The last poem,Seasons of safed:RAIN

This is the untold story of a barren land,
that finally feels the touch of rain,
the age old barren land, so lifeless,
became meadow of golden grain...

This is the untold story of a flower,
grew unnoticed in the land now fertile,
in the season of rain,
and added more beauty to the tale..

I wanted a few raindrops from u,
u drenched me completely,my love
and gifted me a flower garden
Here i m a new Dhani,
It is love that changes d world,
It is love that makes heaven.

Journey of Ishq continues with transition of different seasons,Rain is,to me,the season to fall in love.Special thanks to queen Elsa for helping me,picture credits goes to her.
Thanks to d forum members for bearing with me.3 more days.

Yaar Chhotti y it is so short... I want more n more of it.. uff I ve started smelling the earth while reading it.. was hearing sound of raindrops..😳 the whole environment u hv created is amazing Anna... 😳 waiting fr the rest..!!😳 absolutely loved the 2nd pic.. both their hands in rain.. feeling the pleasure.. I want cv's to prolong that moment a bit bt it was there fr fraction of seconds.. I still remember. . Actually I ve watched ths epi countless times.. 10th September thyana shayad... I used to watch ths particular epi almost every other day.. lollsss those days..😛

helooo poetess... another fantastic creation loved the vocabulary you have used.. the contrast you created with words like barren... that her life was, and how it becomes replenished and fertile after love entered her life..The reference to flower is her simplicity that brings magic into her his life... flower also a well used image, a good reference to the occupation of the widows.. and finally rain.. a boon ,a blessing from the heavens that gives the dry arid land a drink... and things sprout... the rain you beautifully show through your poem is love it self that cleanses all class distictions between them .. and gradually their love grows...
thanks for another gem taz.. looking forward to more .. yours hammie.

Beautifully written, Simple! You're on a roll, my dear! 👍🏼 Please keep the creativity coming. Your poem started off with my most favourite scene from IKRS. That scene in the rain made me fall in love with IKRS. I'll never forget how alluring Viplav looked leaning backwards against his SUV completely enthralled by the beauty before him. ❤️

Nostalgic Taz...

Wow Joy, yet another lovely piece of poetry... there's no stopping you now.

Originally posted by: NusiSg

Yaar Chhotti y it is so short... I want more n more of it.. uff I ve started smelling the earth while reading it.. was hearing sound of raindrops..😳 the whole environment u hv created is amazing Anna... 😳 waiting fr the rest..!!😳 absolutely loved the 2nd pic.. both their hands in rain.. feeling the pleasure.. I want cv's to prolong that moment a bit bt it was there fr fraction of seconds.. I still remember. . Actually I ve watched ths epi countless times.. 10th September thyana shayad... I used to watch ths particular epi almost every other day.. lollsss those days..😛

Dear biased nuspa,
Haan it was 10 sep.
Dheere dheere se meri zindagi mein aanaaa.
I love d rain sequence.
I m too fond of rain, I m surprised I couldnt write more.may b it doesnt come everyday, ur kida.n see I have restricted myself to write within a fixed topic n time limit.

Originally posted by: Hamlet53

helooo poetess... another fantastic creation loved the vocabulary you have used.. the contrast you created with words like barren... that her life was, and how it becomes replenished and fertile after love entered her life..The reference to flower is her simplicity that brings magic into her his life... flower also a well used image, a good reference to the occupation of the widows.. and finally rain.. a boon ,a blessing from the heavens that gives the dry arid land a drink... and things sprout... the rain you beautifully show through your poem is love it self that cleanses all class distictions between them .. and gradually their love grows...
thanks for another gem taz.. looking forward to more .. yours hammie.

Ur comment is d best return gift anyone can get cz of her writing.u could exacty understand d reason why I chose these words,why flower,why barren n why rain.lovely comment hammie,it is really an honour,as I have learnt from u.

Originally posted by: ~DaZZ|ing~

Beautifully written, Simple! You're on a roll, my dear! 👍🏼 Please keep the creativity coming. Your poem started off with my most favourite scene from IKRS. That scene in the rain made me fall in love with IKRS. I'll never forget how alluring Viplav looked leaning backwards against his SUV completely enthralled by the beauty before him.❤️

Thanks for ur ongoing support dazz