The last poem:seasons of safed-SPRING - Page 2

Originally posted by: awida

What a lovely poem Taz.

I saw the colors spreeding from Dhani's happiness garden. covering our lonely days by the joy of love.

Finally Dhani won her battle against life , inlaws, and society. she won her man's heart.

Originally posted by: ~DaZZ|ing~

Thanks for all five seasons, Simple! Each piece of writing was beautifully composed. I really liked how you referenced all of the seasons and life as a full circle. Truly, Dhani's journey on the show from white to colours was an interesting ride. I hope you continue to let your creative juices flow.😊

Originally posted by: Hamlet53

hi taz.. thanks for the final season of spring.. that heralds in new life after the winter of discontent.. news buds of hope spring forth! reinforcing that the cosmos pulsates and the beat of the heart goes on..
I liked how you focussed on the hermitage courtyard as the stage of dhani's life .. where in she lived the phases of her life.. the highs of Summer, finding new love.. the pining for love in the autumnal shades. Separation of Winter.. the cold war of sacrifice.. and the final decree of destiny! that bequeaths upon Dhani the Spring of more than she ventured out for..much ,much more.. Viplav, Vidha and Atharva.
Thanks for dedicating this final poem to me .. hammie is humbled. Also thanks for the lovely posey of the for seasonal shades of IKRS.. follow the calling of your soul and write some more verses.. the forum could do with some joy! simple joy!
love hammie..

Originally posted by: zajedno

what to tell you, my dear. you're a fantastic romantic soul. congratulations. good for you, and always with you and with you. go ahead. I know I can still more.👏😉