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IKRS Thursday 16th June 2016 ep 279 MyTake ~ Paradise lost

Break up in a relationship is nothing short of a living hell! it's never easy they say! for regards breaking up we are primed to avoid delivering or digesting such deeply threatening news. The threat is of being left alone, losing the one we become accustomed too, missing out on sharing our highs and lows! There is trauma on both sides.. the one who delivers it and the one who has to bear it. Take Viplav and Dhani.. both suffer after Dhani calls it day and ends it all! there seems to be no graceful way to deal with breaking up.. Viplav is seen to be taking to drink.. will he go on the path of self harm? One thing can help, is to have sincere people around to give support..Dhani has Parsiya. Viplav, where will his support come from?

The party is over for the demon king. His flower queen has walked out on him after ending a prolonged separation. For his captor, the wicked witch, the party has just begun! In the business of putting up an act, Kamini applies the balm of guile upon Viplav's wounds, sure she understands what it means to be spurned by a loved one. This is on the outside. inside, she rejoices , her judgement on Dhani's disempowering image of greatness comes into play! and it shows now she has left Viplav for good! for her to have and to hold! But she has to talk reason with her lawyer husband, the best one is to promote individual choice. Likethey got married so did Dhani and moved on life to have her new family. Its not he's like he is hasn't got one. Viplav is incensed by her taunting logic. The last person he wants sympathy from now, is this so called wife of his!he growls at her like a wounded lion,their marriage including her! can go to blazes! He wants her nowhere near him! Kamini shuts up .But inwardly delights! by the furore being caused in his life! her tender loving care is only to make his blood boil! Tears , angst, all are the after effects of facing breakup. Viplav needs to get it out of his system! Whatever! But Kamini will not be allowed by him to erect her temple of lust at the hands of losing his true love Dhani. Has Viplav learnt, that last time when he was vulnerable and on the rebound , his piled upon him Kamini ,shifted into the role of Dhani as his wife? beware of this witch's moves! If Viplav has gone to pieces after the appalling outcome of their union after five years ,Dhani too remains not unscathed! But blessed is she with unconditional support from a reliable friend.Parshiya supports Dhaani outside , he did the enactment,as she asked! But fails to understand her anger? He has a rough idea that the man must have been nasty with her, Yet again, he wants to sort this so called husband of hers so he stays off her back forever! but its Dhani's reaction that forces him to take a step backwards! Just like she stopped Viplav from attacking him earlier, she now warns him to stay away from Viplav! does she still love him? muses Parsiya ,more or less she puts his mind at rest ,by reiterating , all her bonds with Viplav stand severed! She has nothing to do with Viplav now! so end off! she wants to be on her own! Parisya respects her wishes, fair enough, there is up to a point she allows him to support her! so long as this Viplav leaves Dhani alone.. Parsiya wants to show Dhani his support by giving her a touch of comfort on her shoulder.. but withdraws his hand perhaps not a good idea! Dhaani asks him to go, says she needs to be alone for some time.

The wicked witch knows the demon king suffers the wounds of the war between him and the flower queen.. she now needs to enjoy how the wounded queen fares? Out of the shadows , the witches evil eyes, catches a weeping Dhani , her tears washes away Kamini's singed love, her lust that to this day Viplav rejects! Now the witch scoffs this so called noble and exalted Dhani who hangs about with Parsiya but wears the vermillion of Viplav name! such a foolish woman an embodiment of sacrifice! mocks the witch silently ,but wishes to poke more at the wounded Dhani, so she attacks Dhani with an apology, a big mistake on her part for not telling Viplav about meeting Dhani at the temple.She sprinkles salt on Dhani's wound, everything was complicated, but she remains indebted to her for not saying anything to him .i.e ,for covering her back and supporting her mock marriage with Viplav with her! that marriage which has finished her chances of ever getting back with Viplav! Kamini gloats inside. Goes on to sprinkle more salt on Dhani's wounds, wishes everything was like before. Does Dhaani by now , realize, this vile woman, is the root cause to all evil in her life ? may be? As coldly she asks Kamini to leave her be! Kamini,leaves with a winning feel! Yes both now lay wounded! So much so for being virtous in todays world where goodness stands no chance! Dhaani cries.. she'd rather stand by virtue and lose all, than by vice and rob others of their happiness..

