Fixing What He Broke- IshqAan

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Ek aur, garma garam story ready hai. I should really be prepping for research, lekin this is more fun. Dreaming up scenarios and fix-its is 100 times better than doing a literature review. So here, courtesy of episode 108 and 109, I present a missing scene (We didn't need that much drama between the two eps, let's be honest. They could have cut half of 108 and half of 109 and spliced it together). So, here's a splice:

Disclaimer- I don't own the characters, show or any dialogues (towards the end) that have been said in the show

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Signing those papers had been his undoing. It was all he could do to keep walking out of the room. His knees threatened to buckle beneath his as soon as he crossed the threshold and he had to brace himself against the wall.

He had come to fix them. And had ended up damaging them even more irreparably than before. How had he messed up so bad?

A whispered voice reached his ears. Words spoken out loud, but not meant to be heard.

“Itna bhi trust nahin tha aapko mujhpe AVM? Ek jhatke mein sab kuch khatam kar diya? Aapne soch bhi kaise liya ki main aapko dhoka de sakti hoon? Ya main aapki ma ki side le rahi hoon. Aapne promise kiya tha kia ap mera point of view understand karne ki koshish karenge. Par aapne to try kare bina hi sab kuch khatam kar diya.”

His head rolled back until it came to rest on the wall behind him. This was not the Ishqi he had just seen looking back at him with attitude in her eyes. These were not the words of risky Ishqi, the girl who had sacrificed herself for his family’s reputation. This was not his wife, who had promised to stick by him, through everything. There was a pleading in her voice that he wasn’t used to.

He wanted to go in. Confront her. Ask her why she’d done this. Why would she side with the one person who had single-handedly ruined everything in his life? Ask her why she’d brought the woman back into their lives, when she knew their history very well. Shake her until she broke her silence.

He broken from his reverie by a crash sounding from the room. He only just caught himself before rushing into the room and instead hurried through a neighboring open door, in the nick of time to hear maasi’s panicked voice rushing past. Slowly creeping out, he resumed his position outside the door. A stack of papers and some signatures done in a moment of haste could not possibly spell the end for them.

No.

He wouldn’t let it end like this. Straining to listen to the hushed conversation inside, he inched as close as he could without giving himself away.

“Ishqi, yeh kya hai?” maasi implored, taking the papers from her hand.

“Sab khatam ho gaya maasi. AVM ne sab khatam kar diya. Dekho na, kya karne nikli thi, aur kya ho gaya. Maine Dadi ki baaton mein aake yeh papers sign kare the. Lekin AVM ne toh khud aakar sign karein hain. Unhe mujhpe bharosa nahin hai maasi.” She choked out the words to the woman in front of her.

“Ishqi, main ab bhi keh rahi hoon, Ahaan ko sab bata de. Usne tujhe support kiya hai, toh woh apni ma ko bhi karega. Lekin poora sach jaanne ke baad.” Maasi pleaded again

Ishqi let out a shaky, disbelieving laugh. “Ab nahin maasi. Unhone apne haathon se yeh papers sign karein hain aur yeh ring mujhe di hai. Ab kis haq se main unhe jaake kahoon ki unki maa bhaagi nahin thi, balki mental asylum mein thi? Kis mooh se jaake bolun ki unhe wahan pahaunchane waali koi aur nahin dadi thi? Aap itne saal mausaji ki wajah se chup rahi. Savitri aunty toh bees saal se shaant hain kyunki jab unhone awaaz uthane ki koshish kari unki awaaz band kar di gayi. Kaise bataun Ahaan ko ki unke papa, jisko dadi ne mahan banaya hua hai, who apni patni ko nashi ki haalat mein maarte they? Peet-te they? Aur woh koi London-wandon nahin gayi, balki yaha thi, apne ghar se ek ghanta door? Suraj ji unke pati nahin, unke wakeel hain? Jo unhe sirf divorce aur apne bacchon ki custody milne mein help kar rahe they? Who saboot maangenge maasi. Aur mere paas koi saboot nahin hai” She wiped the few tears that had managed to escape.

