The Fateful Evening...Arjun Draupadi OS Thread.3 - Page 109

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Posted: 7 years ago
Hey...di
I couldnt comment all these days... Was busy with my workshop n got free today...

N i read updates ...all of them... Mind blowing...
Never ever seen side of Arjun...sooo strict but that too mesmerized me...n pari... How obedient he is... N naughty arjun with his krishnaa so sweet

N the recent update where Arjun felt abhi's presence that was so emotional... Even we miss him

What a pain...seeing your 16 year boy dying... Cant imagine

But arjun will get solace in presence of his fireborn...

Again di all the updates were so splendid...

N an apology for no comments all these days
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Posted: 7 years ago
Where is he? Arjun's wives bombarded Ulupi with questions. The dinner was over every one dispersed but they are sitting in the adjacent garden waiting for Arjun's news.
Ulupi sat in Asan drank water and gasped for breath. She then revealed the reason for Arjun's depression.

Uttara's face turned pale. She sighed. Pari just left for his chamber. He is sleeping early as he has to get up for his training.

Subhadra sobbed and stood. He will never get over Abhi. I know. He pretends he is fine. But he is not. Where is he? I will go. She started but Ulupi abruptly stopped her placing her hand on her shoulder.

Princess of Panchal is there. If you go his grief will get doubled.

Subhadra was hurt..But Abhi is my son. Isn't it proper for him to share his pain with me?

Ulupi softly explained..Yes.but do you think his pain will lessen if he sees you? He will blame h8mself for not protecting Abhi. Princess will manage. Believe me.

Chitra looked irritated..Why do you call her princess? She is queen age wise also you should stop addressing her so..

Ulupi smiled and retorted. She is princess of Panchal Who was won by my husband and I would like to connect her only to him.

Alli remarked..Truth won't change. What is there in addressing? She is the queen of five..

Rekha nodded her head..Yes Alli you are right. Any way Ulupi Why did you come back? You also should have helped him recover.

Ulupi replied..Not necessary. I want you all to understand why Arjun gets solace with his fireborn. She was his first wife. Together they endured a lot. Surely she will understand him better than all of us. Also she is like a mother to Abhi.

Subhadra nodded with tears. Yes.she loved him more than her sons. Her pain is not less.
Edited by ltelidevara - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
His shoulders are heaving upside down...His face is hidden in her waist..He is shedding tears shaking his head vigorously..Panchali found it difficult to bear his force.
She was afraid she may loose her balance.

Krishnaa I am not a good father. I left him to those jackals. Why did I move away from the battlefield?

Panchali got tears ..they were there in her eyes but now they just rushed out blurring her vision. She bent her face on his curly hair and restlessly rubbed her face.

Jyesht Mata let me inhale your fragrance..Abhi's voice resounded in her ears..

She slowly collapsed on Arjun ..Before he could realise she lost her consciousness.

She was lying half on his lap and half on the lawn.

Arjun was in shock. What happened to his Krishnaa..He bent over her and called her again and again..

There is no response. Arjun realised. It is not easy even for her. Why did he lose his control?He should have restrained himself from exposing his pain..

Arjun wiped her tears with his lips. He gazed at her beautiful face and then observed how thin she became of late. He remembered Sahadev's words..She is anaemic. The long stay at Gangateer and strain spoiled her health.


Arjun brought water from the lake and wiped her face gently. Panchali slowly opened her eyes and understood Arjun's anxiety.

She stretched her hands to him.Arjun instantly curled himself on her tiny form taking care not to hurt her with his weight. He found solace on hearing her heart beat...and it beats only for him
Edited by ltelidevara - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Ulupiii...I love you...
I love your ulupi...but hate others 😡 yes I am selfish , I love only those who loves ArDi..and I can't help it..
But really Ulupi's answers were soo awesome... Sabki bolti bndh hogyi!!😳
Yes Panchali know him more than them..they weren't with Arjun during his bad time but Panchali was..always , how painful it's to leave your children for 13 years ..but Panchali did it because of him...no one else!! She was the ideal wife!!

Please continue soon with ArDi moments I mean how Panchali specify him..wanna know!!
Thanks a lot 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
Brilliant update! Ulipi has always been an ideal wife. She was a selfless and courageous woman who loved Arjun so much.
The conversation amongst the wives was awesome. Yes, Abhi was so close to Draupadi.

Thanks very much for the updates, they were awesome.
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Posted: 7 years ago
How beautiful it was di!! Lovely..splendid.. Awesome👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
Stunning di... Both the updates...
Well... Arjun's wives n their questions... 😕...
N what fitting answers uloopi gave them...
I luv ur uloopi di... She is brilliant...

Yes... Panchali can give solace to Arjun... Bcoz she luvs him like no one does...n knows his every piece of thought...they together have endured so much pain..

N the second part it was lovely... N sooo soothing 😳

Splendid work di...

Continue soon... Waiting eagerly...

Thnx so much di...😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
its good to see the jealosy of the other wives but i would love it even more if they see Arjun caring for Panchali whist she is ill or something...
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Posted: 7 years ago
She did not say anything. He did not hear anything.
He did not say anything. She did not hear anything.

The silence only conveyed each other what the other want to say. Arjuna rolled sideways to give her relief...he is concerned..her tender body can not bear his huge form.
The lawn though silky may hurt her back. He tried to pull her up but she did not oblige.

Panchali gazed at him with concern. The feeling of concern is present there and here..She want to know how he felt shattered..on seeing Abhi. He understood.

Minutes later his husky voice broke the silence and conveyed what she wanted to know.

Panchali listened withattention. Tears blurred her vision. Parth heard her sobs and stopped. He took her in his arms and hugged her close. He knew she loved Abhi more. Her pain is immense.

After a while Arjun lifted her up as if she is a small baby. Her face still has the marks of tears.


To be continued
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Posted: 7 years ago
Sorry didi...I didnot comment earlier due to my unit tests in my school...splendid;wonderful;all d updates are awesome...ardi gave solace 2 each other...hw nyc it is...plz continue soon di n thanks 4 d update

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