Drabble: ChaitraPhaalguni (Arjun-Chitrangada)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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The lovely princess sails over the sandy coast to enter the glittering lake. She looks up at the moon shining in the spectacular ocean of indigo. Lifting her hands in prayer she speaks to the God of ethereal Beauty.

Let mercy mar the manly might,
Nimble grace I choose.
To free the blissful poised delight,
The frisking ways of gentle hues.

The ascetic prince sits lost in the delicate vines singing praises of the princess of the beauteous mountains.
He raises his eyes to skies and prays to the one who, coming down to the level of humans, has again and again proven himself worthy of His title. The prince calls him friend.

Blissful as the warm zephyr,
Fearsome as the squall.
All-knowing, my deific schaffer,
I ask for her withal.

She descends from her mayurpankhi to approach the vineyard with timorous hopes, new as the reticent night. Sweet bells kiss her feet, eager to match the nightingale's tune. The warm winds splatter about the dark tresses that cascade down her shoulders. She advances to mark the rendezvous of the new blossoming boon of cupid.

The prince ascetic turns to face her light footsteps on the shining stream leading her to the alluring groves. Warrior splinters sparkle like the lightning bolts, as the slightly reddish eyes of the prince meet the crystal depths of his princess' kohl-stricken eyes.

The clear blue skies whisk off the petty clouds to disclose the million stars that revel in the union of aptitude and determination.

The moon sends down his ivory wishes for the couple that lay aside their weapons to secure themselves against the danger of missing love kindling so close.

A gentle breeze envelopes them like the sequined odhani to splatter the glory across the brilliant indigo canvas that passes under the midnight curtain.

Wait the two under the vine,
Drenched in the light of Love,
To seek the pleasant, blessed divine,
Assent's showers above.


The Nature smears the garden with happiness to fulfill the song of ChaitraPhalguni.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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NOTE: Chitrangada here is Mahua Roychoudhury in one of her films 'Dadar Keerti' where she enacted, as a part of the film, Tagore's Chitrangada.
And Arjun is of course our own Shaheer Sheikh. :D
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Posted: 8 years ago
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You've Bereft me of all words
And I stand here perplexed
A million hues of ethereal love
O wondrous Poetess, you are so blessed!

...

Simply magical Pro! Heavenly, as you call it. I love love loved it!❤️
Take a bow to thee ⭐️
Edited by Artist_Forever - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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superb update...⭐️⭐️⭐️...so magical......loved it...❤️❤️❤️...thank u 4 pm...😃...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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From which soil are thou born, O' Queen of wordspell?
Seriously man! You are awesome! Just loved the first meet of Arjun and Chitra! Haiioo! Mere aur Arya ke Milan ghadi☺️ Mujhe sharam aa rehi hai!*digs face in hands*

Loved loved and loved it! And what yaar... how could you say not all like them! Well I feel my sautans are burning now...😈 Jalte raho sab, aap sab ki baari bohot baar aa gayi ab meri hai!😎😆
hayy! Chitraphalguni!! mere aur Arya ka ship name!☺️
hats of to you, amazing lady!👏

Love,
Heroine of this drabble*Thug life😎*
Edited by aanvi98 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful Choti. Just Sheer Brilliance.👏
I'm actually just speechless to those vivid descriptions as if it's happening right in front of my eyes! ❤️

You're Too Brilliant To Be So Young! 🤗
Thanks For Pm.
Keep Writing.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

You've Bereft me of all words

And I stand here perplexed
A million hues of ethereal love
O wondrous Poetess, you are so blessed!

...

Simply magical Pro! Heavenly, as you call it. I love love loved it!❤️
Take a bow to thee ⭐️

A rich tribute of an Artist with all authenticity to an enchanting poetess ! 😊
Edited by Viswasruti - 8 years ago
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Team Arjun

Posted: 8 years ago
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Radhika , your rich and resplendent poetic style is as majestic as the love between Arjun and Chitrangada . Thanks for giving us an opportunity to read your gleaming literary works .
Excellent Drabble with smoothly flowing romantic emotions / expressions of love as an undercurrent .
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Write up is beautiful Proteeti. I dunno the bg of it however enjoyed the play of words in your writing.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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beautuful drabble pro
loved it soo much
thanks for the pm dear
very well written

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