Maasi grabbed her shoulders and gently shook her in her exasperation. “Lekin ab kya Ishqi? Ab kya karegi tu? Ahaan ne toh papers sign kar diye na? Toh ab kaunsa saboot tere kaam aayega? Savitri ji ne tujhe bola tha, ki Durga ji ke khilaaf mat ja. Jo bhi unke raaste mein aata hai, woh usko hataa deti hai. Dekh, unhone tod diya na tera aur Ahaan ka Rishta? Ab tu agar saboot ke saath wahan jaayegi bhi, toh kis haq se?”

“Ab, wohi hoga jo plan kiya hai. AVM saboot ke bina maanenge nahin, aur mein khud unhe saboot jaake de nahin sakti. Toh ab, dadi ke is chehre ko Ahaan ke saamne lana hai, toh sabke saamne laana hai. Ab dadi ko iss jhoot ke peeche chhipne nahin dungi main.” She paused, turning to her maasi. “Mera banda ziddi hai, adiyal hai, khadoos hai. Sanskaaron pe kuch zyaada hi dhyaan deta hai, 1921 ka hai. Lekin main unse pyaar karti hoon. Aur woh mujhse. Aur unhe meri zaroorat hai. Mere liye itna hi kaafi hai.” A slight smile graced her face, through the emotions in her voice

It took Ahaan many minutes to comprehend the conversation he had eavesdropped on. He’d been hoping to hear why Ishqi would support the destroyer of his family. But it wasn’t Ishqi supporting the destroyer, it was him. It was his Dadi who had caused all of this.

Ishqi was right, he had signed the papers of his own accord, without even waiting to hear why she had signed them. She had to have been coerced, just like Kartik had said.

She’d risked everything, but if she had just talked to him...

‘Would you have listened? Every time somebody brings up your mother, you shut down. You’ve already told her off so many times. You’re not rational when it comes to maa. So why would you listen to her?’

20 years. His mother had spent 20 years in a mental asylum because she had tried to go against physical abuse inflicted on her by her own husband. She’d been placed there to cover up the sins of a son.

The dots were starting to connect. "Rhea had also accused Dadi of kidnapping Ishqi from the resort and plotting to keep them apart. How many times had things gone wrong in his life and it had been because of Dadi, but he blamed somebody entirely inappropriate? She had stopped him from going after Mayank. Had she done that out of care for their family? Out of fear of Sarla aunty's reaction? Or was it self-preservation?' He began moving towards the door. He’d heard all he needed to. Ishqi hadn’t betrayed him. He had betrayed her. He had abandoned her. She was trying to fix his family, but he had broken them.

But how did he get Dadi to confess? How was he supposed to accuse the woman who had raised him? The questions kept circling his mind as he drove home. Even seeing everyone seated in front of the TV, trying to make sense of the press conference, he couldn’t muster up the energy to react.

Let the chips fall where they may. He was beyond caring. “Ishqi ko jo karna hai, karne dijiye.”

Dadi’s shocked face rankled with him. Was she just acting or was this genuine concern? “Who ladki humare ghar ki izzat ucchaalne jaa rahi hai, aur hum haath par haath dhare baithe rahein?”

It was time for the truth to out. “Dadi aap hi ne mujhe sikhaya hai ki agar kuch galat nahin kiya hai toh darne ki koi zaroorat nahin. Humari family ne toh kuch galat nahin kiya. Hum logon ne toh kuch chupaya nahin hai.” THERE. The slight signs of panic on her face were all the confirmation he needed. Ishqi was right.

“Haa-Haan, par-”

“Darte wohi hain dadi, jo galat karte hain”

‘Jaise aapne kiya hai. Pehle maa ke saath. Aur ab Ishqi aur mere saath.’