Parsiya returns to the party, mulls over Dhani's situation. After all the scene she still appears heart broken to him. The sight of Vidha's sudden entry to the party, suddenly cheers him up raises his hopes once more as she addresses him as calls Baba. As a father would do Parshiya. Compliments the flower fairy praises the little lady wonders how she got here? Dulaari,turns replies she brought her here. More stress for parsiya as he realizes he will need to be answerable to a anxious mother who wants to know where Dhani is? Parisya asks the flower fairy to wait as he needs to talk to nanny... like a good son he will have to smooth the ruffled feathers of an upset mother.

Dhani cries her heart off.. but not alone as a brief union strikes Viplav too ..the colour of their Ishq is tears of losing a loved one again! both are down on their knees helpless giving into the cruel blow of destiny once again! Heartache is not easy !to swallow it consumes one into a state of ultimate surrender! Viplav on his knees weeps inconsolably yet again ..Viplav sits down shattered and cries miserably. Dhaani recalls Kamini saying she has a son with Viplav, named Atharva. Viplav recalls Dhaani saying she don't love him now. He recalls Dhaani telling that Parshiya is her husband! devastated he looks up at the heavens , still on his knees. The gods above look down upon him and have mercy on him by sending an angel of consolation to him.. it is his very sweet flower fairy who never failed to bring a smile upon his face.. she heard his spirit groan from where she was and blood calls upon blood as she finds her demon uncle weeping on his knees! Lovingly she takes charge over him ,wishes to know the reason for his tears? Has he by any chance lost his mask?? Wish he could tell his sugar plum fairy he didn't lose his mask , he took it off! now he can see things clearly ..his mask was quiet waiting for his flower queen , now he takes off his mask and shows the world he's lost her forever! no more he hides behind loving memories of once having her in his life! Vidha offers him her mask, consolation.. she returns his coat to him.. dead even to her magical touch , on his knees still the demon king, mutters, with such ease she had said she loves him no more.. swore to live and die together ,was but a lie! Viplav mutters and sobs.. his flower fairy wipes his tears from his stubble cheek.. he mustn't cry she'll ask her mum to pray for him..she prays for everyone ,she'll pray for him too.. the demon king heart melts .. he needs a hug from his flower fairy , may be his sugar plum fairy can take away the excruciating pain of his bleeding heart. He pulls her close and leans against her little body calms under her magical hug , smiles with tears of , tranquillity and momentary peace.. but not for long, for like his short moment of respite with her mother, his joy with this blessed child ends too!

Parshiya comes there, and wants to know what she was doing her? Vidha replies looking out for demon uncle who was crying.. parsiya reminds her that her mother is loking for her and he carries her away.. Viplav watches.. and wonders its hard to accept his flower fairy is this blokes's daughter? as his heart tells him she is like him! Viplav! She feels like him!but then the heart deceives.. muses Viplav as from his knees he rests on the floor! This heap of a broken man at the hands of the heart ,is attended to by a waiter who offers ,to call a cab for him! but Viplav gathers himself at last and hauls himselfup on his feet.. takes a deep breath and knows exactly how to drown his sorrows! Lift his broken spirit with the help of the same spirit that landed him up in this mess in the first place!

The bar' s the place to be, not unknown for lost lovers to be at. Wallowing in sorrow Viplav sits , till poison ivy Kamini arrives tells Viplav to quit drinking. She knows he won't obey ,in fact he's likely to drink more and create a scene which is exactly what she wants! Coldly true to his nature tells her to buzz off! Besides how come like an interfering bat! she ends up meddling in his life when he has really washed his hands off her! The witch enjoys him being het up! Alerts him about decorum, which he clearly gives a damn about! Basically tells her to leave! She does so but not without covering her own back if anything happens to him, tells the waiter, if her asks for a drink don't serve him! She knows when he finds out his wife has put a check. He will demand for more alcohol! Which he does! and cuts himself at the bar from a broken glass! tells the bar tender he feels good in pain.

