OS: You are my Saviour (Kunti-Pandu) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: amritat

Beautifully written dear.

The ending was astounding.

Keep up the great work...



Thank you Amritadi! Glad you liked it!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Awesome OS Proteeti😃
This is the first time I am reading on Pandu and Kunti❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Good one Radhike , you've explored something new. .
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Excellent OS Radhika . The inner conflict of a princess who stands there with a garland in her hand , with many recollections churning her mind at that moment , an unmarried mother's longing for her long lost son , a devotee's obligation to follow the orderly declaration of her future role in the upcoming conflict between Dharam and Adharma ! A defining moment in the Epic Mahabharatha , well written OS with great imagination . Every word and sentence is a Gem indeed .🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Beautiful os Pro ! 👏 Brilliantly written. The dilemma of a mother and a princess . Loved how you simply yet so beautifully described the events and Kunti's state of mind .
Keep writing such os 😳
And I must say the banner is so gorgeous . Damn attractive 😉
Love
Sam
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Beautifully Written Choti. 👏
You've beautifully shown her thought process, her Swayamvar, her agony as a mother for Karna was amazing.

Thanx For Pm.
Keep Writing.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Wonderfully written OS Proteeti !
I always admire your unique way of writing . ❤️
Please gift us more and more such splendid write-ups .😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
This is totally a new dimention pro! Loved it!!
The way yiu described kunti was amazing. Suddenly my heart wrenched for that poor lady! Got squized between date and reality!
And the pandu description was excellent! Thoight the word 'pale' is common, but adding the handsomeness it made the complextion a beauty.

And the last one, all in ome was just... *clap*!!!

BTW, the sage is sgae durvasa, isn't it?
Love,
Anu
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
That is a lovely story of Kunti-Pandu...I love Kunti thought process...and you described it beautifully.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Beautifully written dear
Loved it
Nice banner
The dilemma was presented aptly.
Choosing between her child and saviour is really difficult, you've penned it nicely.
Thanks for pm

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