The Fateful Evening...Arjun Draupadi OS Thread.3 - Page 39

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Posted: 7 years ago
Simply superb, the way you are describing the event, feeling like seeing the atmosphere right in front of our eyes. Great to see the quick updates and eagerly awaiting for the new ones ...
One request, please try to conclude at least, the Swayamvar event with full details today and reactions of the audience hearing Suka's story. This is one of the most awaited episodes for me, so please, if possible post it fully today.

Thank you so much!


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Posted: 7 years ago
Suka took a break for a while since Pari is adamant on listening to the whole event at a stretch. He went to his father's hermitage with a promise that he will return back within twenty minutes.
Arjun is lying on the grass bed away from every one ..he could feel his Madhav's loving glance on him even now. It is so soothing and warm at the same time. He turned sideways and felt his Madhav lying beside him looking at him with his Devine smile. You are here? He exclaimed wonder struck.
Krishna answered instantly. " Ofcourse I am here. How could I miss the moment of our first meet and Add to that the blooming of a fresh love story between the best archer and the most beautiful woman?

Arjun quipped." Ofcourse I know you are omnipresent. Any thing is possible with you. But I don't wish my first meet with Krishnaa to be recorded by the sage and you know the reason. I don't want my mother and brothers to feel embarrassed. It should remain personal,private. Between her and me. What do you think?

Krishna agreed." Let it be. I will make the sage overlook it..and proceed with the remaining. But I can't stop your fireborn from reminiscing the moment all over again..Krishma showed Panchali sitting in the darkness of the night a little bit away from her co wives. She closed her eyes and the beautiful smile that stayed on her face indicated the truth of Krishna's words.

Krishnaa Draupadi went back to the day ..that brought her Sukh and dukh together. She still remember how anxious she is to paint his picture before she leave for the swayamvar mantap. She hastily mixed the colours,and started her effort..the curly hair,unkempt,the hazel eyes,the sharp nose,the mischevous smile on his lips,the great physique..

Panchali smiled with relief. She brought to life the person who created magic through her portrait.

Who is he? Is he Arjun?

Malini called up and entered with maids to get her ready for the most important moment of her life.

She wore red lehenga and light pink dupatta that enhanced the look. Her nose ring shone with pride. The most beautiful woman chose to bear it on her cute nose.

Panchali's long hair is plaited and jasmines are arranged till the end where golden balls are tied.

Malini praised her." Princess you look extraordinary. Your husband will swoon at the very first sight.

Draupadi looked into the mirror and checked herself. Suddenly she felt the hazel eyes gaze at her and whisper in her ears.' You look awesome."

Panchali closed her eyes and wondered." Is this the magic created? Govind! Guide me please." She helplessly urged him.

Dhrishtdyumn came inside and informed. All the guests have arrived. There is no trace of Arjun. Father is tensed up.

Krishnaa Yaajnaseni felt depressed...Will the magic work? Govind save me please..

Suka returned back and started again..


Edited by ltelidevara - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wonderful update, and the way you brought Lord Krishna and he discussing with Arjun.
Draupadi reminiscing that moment, it is so beautiful ... I'm literally glued to my system now to read the updates as soon as they are posted.
Thank you very much!


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Posted: 7 years ago
Di just awsome...
No words...
U described the whole situation sooo well...just superb..
And especially the mandab place... ..all the 3 updates were awsome... Superb..and thank you so much for 3 updates...
Pleas update the next part soon...
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Posted: 7 years ago
paartha

I understand your excitement to read the event without break because like you I am also an Arjun admirer who literally swooned over his achievement since childhood. It is a dream like sequence for me and I just forget myself thinking of the greatest feat ever done...Isn't it sheer intelligence associated with awesome skill that made him hit the fish eye so perfectly?

I read many great interpretations of the event by Vyasa ,and by contemporary writers like KM Munshi,Dr Shindey.and many more...
I started my story with the post swayamvar phase so then I did not take it up but now I created an opportunity to myself to describe the event in my way..

Believe me like you I am also just longing to read it in letters but I want to do it to my satisfaction. Yesterday I could not fulfill your request to post it in one go...too excited and nervous I was.

To day definitely I will post my most cherished achievement of Arjun..for sure.

Sorry for the delay. I hope you understand.

Unmesha

Thanks a lot for such response. You really are a true Arjun Draupadi admirer.
I hope I would be able to write the remaining parts ...in such a way that will make you enjoy the experience.


Lakshmi




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Posted: 7 years ago
Hi Lakshmi,
Sure, no problem, I can understand. Updates of yesterday were awesome. Eagerly awaiting for today's updates.

Thanks once again for your brilliant efforts on this story.

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Posted: 7 years ago
Eagerly waiting for your update😊...hope we'll get the 😳update today di..just can't wait.
.please please update soon😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
We all are eagerly awaiting for the updates!
Please update now, this is like waiting for a blockbuster movie...

Thanks very much.


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Posted: 7 years ago
I think we don't get an update today😕😭
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Posted: 7 years ago
Ah, :(...
Hopefully tomorrow we will have...

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