ViDha S.S -part 3 updated, page 2 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sura123

very nice imaginations preeti. I loved it ..Please continue...😊


Thanks sura..!! 😊 Keep reading, the next part will be updated soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: kiranpreethee

I am liking this very much indeed. We are getting our jungle track which we all hoped for. The way you have described everything and Viplav getting hurt etc looks real, so thanks dear. Looking forward to the next part.


Thanks kiran!!...
Yea! I had expected so much from that episode, but got quite disappointed aftter watchin it.
And i will definitely try to make the next part better, and end the jungle track with some ViDha scenes.😃
Keep reading and keep commenting.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Spreeti dr 😳😳
It was an awesome SS ,LOVED IT A LOT👏👏
I am waiting for ur next update dearie
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: CarpedeimRose

Hi Spreeti dr 😳😳

It was an awesome SS ,LOVED IT A LOT👏👏
I am waiting for ur next update dearie


Hiii...!!
Thank You!😃
Yea! will try to update the next part soon...! Do read it..!😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is the third part.I am sorry for not keeping all the parts in one place.Didn't have any idea about how to do it .
I have put my imaginations into it.Do reply about how u liked it.


Viplav smiled to Dhaani's request, to hold her hand."Yea,forever"He replied.And they walked hand in hand, like they were destined to be with each other all their life.

After some distance, "where did all the flowers go?"
"Let the flowers go wherever they want, we should get out of here first."Dhaani replied as she looked back to see if anyone was there, following them,as the leaves rattled.

"Dhaani" Viplav threw at her a you-should-know-that glance.

"oh! yes they were meant to mark the way."Dhaani replied biting her tongue for how stupid she was to forget all these when she herself threw the flowers on the ground.
"And there is no pit here."She looked at Viplav as they continued to walk.

"WE TOOK THE WRONG WAY." They screamed together as their legs freezed.They looked around, they were surrounded by trees.They have undoubtedly entered deep into the forest.
"Dhaaanniii",Dhaani turned to see what Vip was pointing at, when he shrieked.


Kanak was troubled, her son had not returned, he had gone to save the one whom she hates the most.First time she attacked DT she lost her husband and this time her son is in trouble.It had been half an hour since a person called DT and informed that they didn't find Vip in his car.
"This is the second time that this BUDHAU has escaped.God, please save my son now that the witch Dhaani is with him,"she saw DT looking at her questioningly as she spoke to herself.


"What??!!"Dhaani shouted.
"Look over here, here on my back...left side behind my shoulder, there is a insect."He jumped.
Dhaani glared at him..'how can i forget he is afraid of insects'she thought and smiled.
"Its not funny, remove it fast."
She tried to let go of his hand to go to the left side "No, keep holding my hand."he screamed.
"Fine then let the insect be there"Dhaani nodded her head.
"Arre remove it with the other hand."he spoke as he tightened his grip around her hand.
"Ok.Wait."
Dhaani picked up a small stick and removed the insect slowly walking on Vip's back.Poor thing, it didn't have any idea as how much chaos it had created.
It walked its way on the ground, going underneath the leaves, as Vip relaxed realising that he was safe.

"Thanks Dhaani." he hugged her,still holding her left hand.Dhaani pinched him "leave me" she ordered.
As soon as he tried to leave, she hugged him back,"Dhaani, you okay?" Maybe even he knew that dhaani will hug him under certain circumstances.😆
He patted her back."Heard that scratching noise?"Dhaani asked, standing back straight.Vip smirked"Dhaani this is a forest, there must be animals, don't be afraid."

Dhaani looked at him and laughed, "You yourself are afraid of insects."
Vip,"Haan.Bas.Lets get out of here now or do you want to stay here, because half of the time you keep going through forests for your vrat,pooja and other stuff." He spoke as he looked around.

"Lets go this way."he pointed to his front,as he turned back holding Dhaani.
"NO!Wait."
"What? Why? You want to stay here."
"No i think someone is there.I heard footsteps."Dhaani grabbed his hand tightly,looking at the trees infront of them.The thick woods revealed just a pair of eyes.The eyes that had lost them in between but
found them again.
"Dhaani,Wait here, I will see, must be one of the Dadaji's men."
"No, Don't go."she cried out.
"Dhaani.relax.I will just check."


Maybe he will ask me about going to the forset,Kanak thought.But before he could say anything she barked at him,"Babuji Viplav went there to get you back, its another thing that the widow saved your life but its your responsibility to bring him back safe.Without waiting for DT's reply,she climbed the stairs to her room, as her phone rang.
DT was sitting on the sofa.he had not moved from the place, since the man called and informed that Vip was missing, He had shouted at them to get his grandson back.
And they promised that they will bring him home safe.Dadi has been standing there rising her hopes with each call, and as the call disconnected with no news of Vip and Dhaani, she prayed for his and his beloved'ssafety.

Dhaani remembered the trishul hitting Viplav.She feared that there will be those monks behind the trees who may harm her Vakil Babu.
She hugged him and gave him a big "NO!"
Vip got tensed sensing that Dhaani was worried."Dhaani, everything is fine."Dhaani didn't leave him. The only thought of seeing him hurt made her mad.
'No one can love me better than her'Vip thought."Dhaani, whats the matter, hugging me again and again today.Kya iraada hai?"He joked and laughed, to relax her,though he himself was worried for her.
Dhaani repled by pushing him aside and hitting him on his shoulder.
"Dhaani,we can't stand here forever right? We have to go, and thats the right way."She looked at the trees, she had heard footsteps, maybe they were Maha pandit's men,she thought.
Ok!, She nodded her head.

They decided to go back, to find the right way.

But as soon as they took some steps forward,they could hear some chants,Vip looked at Dhaani,if he was right then this place was no more safe.The sounds got clearer with their each step.If they go back they enter deep into the forest and if they walk the way infront they will end up with the same trouble.Vip looked at Dhaani,he needs to make a choice..fast..really fast.!


The next part will be the last one.Honestly I am a bit confused about what to write.😕
Feel free to provide your suggestions, about what you want in the next part.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb dear😊...waiting for last part..plzzz continue..
Edited by vijayasri88 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: vijayasri88

superb dear😊...waiting for last part..plzzz continue..


Thanks..!! 😊
I have not yet decided on what to write, but will soon get something into the head and will update ASAP.

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