“Aur log kya bolte hain, use humein kya farak padta hai? Humlog jaante hain na apni family kaisi hai? Usko jo karna hai karne dijiye. Uski wajah se hum apni family life aur mental state affect nahin hone denge.” He knew that more than Ishqi, it was what Dadi had done that had affected this family and their mental status.


Compared to that, nothing could possibly hurt him the way she had. Let Ishqi do this. Let her expose Dadi, because once again, she had been right. He wouldn’t have believed her even with the conference happening, had he not heard her words not even an hour ago.

It was time to reassess his life and he would begin with fixing his relationship with Ishqi, who should have been his priority from the start. He shouldn't have let Dadi interfere between them, at all.

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I want to do a part two...? Agar dimaag chalega, toh I'll try to do a full khulasa and wrap of the entire story continuing from here only, with a re-written ending. And if it does go longer, I'll shift it to a proper fanfiction category.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Aashi!! Chha gayi tum, God promise!😳

You explained everything so beautiful, Ahaan's emotions were well penned out, everything he felt before and after the revelation was on point! I love how he happened to overhear Ishqi and not more unnecessary drama done. And Ishqi! Awwh, my heart goes out to that poor soul.😒

Ahaan's catching up on Dadi's kaarname

Ab toh Dadi gayi kaam se😆

Ishqi hadn’t betrayed him. He had betrayed her. He had abandoned her. She was trying to fix his family, but he had broken them. I LOVE THIS!!⭐️

Second part? Ohhh yes please!!❤️

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Originally posted by: Wanderlust05

Aashi!! Chha gayi tum, God promise!😳

You explained everything so beautiful, Ahaan's emotions were well penned out, everything he felt before and after the revelation was on point! I love how he happened to overhear Ishqi and not more unnecessary drama done. And Ishqi! Awwh, my heart goes out to that poor soul.😒

Ahaan's catching up on Dadi's kaarname

Ab toh Dadi gayi kaam se😆

Ishqi hadn’t betrayed him. He had betrayed her. He had abandoned her. She was trying to fix his family, but he had broken them. I LOVE THIS!!⭐️

Second part? Ohhh yes please!!❤️


Thank you ji, thank you 😊😊 I was hoping that Ahaan's part was okay, since I had issues with the transition and switching. Honestly, I'm not a big fan of unnecessary drama. Open communication is more my thing. Iss sab drame mein bechari Ishqi phas gayi. Aur upar se uske stupid plans. Behen, mooh pe taala kaun lagata hai important waqt par?


@Bold: Thank you!!! I loved writing this line so much just for Ahaan's realization of his idiotic unthinking action. Acting without thinking was the main MO in the second half of the show uuuuugggggghhhh


I have a basic plan for part 2, let's see if it pans out 🤗

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Yessss plssss 🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼 Can’t wait for part 2

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Hayye mujhe to pata hi nahi tha ki aapne update ki hai. Lekin ab mujhe mil gayi ❤️😆

Bahut achha likha hai aapne. Ahaan ki feelings, uski internal battle, Ishqi k saath rishta acche se likha hai aapne.

Daadi to phirse gayi

Ishqi hadn’t betrayed him. He had betrayed her. He had abandoned her. She was trying to fix his family, but he had broken them

I agree with Afreen di, this line is simply beautiful.


Next part puhleez🥺❤️

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Hayye mujhe to pata hi nahi tha ki aapne update ki hai. Lekin ab mujhe mil gayi ❤️😆

Bahut achha likha hai aapne. Ahaan ki feelings, uski internal battle, Ishqi k saath rishta acche se likha hai aapne.

Daadi to phirse gayi

Ishqi hadn’t betrayed him. He had betrayed her. He had abandoned her. She was trying to fix his family, but he had broken them

I agree with Afreen di, this line is simply beautiful.


