The Fateful Evening...Arjun Draupadi OS Thread.3

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Sweetka.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#191

Wow di...wat a wonderful update...nyc description of dual between paarth-madhav...our arjun is always gr8 than them all

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bubulswt

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Posted: 7 years ago

#192

so many updates to catch up but it's totally worth it how much I love reading it again and again

Love the way Draupadi keeps her faith and confidence in Arjun and Govind and tell same thing to subhadra also. So both Draupadi and Subhadra is there to watch fight with Satya but Balram stops them for safety reasons. Both madhav and his Parth is in fun and light mood because Arunj have full faith in his Madhav and talking about swimming competition in Yamuna 😆😆 they were so into each other that even saga Galav is doubtful that these two soulmate will fight this war with seriousness or not, Balram and Bheem make them remember that they have fight with each other with seriousness just love their boding no one can and nothing can be like them.

and finally when fight begin they both started enjoying it and started admiring each other it's looking more like they are showing love for each other in different way within the war, amazing description dear 👏 again Balram and Bheem have to make them remember to finish it soon earth is shaken by fight of two soulmates finally Bramahadev stopped them and make both there stand clear with perfect solution.again they both start their fun secession that how much they enjoyed doing it. it's great that finally Balram also acknowledged Arjun's worth. it's always treat to read when Govind tease his Sakhi that too for Arjun. now even sags know that both Madhav and his Parth are insuperable.

superb description of Arjun and lord Shiva fight and Shasrta use

waiting for next part

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ltelidevara

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Posted: 7 years ago

#193

Thank you Sweetika,Bulbulswt, Unmesha,paartha and every one who liked the story. I will continue the story with your motivation and support Thanks a lot.

Lakshmi

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Devhooti mishra

@Divu55

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Posted: 7 years ago

#194

Ahahaha😭😭 missed so many things... My assignments r killing me... Still have lots to do...but today i somehow got a chance to pen down my comment... All the updates are awesome... The dilemma that both friends faced n their being compelled to perform their duties n keep the word of theirs... I just luv panchali's behaviour n confidence for her arjun that was just. Stupendous... N their fighting sequence was lovable n admiring ofcourse...

N not to talk about the extra updates that u gave about arjun his valour n all i just cant comment on all of them... Reason is. Their beauty depthness of knowledge n magic in words... I mean wooowww n i cant say more than this...

WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOOOWWWSS...

Loads n loads of luv n respect...

I m again sorry di... I may not comment here often these days due to my busy schedule... But I never miss to read any of ur updates...

U r a class di

👏👏👏

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ltelidevara

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Posted: 7 years ago

#195

Thank you Divu. Thanks for loving every thing. And be free to comment as per your convenience. I know you will read this anytime. No worries.

Lakshmi

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ltelidevara

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Posted: 7 years ago

#196

Subhadra stopped her narration . Chitra hugged her close. Wonderful . Amazing. What a thrilling event you described. Thank you so much Subhadra. My love for Arjun doubled ..no I think I can't measure it.

Arjun who listened to the story standing at the back side of the mango grove walked away. How could he forget that event? Tonite Subhadra took him back..to that memorable day where he and his Madhav proved to the world how inseparable they are... And their swimming competition ? Arjun smiled as if witnessing it before his eyes. He lied on the shores of Ganga and stared at the stars shining and smiling at him. He closed his eyes and traced back to Yamuna...to his Madhav.

Yamuna rose higher challenging the friends who are playing with her tides. The sky is covered with dark clouds that may rain anytime... Parth.. Here I am.. Krishna called trying to rise up on the watery surface. Arjun laughed and called back...But I am just behind you and now I go further ahead..

Krishna laughed and challenged..I won't let you... Here I reach..you..

They both enjoyed even when the rain started . It looked like they are overpowered by water upside down. Still they are not perturbed and swam against the rainy showers and Yamuna waters..