When the storm settles..it's time to look at things in hindsight Dhani comes home and recalls her meeting with Viplav and his painful words. has she done the right thing by telling Viplav she got married? she may have separated Viplav from his daughter Vidha! Under the strain Dhani cries. Parshiya turns up like her guardian angel , suggests Dhani have a word with Vidha. Dhani,rejects the idea, clearly not ready too. Parshiya can see Dhani needs support , gets tea and wants her to let all sorrow , out of her system. He empowers her she tackles problem for she can be strong. Reminds her of her pivotal role of one who cares for Vidha, Dulaari, him and herself. Reminds her, about Vidha's education, lucky she came here from Banaras. Encourages her, everyone gets a chance and she too will get hers. Dhaani smiles, but doubts, this can't happen. She does thanks him for supporting her in her lie. Parshiya reminds her, he is her friend has to support her. Hecan't understand why she can't will never hurt anyone? Dhani reminisces with a smile as she shares, says when she met Viplav for the first time, he filled colors in her bland colourless life! Dhani narrates, her life with Viplav was like a fairy tale!.. but now all that is left of the story is the drastic end.. that marrying Dhani was the biggest mistake of his life! Dhani.. cries Parsiya consoles her by being there.. but Dhani assures him she will fine after sometime... she needs time to overcome her heartbreak..

Drunk driver!! driving dangerously! Viplav drives his car! Dhaani's words drive him insane behind the wheel! that she loves Parshiya and is married to him now!! Viplav drawls, he waited for her since 5 years yearned to hear her voice. She could have told me at least that she was alive, he would have be at peace thinking she was alive living her life!!! head long collision! It gets all too much inebriated, his car crashes!

Basically.. its dealing with breakup. Lots to come terms with..who loses? who wins out of the two? or its not about winning or losing or about the colour of Ishq is about loving someone against all odds? Hamlet53 17.6.16

Precap:Deepak informs Parshiya that Viplav met with an accident. Parshiya is shocked and comes to Dhani, informs her about Viplav's accident. Dhani is shocked. ..

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Unres...Hammie was waiting for you...Loved the title 😃

Dear Hammie 👏🤗This is one of my fav takes of yours ...its a master piece dear ...absolutely brilliant ...Loved, enjoyed reading it. This is truly a Magical take...Both Mishal and ss were really good here ...felt their pain ...the way both dhani and viplav got separated neither were at peace...truly painful to see them cry bitterly, helplessly while the poison ivy was watching them like a sadist.

This KMH (Kabab Mai Haddi) is everwhere she doesn't let them weep in peace...isko nikal ke phek ne mann karta hai 😆 ... The best part was when the angel comes to viplav and hugs him...it was very consoling and peaceful for him even thou it was for a breif moment ...that is exactly what he required at that time and he got it from the right person.

Hopefully viplav realizes what is km's truth, when he can realize she becomes KMH all the time he can analyze and see the real villain in their lives is that Golden Gadhi...Parshiya is such a wonderful person ...people do need such humans at times of need whom they can totally rely upon...Dhani does realize that she did a mistake by lying to viplav about her marriage ...great...she should have told him the truth na ...and I feel she should have taken the opportunity and cleared her MU instead of complicating the matters further more...why lie at all she could have aram se told I have moved on now get lost with km 😆😆

Yeh lo talli viplav thinks of flashbacks 😆 Hammie I'm super duper fed up of Flashbacks yaar ...esp that km scene where Viplav says its his mistake blah n also the latest one 😆 You know in IPK arnav had this scene where he sees khushi and shyam hug that FB was shown sooo many times 😆 its as if that is the only thing going on in their mind...Drink n drive case so have to watch what happens next.

Thank you soo much for this beautiful take yaar ...loved loved loved it, aaj itna chota kyun hai take 😆 thank you for this font n size yaar actually I love this one infact...waiting for the next part...Till then take care.😃

One request Hammie can you plz try to post a bit earlier it gets around 12 or 1 here ...sone ka time hojata hai isilye 😆 I know you are busy but choti si req hain...here is the link to my post will reply to the prev one tom bhul gayi aaj 😆 this is the combi of 2 episodes ...Tata cya.