Next part puhleez🥺❤️


Thank you thank you thank you!!! 😊😊❤

Daadi ki toh main lagakar rahungi. Choddne nahin waali 😏😏

I'll be home in 20 mins, I'm planning to start writing then! Toh 12 ghante mein aa jaayega next part 🤗

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Originally posted by: Forever_Fangirl


Thank you ji, thank you 😊😊 I was hoping that Ahaan's part was okay, since I had issues with the transition and switching. Honestly, I'm not a big fan of unnecessary drama. Open communication is more my thing. Iss sab drame mein bechari Ishqi phas gayi. Aur upar se uske stupid plans. Behen, mooh pe taala kaun lagata hai important waqt par?


@Bold: Thank you!!! I loved writing this line so much just for Ahaan's realization of his idiotic unthinking action. Acting without thinking was the main MO in the second half of the show uuuuugggggghhhh


I have a basic plan for part 2, let's see if it pans out 🤗


You're welcome!😳

Okay? It was amazing dude!! I absolutely loved it and was kept in character- that's the best part.

Me too! If you'll have accepted the other despite your own set of differences then why not speak out everything else? Uske plans ki yaad mat dilao yaar😆 mujhe uska say phodne ka mann kar raha tha.😆


Acting without thinking- ITV's asset😆


Can't wait to read it!🤗

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Aaaya re aaya, update aaya! Yeh raha part 2 (jo maine aadha class mein likha hai. Boryat se mujhe bachao yaar).

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“Dadi? Dadi conference pe kya kar rahi hai? Where’s Ishqi?! She can’t just not show up! This was important for her. It isn’t like her to abandon something this important. Or public.” He was panicking now. It wasn’t like his Ishqi to declare something this publicly and disappear. Something was wrong. Something wasn’t quite fitting right.

Kartik looked at the puzzled faces around them. “Bhai sahi keh rahe hain. Ishqi isn’t the type of person jo aise hi gayab ho jaaye. Aur especially tab jab sab kuch itna uljha hua hai. She’s a person who solves, not complicates,” he noted. Turning to the others, he asked “Mom, aapko pata hai Ishqi kahan hai?” and received a shake of her head in response.

“Mujhe toh chinta ho rahi hai uski. Mata rani use safe rakhe bas. Warna pata nahi uske saath kya ho jaaye. Agar use kuch ho gaya toh…” She prayed.

“What do you mean kya ho jaaye chachi? Do you know anything about this? Use kuch kyun hoga?” When his question went unanswered, he repeated himself more forcefully, “Chachi please. Agar aapko kuch bhi pata hai, toh please mujhe bataiye. Ishqi already iss family ke liye bohot kuch suffer kar chuki hai. I don’t want ki use aur kuch sehna pade. Please.” He pleaded

“Dekh Ahaan, mujhe nahin pata ki Ishqi kahan hai ya uske saath kya ho raha hai. Mujhe bas itna pata hai, kahin na kahin, mummy-ji involved hai.”

“Ritu tum-“ her husband attempted to stop her

“Nahin. Ab bas ho gaya. 20 saal pehle bolna chahiye tha, kuch nahi bola. 20 saalon se kuch nahin bola. Ahaan aur Sonu se sach chupaya. Dono apni maa se nafrat karte rahe aur hum chup rahe. Mummyji ne uss nafrat ko aag di. Aur Ishqi ne jab cheezein badalna chahi, usko bhi mummyji ne chup karwa dia. Lekin ab bas. Bohot ho gaya. Mummyji ne hum sabko bohot control kar liya. Main unhe Ishqi ko kuch nahin karne dungi” she exclaimed, shrugging her husband’s interjection off.

Sonu was struggling to process everything that was being said “Chachi, iska matlab hai maa…maa humein chodkar nahin gayi thi. Unhone mujhe aur bhaiya ko abandon nahin kiya.” Tears were beginning to gather on her lashes. “Bhai, mom…”

“I know Sonu. I know. Lekin iss waqt, important hai Ishqi ko dhoondhna. Aur yeh pata lagaana ki Dadi ne kya kya kiya hai.” As he spoke, the door to the house opened and one of the topics of discussion strolled into the house. Ahaan strode up to his grandmother and spoke without breaking his stride, “Dadi Ishqi kahan hai? Aap uss press conference mein kyun gayi thi?”

