The Fateful Evening...Arjun Draupadi OS Thread.3

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paartha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1091

Nice update, Arjun/Draupadi they understand and support each other so well.

Please continue soon with longer updates. Thank you very much.

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Jaishnavi Krishnaa

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1092

It was too nice... But tooo short too...😭

Please update soon with long updates and di you didn't show Pragati for a long time.. Draupadi didn't get to spend time with her children now also now she doesn't want to share pari..soo..please di if possible give us some Arjun Draupadi pragati moments...missing her sooo much

Thank you😊

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ltelidevara

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1093

The practice session resumed as usual. Pari curiously looked at Arjun. He vaguely understood his Pitamah was disturbed and he could sense the reason through the whispering words between his mother and Subhadra Mata.

Pari always wanted to know about his father,the wonder warrior Abhimanyu ..but neither his mother nor any one fulfilled his wish..His Pitamah Arjun ...he still did not recover from his grief. That much he loves his father?

Pari felt jealous. He was not lucky enough to see his father,feel his father's love. But Subhadra Mata tells he ,Arjun loves his grandson as much as he loved his son. But he never expresses it since he is afraid to lose him also..

Arjun touched Pari with his hand...he understood his kid is disturbed somehow.

Pari took stance and got ready to shoot the moving target..

Subhadra asked Panchali after the morning worship was over. How is he? Did he recover?

Draupadi nodded her head. She knew it is not true. He won't get out of his heartbreak.

Subhadra sighed and said. Pari is growing up. He now is too desperate to know about his father. Who will quench his thirst? I can't. Uttara won't. I know you also can not..

Panchali closed her eyes which already had moisture at corners.

Since a long time there is no news from Gangateer ashram. Sahadev is worried. He did not send messengers since Kunti prohibited him from doing so.She said " All Of you spent long time here. Now get back to your duties. We will pursue our ultimate destination..

Pragati who stayed back with Kunti was sent to Dwarika with Satyaki Who went there on some purpose.

Sahadev raised the issue at dining time. Yudhishtir also felt that they should send messengers. Where is Ved Vyas Maharshi? He asked.

Arjun answered..He is not nearer. He went to Badarikasram. Suka also went with him.

Bhima expressed his irritation..Due to the blind king ourmother is facing trouble. Can't he stay back?

Nakul instantly remarked..He ran away because of you only..

Sahadev shouted at Nakul..Will you stop your banter? Is this the time for humour?

Nakul shrugged his shoulders.

Arjuna said..Pari's birthday is approaching.. If we send the invite to bless him,they will atleast convey their welfare though they won't come..

Bheem patted Arjun on his back..That is the way out. Do it fast..

Panchali turned back and there he is with a smile. The night is a chilled one with cool breeze making them shiver.. She gazed at his face and found him refreshing. She knew the reason..Pari'sbirthday is round the corner.

When will Pragati arrive? Did she forget that she is my daughter? Panchali asked him with a frown.

Arjun did not reply. He is savouring her beauty that got enhanced in her anger..

Panchali took her long plait in her hand and threw it back only to be caught by Arjun. He inhaled the fragrance and hugged her from behind.

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paartha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1094

Lovely update! Would be nice to read Pari's birthday celebrations and what will Arjun do for his birthday celebration.

Please continue soon. Thank you very much.

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Jaishnavi Krishnaa

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1095

Wowww di...soo beautiful the update was!!!

Parii!!! Truly he is unlucky!! 😭

Ooh Pragati is in Dwarika , when will she come ?? Missing her

And the last part... Our romantic Arjun is back!!😆

Thanks a lot...continue soon..

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paartha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1096

Please continue the story soon, awaiting for Pari's birthday celebrations.

Thank you.

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Sweetka.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1097

Superb update di...m eagerly waiting for pari's upcoming birthday celebration...coz there were no detailed information of parikshit's childhood in the epic...so it is interesting 2 read about dis...waiting 4 pragiti n our cute ardi birthday present 2 pari

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Jaishnavi Krishnaa

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1098

Ooh yes,, you need a new thread soon!🥳😆

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Devhooti mishra

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1099

I am sooo late with my comments...

Pari's desperation is understood... And it is heartbreaking to acknowledge that he actually never got a chance to know his father well n to feel his presence... THOUGH Arjun loves him like anything...

Pari's bday is fast approaching ... Really excited for it...

N naughty Arjun with his fireborn... I luv their cosy togetherness...just mesmerizing...

So update soon di... Since it is difficult to wait for ur update...

N i am sorry di... For my being so late with comments... College is about to start so... Stuffs ..

Any way... Tremendous di ... Ur writing... Luved it...

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ltelidevara

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Panchali repeated her question " Answer me first..she demanded.

Arjun turned her to face him and replied. " Madhav sent message. He is sending her with Satyaki within a week.

Panchali sulked. You know everything but you won't tell me till I ask.

Arjun pulled het on to the couch and lied down on her lap...I want to surprise you. If Pragati suddenly arrives how would you feel? You made me tell and I missed the chance.

Panchali said in a low voice..There is no strength left in me to bear with surprises good or bad.Nowadays I feel too exhausted mentally and physically.

Arjun silently watched her and realised the truth of her words. He got up and made her lie on the coach ..He made space for himself and asked with concern. Krishnaa Let Sahadev check you properly and give aushadhis.You need them. Sahadev said you did not allow him to check.

Panchali tried to change the topic. Arjun..how do you plan to celebrate Pari birthday? Will Govind and Satya come here?she asked.

Arjun nodded his head. They won't come. Subhadra's father is unwell.He may not come.

Panchali placed her head on his heart.She felt a strange urge to merge in him totally. What else is left in life? Better to end the journey here..but Pragati?

Panchali looked up and asked...Dont you think we should get Pragati married as soon as possible?I fear she will become an ascetic in life like her father.

Arjun smiled. If her father is an ascetic he won't be lying beside his most beautiful wife..That too afterbecoming Pitamah.

Panchali laughed heartfully..This Pitamah is ever young with no grey hair even at this age..she said and ruffled his hair..

Parth hugged her closer and said passionately. Your love that is eternal is keeping me young.If you stop loving I will instantly grow old.

Panchali closed his lips and stated..Till my last breath I keep loving you Dhananjay..

Arjun got tears in his eyes. He rewarded her not with words but with his deeds.

To be continued

Edited by ltelidevara - 7 years ago