Awida badi sweet hai I think I have only interacted with her on my totd the day Eisha left ...she is like Joya who likes everyone's post 😃 You do have very sweet readers yaar 😆 Chalo me happy to post first 😃

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4652472

Edited by pearl100 - 9 years ago
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Hello Hammie.
I loved reading your take on this episode. You described Viplav's emotions wonderfully ..I felt his pain again. You see I watched this epi.and was hurt to see Viplav's pain. I almost hated Dhani. What if the poor guy ended his life that night? How could she hurt him that way. I doubt her love for him now. coz when you are in love you can't hurt the person whom you love if you are hurt by him. True love is above this kind of revenge. It is just my POV . I know Dhani has her reasons to behave so. And after reading today's episode WU I was assured of her love for Viplav again.


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Wau Hamieee ...
You left me speechless, and without a word. Ma not to repeat. Super super description ...
The strongest impression of the embrace of father and daughter and her little body that gives him shelter in the storm provoked by the other people. Finally realizes that she is part of him finally put some things become clear finally has a reason to get up from the floor to fight to get to the truth to find out that his fault why he punished?
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Originally posted by: awida

Hello Hammie.

I loved reading your take on this episode. You described Viplav's emotions wonderfully ..I felt his pain again. You see I watched this epi.and was hurt to see Viplav's pain. I almost hated Dhani. What if the poor guy ended his life that night? How could she hurt him that way. I doubt her love for him now. coz when you are in love you can't hurt the person whom you love if you are hurt by him. True love is above this kind of revenge. It is just my POV . I know Dhani has her reasons to behave so. And after reading today's episode WU I was assured of her love for Viplav again.


Agreed awida..true love is beyond revenge...u cannot hurt a person whom u love even if you r hurt by him...well said...👏
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Hi hammie loved your take dear...enjoyed it...it was so sad to see VIP crying... dhani should not have hidden the words of the witch...she should have confronted him and moved on if at all she had decided to move on...it's a pain to see the Lovers crying even after a prolonged break...still the evils have not received even an ounce of punishment...Dhani has a reliable friend...parsiya...VIP is left with none...I wish the demon king and the sweet plum fairy meet very often ...and he finds some solace in her...I want the witch to be knocked out of their life soon...but I am afraid that she is going to b here for a longer time...thanks once again hammie👏

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Hammie.. pehele see my dance.. dhinchak dhinchak.. if the toi articles, which mostly turns out to be true, is to be believed then mishal renewed his contract yeasterday hammie.. for 1 more year... 🥳
uff feeling a bit relieved.. i hope someone gives us a 10000% confirmed news very soon and give some more relief to the mishal fans..

came to this forum in a light mood after many days and happily read a few posts.. read ur take after many days and i loved it.. what a great title my dear.. and what an excellent piece of writing.👏. Viplav-vidha hug scene description was too good. i always wait to seea hug between viplav and his flower fairy.. loving this kid a lottt, just a loottt.. may be becoz she is playing the role of viplav's daughter or may be becoz mishal is playing the role of her dad.. jo bhi ho.. the dad-kid scenes are always great.. be it an emotional scene or a naughty cute scene... it would have been so cute nah if mishal had continued his role as dutta and dutta-naku had a daughter named tasha...😳 *sigh* khair our dreams were broken..
after so so so many days i am sitting in IKRS forum the whole evening.. i just hope someone gives us a 10000% confirmed news that mishal is finally not leaving..
then i will be enjoying the eisodes more.. but i am loving these recent episodes.. they are quite good.. infact the kamini scenes are also good.. 😆 i am not getting irritated but i am eagerly waiting for viplav-dhani reunion.. how they will reunite and stay together as a happy family.. caring mom, cute child and her cutest, sweetest, loveliest father.. together

Hi5 hammie.. aj toh jhakas mood mein peene ka hai.. nahin nahin desi daru nahin😆.. cold drink peeyenge hum...cheers kar le..😆😆