Sahadev who came under the shelter of an umberella shouted desperately." Bhrata Arjun.. Govind return back. Eldest want you to be back. Bhrata Balaram is tensed up. The weather is not good. I have to attend on my duties.. Please come back.

The friends swam back assuring Sahadev they will reach the city in a while.

Krishna and Arjun lied down on the shore . The raindrops are caressing their faces and feeling the thrill. Arjun asked Krishna without opening his eyes." You know this before. Still you let this happen. Why? Don't speak in riddles. I want you to tell the fact.

Krishna did not answer. Arjun continued." Imagine what will happen if Mata is there. She would have been shattered."

Still Krishna is silent. Arjun continued." How desparate Subhadra was. She blamed herself for believing her friends.

Krishna teased." But your fire born is unperturbed. How confident she is with your victory, I am impressed."

Arjun smiled." Because she believed in your love for me.

To be continued shortly

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ltelidevara

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Posted: 7 years ago

#197

Parth we should set an example for the world not only for our friendship but also for our commitment. If we retreat back from our word it will be a blot ion our Charecter. Yes I know Narad will play the trick and send Chitrasen to you. Who will stand as an equal to me except you?

Sage Galav could have forgiven Chitrasen. But he is adamant. On the other side Chitrasen also is at fault. Just because he is flying high he should not behave recklessly. I want both of them to learn the lesson. I know the war would be stopped in the middle.I also know you won't take your step back if you give your word.

There is this misconception in some people that you excel every time because of me . So I want to show your detractors that you will stand undefeated even if I stand against you. Now I hope you got your answer.

Arjun pulled him up and smiled." I understood. But don't repeat this again in any circumstance. I can't bear the thought.

Krishna questioned seriously." You think it is easier for me?I swear we will always stand by each other till the end and afterwards also."

Arjun hugged him closer and Krishna hugged back.

Indraprasth celebrated the great exhibition of skills by Krishna and Arjun. People thronged the streets to have a look at the friends who proved their friendship even if they stood opposite each other.

A great dinner was served in honour of Balaram and Krishna with all the prominent members attending and greeting the duo Krishna and Arjun.

Subhadra could not stop smiling at the turn of events. She hugged Arjun in their private chamber and expressed her gratitude." You honoured my word to my friends and stood against Bhrata. You proved how much you love me and I am on top of the world. Today I will sleep with peace." She confessed.

Satya asked Draupadi how could she be so relaxed and got the answer" They love each other more than they love their lives. I am sure they will come out unscathed."

Panchali observed Arjun sneezing continuously and Krishna is no exception.

She asked Sahadev to give them his aushadhi and he spilled the beans." They both swam in the rain for a long time. Catching cold is the after effect.

Arjun knocked the door after midnight and Panchali scolded him" Why are you roaming still? Again it is raining. Can't you stay indoors?

Arjun entered checked his kids and remarked." You don't know the fun in rain. It should be experienced.

Panchali who is pouring the aushadhi into the vessel retorted." I don't want to know and I insist you also take care of yourself. Enough of your funny ways."

Arjun looked at the rain showering with rythym and started" The rain drops touch my face, they

asked me where is your beloved?

To be continued shortly

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ltelidevara

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Posted: 7 years ago

#198

Panchali side glanced him with a questioning expression. Arjun continued. The raindrops want to check if the most beautiful woman is really so ,as praised by one and all.

Panchali bit her lip and understood. He is in his poetic mood that will bring forth the intense lover in him to savour the moment.

Arjun stood and walked towards her. His husky voice is even more alluring due to his cold..thought Panchali.

I told the rain to stop dreaming since the most beautiful woman doesn't give the chance to touch and feel her beauty. She is too scared of rain..

Arjun watched her expressions and whispered." The rain drops pleaded with me again and again. I felt pity and promised to fulfill their desire.

Panchali widened her eyes and gazed at him anticipating his next move. Before she could understand what is happening she was lifted by him and next minute she found herself drenched in the rain on her terrace The raindrops showered their admiration by touching the most beautiful face ...