“Puttar main toh bas humare parivaar ki izzat sambhaalne gayi thi. Ishqi ne mujhe call kiya tha, aur ek deal offer kari. Usne mujhse paise maange. Maine use paise diye aur usne kaha ki woh conference mein nahin jaayegi.” Her words may have been coming out level, but her shifty look belied her nervousness at her grandson questioning her publicly for the first time

“Jhoot mat boliye Dadi. Ishqi aisi ladki nahin hai jo sirf paiso ke liye itna badi baat chod de. Usne humari family ke liye itna kuch kiya hai. Son uke liye kya kuch nahin kiya. We’ve been over this Dadi. Chahe Ishqi aur mera jhagda kyun na ho jaaye, main uspe trust karna nahin chhodunga. Resort mein bhi Rhea ne yeh kiya tha, aur ab bhi aap same cheez kar rahi hain.” He came to stop before her, face stoic, as if carved out of stone. He was done pandering to his grandmother. His priority was his wife and her safety, not coddling people.

“Puttar, uss ladki ne Savitri ke saath milke humari family ko todne ki koshish kari hai. Uspe bharosa nahin kar sakte.” She tried persuading him, as if trying to emphasize all the evidence she had presented to him until that day.

Ahaan stepped up to her and ground out through gritted teeth, “Usne maa ke saath milke kya kiya aur kya nahin kiya, usme mujhe koi interest nahin hai. But you listen to me. Agar Ishqi ko kuch ho gaya na, toh main aapko kabhi maaf nahi karunga. Aaj tak jitna pyaar use kiya hai, utni hi nafrat aapse karunga. I’m going to look for her. And she better be alright. Chal Kartik.” Barking the missive at his younger brother, he strode towards the door, shoulders set in a stiff line.

“Daadi aaj toh aapne hadd paar kardi. Agar bhaabhi ko kuch ho gaya na, toh main bhai ko hi support karunga. Chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye.” Kartik paused to say before following his brother out, worry clearly radiating through his expression

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Kaisa laga? Did I do the characters justice with their reactions? I tried to stick to the reactions in the show but tweaked it a little bit. Part 3 pe work shuru 1-2 din mein hoga

Edited by Forever_Fangirl - 3 years ago
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Thank youuu diiii❤️🤗

Humesha ki tarah bahut hi zyada achha tha.

Ahaan ne Ishqi k liye stand liya, Kartik to humesha se hi support karta hai, Chachi bhi boli

Aaj tak jitna pyaar use kiya hai, utni hi nafrat aapse karunga.

Loved this.

Daadi ki shaamat aayi🤣


Sorry lekin aapki boring classes ne humara din bana diya, to ab 3rd part dena padega😆

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Originally posted by: Ocean_of_waves

Thank youuu diiii❤️🤗

Humesha ki tarah bahut hi zyada achha tha.

Ahaan ne Ishqi k liye stand liya, Kartik to humesha se hi support karta hai, Chachi bhi boli

Aaj tak jitna pyaar use kiya hai, utni hi nafrat aapse karunga.

Loved this.

Daadi ki shaamat aayi🤣


Sorry lekin aapki boring classes ne humara din bana diya, to ab 3rd part dena padega😆


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Poore time bechare Kartik ko zyaada lines nahin mili, so I was feeling so bd. You can bet ki he is going to feature a lot in this fic! Our boy deserved better!! I felt it was time for Chachi to speak up, so maa aur bete, dono se lecture milega dadi ko ab 😏😏


@bold: This was my fav line to write too!!


Meri boring class dhanya ho, jisne humein writing ki motivtion di! Agla part is in the works! Thank you for being so awesome and following along!! ❤️

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