Sita's Swayamvar- an OS - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: aanvi98

Res😉 tonight or tomorrow unres pakka!

Unres
Sorry for being sooo late but now I unresed!!😳

Oh god this is so divine! These swayamvaras I say, so beautiful! And you described it sooo beautifully! Just enjoyed the inner turmoil of Sita, with a newly struck arrow of love😳 and also the description of swayamvara.

Those little tiny LaxMila momemts! Aww! Ram looked at Sita. Aww!!! This is so super cute!!! And Lakshman, my angry bird😆 but he seems like a cupid to me and Ram takes the bow...😳 loved it to the core shru!!
Love,
Anu

Swayamvaras are 😳
The credit of all this goes to Kamban and Goswami Tulasidas. I am merely trying to write what they have so beautifully expressed.
Lakshman is the best 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: shabari14

Di aapke haathon me to jaadu hai, jaadu! It was heavenly. Thank you for making this OS based on the other two Ramayans, I was waiting for one like this!

Thank you Gauri 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Tu haina 😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Shivam...

It was such a beautiful update , Cant even describe the feeling , like tingling in my stomach while reading it

Sita and Urmia's bond was the highlight , and that line " Both Knew that they would face it together "

In fact there were a lot of best moments to chose from , the new thing which I havent read anywhere so far was Sita's motherly feelings for Lakshman , that too when he spoke aggressively in favour of Ram to her own father.

Spectacular Spectacular Spectacular👏👏😃

@bold- That is how it is right? Throughout the Ramayana.
Sita's motherly feelings never was spoken of. I added it, for I imagined her feeling that way 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: RadhikaBr.

Woww beautifully written!👏👏 I can visualize everything goddess! Jaimala mein Nij hriday goonth, Siy Rangmanch ki or chali! Awww..lost in GurBina as Ram Siya times!!Great update

Thank you Radhika 🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: babita..

Too little to be called an OS, it's an Epic Shrutha 👏👏

Loved, loved, loved Sita's burning for Ram ! Loved her new experience and her craving to see him, meet him and..
Beautifully expressed Sita's version of feeling the first love at first sight
Loved how you have shown the relation so deep of Sita and Urmila. Both were sailing in the same boat and in love with the respective men of their life !
Awesomely stunning to read the whole epic ! Liked and would love to read more from U ⭐️⭐️

The Swayamvar scene was nicely woven ! Loved to see a motherly affection in the eyes of Sita for Laxman. Loved to see how she saw his reactions and finally her wish got fulfilled with his initiative so divine and so loving !
Ram's eyes meeting her and the blush -- No words to express, felt goosebumps 😳 ❤️

Thanks for making me a part of this version dear, i am obliged ! Loves ❤️

Babita, you make me embarassed 😳
Sita did burn for Rama. That is how love happens.
@bold- Sita-Urmila are a fantastic duo 😳
I loved writing it. Just thinking of this gives me goosebumps. Ramayana does that you knoe. That and Mahabharata 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Beautiful OS Srutha❤️

Thank you Nonie 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: LakshMila

You would never go without divinity,Isn't it?😆

But that is the thing I really admire.
If it had to be a unbiased version of Siya Ke Ram,then to tell you,it has been a success.❤️
Perfect blending of LakshMilness in b/w.
And Siya Ram,you justified the pure love they had.Beautifully penned down the condition of Siya,her thoughts whole while.❤️
Lovely update!

I love writing it that way 😆
Thank you laadli ❤️
I couldn't leave LakshMila like that.

Did I? ☺️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
unres 😆

tha this is amazing

sita's feelings were described so well
nd those lakshmila moments

I was mesmerized darling ,, I felt as if I was standing over there and watching the incidents taking place


keep writing dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: Anokhisharma

unres 😆

tha this is amazing

sita's feelings were described so well
nd those lakshmila moments

I was mesmerized darling ,, I felt as if I was standing over there and watching the incidents taking place


keep writing dear

Thank you my Anokhu 🤗

You know me. LakshMila is always a part of my stories 😉

Really? 😳

Do I ever stop? 😆

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