Edited by Barbie_KK9629 - 9 years ago
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Hammie hanmie hammie,
U never surprise me, take as always a brilliant one,was waiting for ur take on this episode, viplab vidha hug scene was here,i wanted ur description on d interaction between demon king n flower fairy.
Was thinking of d title, how it blends with d episode then after reading it i understood, amazing title selection as always.its love , love is d paradise , paradise is lost cz viplab took d fruit of misunderstanding, offered by kamini 5yrs back and now dhani.where there was so much love, there will b much pain now.for last five years viplab managed to find piece with dhanis memory, now dhani poluted d memory for him,deceit is all he got after five yrs if being a demon from his own queen of flower fairies.well d demon made d mistake five yrs back not trusting his wife,but that doesnt mean he should b kept away from d truth of vidha.here dhani is doing injustice with viidha n vip both.stupid woman, there is something that hasnt changed yet.dhani was stupid,is stupid n will b stupid in future.cz she is our lead.lol.still trusting kamini.dulari is smarter than her.
Now coming to d scene i wanted to enjoy on ur take, its so beautifully done 👏 👏 👏 , yeah blood calls blood n there is peace in pouring all ur grief on d shoulder of ur own blood.
Apology for being so late.i was a bit extra happy today with u know why, and was jumping out of happiness,then i had to rush to d hospital,2hrs back i reached home n there r long ramadan prayers too.
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Hi Hammie...😳 how u doing mate??
I'm happy today feeling positivity in the air tonight..😳
Ohhh wow hammie woww brilliant title n great take as usual.. ohhh break ups n parting.. 😭 getting unbearable now.. ohh how the cristmas tree winning again n again.. is getting bitter yarr.. plz somebody need to slap her.. how she wickedly smiling at the backs of Viplov n Dhani was gruesome...want to slap her there n then...
ohhh but the ray of hope n positivity the viplov vidha hug..❤️😳 divine it was hammie.. my heart went out for these two.. how he was getting energy frm his little angel n both father daughter getting solace in each other..consoling each other.. brilliantly done scene dat was hammie that brief moment wen both close their eyes as if will suck each n every remnant of sorrow was heavenly dear..was in a trance after watching dat scene... I loved dat .. n wen parshiya come to take her away.. how the little angel was insisting to stay was so so amazing..as if she's reading her father inside out.. he still needs her..😳 n demanding to stay with him.. amazingly done.. 😳
He's not at all suspecting the witch hammie...😕 the way he's being taken on a ride by fate lately.. the poor chap has lost the left over sensibilities also.. I dun think he is in a condition to crack the mystery behind km.. she devil has played it neatly,, beside even to suspect her..she has first need to exist fr him na..wese his helplessness everytime he watches her around is heartwrenching.. his miseries needs to end now.. Dhaniii...!!!😕

Ohh hammie I desperately needed to kno ur version of Viplov Vidha hug.. n dear it was worth waiting. . Jst loved ur amazing description fr tat scene n for the epi in whole..
Thank u Hammie fr kept us entertained dear.. respect u frm the bottom of my heart for doing tat daily for us..😳
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Originally posted by: awida

Hello Hammie.

I loved reading your take on this episode. You described Viplav's emotions wonderfully ..I felt his pain again. You see I watched this epi.and was hurt to see Viplav's pain. I almost hated Dhani. What if the poor guy ended his life that night? How could she hurt him that way. I doubt her love for him now. coz when you are in love you can't hurt the person whom you love if you are hurt by him. True love is above this kind of revenge. It is just my POV . I know Dhani has her reasons to behave so. And after reading today's episode WU I was assured of her love for Viplav again.


yes awida, i agree with u.. what if viplav had ended his life that night..??
he was constantly pleading dhani.. repeating the same line again and again "I will die Dhani.. i will not be able to live".. what kind of love is there in dhani's heart for her husband?? how can she still hurt him.. his tears, his sobs failed to melt her heart.. she has become such a stone - hearted lady in these 5 years.. why did not his tears raised a single question in dhani's mind that how can viplav do that?, how can he cheat on her??

but i am still not assured of her love.. i want her to ask for forgiveness properly... it was her fault.. she had MU viplav... may be dhani is terribly hurt.. but she should have demanded for an explanation from viplav.. i will never forgive dhani for this... becoz of her, our cute vipu has to bear so much pain even today.. awww😳

if i were there in dhani's place, i would have hugged him tightly and requested time to stop for me.. i would have wanted the world to end there, making our hug eternal😳😆😆

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