all five seasons, Simple! Each piece of writing was beautifully composed. I really liked how you referenced all of the seasons and life as a full circle. Truly, Dhani's journey on the show from white to colours was an interesting ride. I hope you continue to let your creative juices flow. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: NusiSg

Annnaaa... wat yar... ive to change the siggie yaarrr...ths wasn't the final one...ok let me read ths poem frst.. btw congo on being goldie... I'll b right back..
M bac..
😳 😳 Chhhoottiii take a bow sweetz.. 👏 👏 I'm so so proud of u dear.. ur words rhymes..something a fantasy fr me yaar.. the flow in ur writing improved with each season I believe.. I liked spring the most.. we all does.. n y shouldn't we.. the season wen flowers blossoms.. the season of colors.. Spring too like Autumn is considered as season of transition which I learnt thru ur poem..the season of renewal..the earth explodes with new life..!! Time to sew new seeds... Dhani's life circle completed here.. ⭐️ n the ending is fruitful indeed.. I love love ths unforgettable journey with all my angels.. 😳 love u as u accomplished ur task.. n making me proud.. muahhhaaass.. ❤️



Awww nusipaaa,
Itna pyar karti ho chotiko k thoda biased bhi ho jao to bhi koi baat nehi love u more.
Ap ho isi liye main aise post banane k himmat karti hu.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: tahera57

Nice happy ending poem good rhyming words, thanks for all 5 seasons.



Thanks for reading my poems with patience tahera.u r so kind.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: awida

What a lovely poem Taz.

I saw the colors spreeding from Dhani's happiness garden. covering our lonely days by the joy of love.

Finally Dhani won her battle against life , inlaws, and society. she won her man's heart.



Yes awidapa,
Triumph of truth...
Thanks for reading my poems.u r among d few good people who encourage me to write.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi taz.. thanks for the final season of spring.. that heralds in new life after the winter of discontent.. news buds of hope spring forth! reinforcing that the cosmos pulsates and the beat of the heart goes on..
I liked how you focussed on the hermitage courtyard as the stage of dhani's life .. where in she lived the phases of her life.. the highs of Summer, finding new love.. the pining for love in the autumnal shades. Separation of Winter.. the cold war of sacrifice.. and the final decree of destiny! that bequeaths upon Dhani the Spring of more than she ventured out for..much ,much more.. Viplav, Vidha and Atharva.
Thanks for dedicating this final poem to me .. hammie is humbled. Also thanks for the lovely posey of the for seasonal shades of IKRS.. follow the calling of your soul and write some more verses.. the forum could do with some joy! simple joy!
love hammie..

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